|| FF: Motu aur Patloo Ki Jodi || PART 4 on Pg 13 NOTE PG 20 (7 Oct)

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Posted: 2015-03-05T08:21:54Z

Hello Friends

M back with a new story

hope you all like it

I know mera ek FF aur SS pending hai

par mujhe kuch idea aa nhi rha hai usse aage badhaane ka

so took a break from it


Coming to the story

The story belongs our Ram Priya aka Raya

Well isme Priya is forced into a marriage with Ram by her family

Priya ke ek Prince charming k sapne jo Ram kahi se bhi fulfill nahi karta hai

So she does nt accept him as her husband as Ram is a plump guy


Priya Ram se shaadi nahi krna chaahti par family ke dabaao mai aakr karti hai

Ram ko toh pehli hi nazar mei Priya se pyaar ho jaata

aur waise bhi koan itni sundar ladki ko thukraaye


Ram sochta hai ki woh Priya ko apne dil ki baath shaadi ke baad bataega

par bta nhi pata hai

kyuki usse pta chalta hai ki Priya usse pyaar hi nhi krti hai

pyaar chodo woh toh usse apna husband bhi nahi maanti hai


So this story is about how Priya after her marriage accepts Ram as her husband and falls in love with him


The story is filled with comedy emotions romance ( i ll try but not the passionate romance as woh is story ke innocence ko affect karegi)


Ram fans m apologizing in advance as I all make Ram s. Weight fun


Will try to update whenever m free

Enjoy


Cheers 

Priya


INDEX

Introduction...Pg 1

PART 1...Pg 1

PART ...Pg 4

PART 3...Pg 7

PART 4...Pg13

Edited by RaizadaPriya - 2015-10-07T12:36:57Z
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Posted: 2015-03-05T08:23:29Z

motoo aur pataloo kee jodee 

naa dhelaa naa damadee naa kaudee 


motoo ke pet men bhookh bharee hai

taayar ke jaise bhookh bharee hai

pataloo to mar jaaye moongafalee se 

bachake nikal jaaye patalee galee se 


dil kee sadk hain chaudee 

motoo aur pataloo kee jodee 


pnkh binaa bhee ud jaate hain 

har mushkil men jud jaate hain 

haath pakad ke chadh jaate hain 

gaadee yaa ho ghodee

motoo aur pataloo kee jodee 










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Edited by priyajan12 - 2015-03-05T08:29:58Z
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Posted: 2015-03-05T08:33:57Z
Awww my favourite cartoons yaar u r writing in this ff great yaar priya pls continue soon
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Posted: 2015-03-05T10:16:38Z
great start priya rsm se shadi nahi karna chahti hai phir bhi karli,interesting continue soon.
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Posted: 2015-03-05T10:24:36Z
intereating concept. jaldi jaldi upsates dena ha plz. mujhe pm karna agli baar.
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Madhuri Dixit and Sakshi Tanwar....FOREVER FAVOURITES
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Posted: 2015-03-05T10:25:13Z
intereating concept. jaldi jaldi updates dena ha plz. mujhe pm karna agli baar.
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Madhuri Dixit and Sakshi Tanwar....FOREVER FAVOURITES
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Posted: 2015-03-05T10:38:25Z
Nice start!!!
Continue sooon!!
And thanks 4 pm!!
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Posted: 2015-03-05T10:58:24Z
hey priya just amazing part u remind me my childhood memories and Yes pickachu mine fav Pokemon tooo



dont know y but tears brings in my eyes as i missed those bachpan ke din superbbb start waiting for next update do pm me on FB or IF when u next update i m eagerly waiting for next update  



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