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21st March 2013 episode when ram is not able to meet his family in picnic bcz of ashwinso my os start when our beautiful priya call ram
Priya- hello Mr. Kapoor
Ram- hello darling. Before ram further say priya cut him
Priya- where are u Mr. Kapoor? Pihu is missing u
Ram- yaar abhi office mein hu an wait kar rha hu ashwin ka subha se. Wait a minute only pihu miss kar rhi hai aur koi nahiour hitler priya back
Priya- maine kaha tha mat javo ashwin apko pareshan krne ke liye ye sab kar rha hai per aap meri baat kuy suno ge na
Ram with cute golu look - arrre yaar kitna daat rhi ho sorry yaar tumhe pta hai na tum gusse mai bikul acchi nahi lagti ek smile do nano expression change in priya
Ram-apne cute polar bear ke liye bhi nahi krogi priya khush hoti hai ram ke cute antic par but kuch nahi kehti
Ram- toh thik hai tumhe aab tumhare polar bear se bilkul pyar nahi hai na so bye
Priya- kay mr kapoor aap bhi na bilkul chote baby ki trha krte ho ok i forgive u an bye pihu wait kar rhi hogi
Ram- arr ruko phele mere Question ka ans toh do   
Priya-konsa Q
Ram- sirf pihu mujhe miss kar rhi hai kya aur koi nahi
Priya-nahi aur bhi koi hai na
Ram- kon
Priya- dadi ,maa, all family member   
RAM ask with cute golu face aur koi nahi
Priya- aur kone krega with smile on face
Ram- aur tum
Priya- mai nahi kar rhi hu(dil mai bahot jada)
Ram-ok toh mai jaldi ana chatat tha but jise miss krna chahiye vahi miss nahi kar rhi hai tho thik hai
Priya-oh aap jaldi aa rhe ho i miss u aab toh aajvo na mr. Kapoor
Ram-ab kaise admit kiya ki miss kar rhi ho.
Priya- toh mai admit kru isliye apne jhuta bola
Ram- toh kya krta tum sach bolne keliye tyara nahi thi toh. Ok bye i love u darling Priya-no reply
Ram-arre reply toh do ki mai call cut kar sku
Priya- apne jhut bola na toh aab mai nahi kehne wali an bye
Ram- Sacchi nahi kahogi
Priya- nahi an bye.an cut the call.
Priya-hadd hai phele mana kiya phir bhi gye aab jaldi ane ko kha toh bhi jhut bola rha hai. Mai apse bilkul baat nahi krungi Mr. Kapoor.Priya yhi sab soch rhi hoti hai tabhi koi use piche se hug krta hai jaise hi priya turn krti hai toh shock ho jati hai bcz hmre ramji smile krte huye naughtly priya ki aur dekha rhe hote hai.
Priya- aap yha kaise i mean abhi toh phone per hum baat kar rhe tha aur aap yha kaise
Ram- kya kru yaar meri wife i love u khene ke liye tyar nahi toh bichra pati kya kre agaya sab chodke
Priya ek hitler look deti hai toh
ram with golu look say yaar sach mai jab tumne call kiya tab mujhe lga ki tum gussa ho yaar priya mai ye sab tumhare an pihu ke liye kar rha hu aab tum dono hi kush nahi ho toh phir isa sab keliye koi mtlab nahi hai so an tumse i love u sune ke liye mai kuch bhi kar skta hu darling toh chod kar aagya sab
Priya- but ashwin
Ram-usko mro goli lekin use mujhe thanks kehna chiye
Priya-kuy
Ram-bcz of him aaj mujhe pta chla na ki meri wife aab Mr. Kapoor baan gyi hai jo baat baat per gussa krti hai
Priya- sorry. An hug ram
Ram-arr aab toh bol do yaar
Priya- i love u ram. Thanks 4 everything. Ram smiling and give tight hug to Priya                  
THE END

I know this is worst. My 1st attempt so bear it. I'm try my best sorry for spelling mistakes & if u want to give tomato and all things are welcome. I'm not writer yaaro.      Edited by ARUJI - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
Very cute part pls keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
Arrey if you cal this worst then defo you must be an awesome writer... It is too good yaar...
Please do write more...
Thanks for PMπŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey its awesome yaar
Do write more
M waiting for ur ff

BTW can I suggest few things if u r OK with it
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow..superb yaar arushi.
do write more raya stories.
mast story. ekdum jhakkkasss.
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Posted: 9 years ago
πŸ‘Hey dats nice arushi, infact great as a first attempt.
πŸ‘ keep writing.
suggest u to write in para. wo dat its easy for the readers.
thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb OS πŸ‘ Do write more nd thanks for the pm
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This content was originally posted by: dhristikpd

Very cute part pls keep writing

thanks yaar
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This content was originally posted by: rags06

Arrey if you cal this worst then defo you must be an awesome writer... It is too good yaar...

Please do write more...
Thanks for PMπŸ˜›πŸ˜›

thanks for encouragement I will try 4 writing
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This content was originally posted by: priyajan12

Hey its awesome yaar

Do write more
M waiting for ur ff

BTW can I suggest few things if u r OK with it

thanks for reply. plz tell na what you want to suggest