Finally, caught up with all the updates.
Nisha,you are an amazing story teller but I feel you specially excel
in the emotional moments. Nothing melodramatic but just in a subtle way, you
touch the right chord which makes it so touching. Just noting some which stood
out for me.
Savvy
I am so happy you included "Savvy". I wanted it so badly,
for him to miss her during his wedding, wondering how it would be if she were
around. Really felt like diving into the fiction and giving him a bear hug. πWas
so touching! It would be a wonderful moment if he could tell II maybe sometime
during or after the wedding that II would have been her choice too.ππΌ
Last night of freedom
II and Rajan bonding
again beautifully. He sharing his desire to see Manny being married and all his
kids settle down. II is indeed becoming his emotional support.
Nerves
Amma talking emotionally to Vandu about what a vacuum II
would leave after leaving DII .She is so proud now to have R&B as her SIL,
just the man who could handle her challa kutti in the right way.π³
II narrating the happenings to Periappa is so adorable. She
is so deeply attached to everyone. I really feel for her. Oh how she is going
to miss DII!π
Great Aunt's Best Bud
R&B thinking of his Ma again while meeting Great Auntys
DIL. He seems to be missing her badly.π Good to hear Punjabi banter for a
change. You did great for an Iyer Nish.ππΌ
Manny and Sam are both emotional and happy for their brat of a brother finally
finding someone to look after him. Manny still skeptical but with time she will
be as happy as Sam for him.π
Haldi
The Haldi striptease was a treat for all except for him π.
But, loved the moment when Ranjan is pushed by chachu to apply haldi for his
son. R&B taking blessings from his father, a rare moment captured by an
emotional Sam. Her hands shook and the image blurred. Beautiful.π
Insides the Gates
R&B arriving at Sringeri Temple and being stared at in
wonder by the Iyer families. He looking at the poster and reminiscing about the
day he stood at the same spot and made up his mind and destiny. Another
beautiful moment.π
Magnifique
R&B ki aane ki deri hai, all her senses are on an overdrive. What all goes in her mind in seconds , from fury to erotic fantasy
to how she will wear her nine yards saree if she dies. π€£She is one of a kind, a Single Piece and a magnificent one at that ! π
See you all tomm morning.
PS: Also,Love the small seemingly insignificant things which you add but which really adds to the flavour of the story like the 'bahadur' doing his night rounds, (brought back memories of our Nepalese bahadur in our sector), or Manny checking with Bala about how many rooms were avaible while on the phone or the athais and mamis' sitting on chaddars chatting outside the brides room. Just loved it.
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