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Posted: 9 years ago

Hellooo all...!!!! 
Sry fr not cmmntng on ur ff's...
Iam in between my sem finals...will come back soon...once iam done wid xams..!!!! Promise...!!!

And this os is fully dedicated to mini...
For the reasns obv to all... 

Haappyyy bdy drlnn..!!!! :* 
Luv u...!!!! alwys...!!!!!

Hope u like this... :p :p :p


After 7 longs years...!!!! back from come...!!!! 

Its been some tym now that priya is back from coma in her full senses and memories. She obsrved tht evrybdys daily routine has now chnged. She felf jealous... jealous over juhi as she has now occupied her place, if not completly but almost. Though she reminded herslf that ram was still her man, her female heart couldnt stop the jeaously it felt evrytym she sees them toghthr.


And then she looked down, she again saw then togthr laughing over something. She wanted to kick this woman out of their lives... but alas she cldnt do. It was this woman who took care of her family in her absence.


She leaned in a bit to see what they were doin and wat was there to laugh about. But then ushe could see nothing.. Only the 4 new frnds..yeah neha and vikram became juhi's frnds laughing on some thing and ram blushing. Though she somehow now undrstood that the topc was her...but the lil jealous part of her dint want to accpt that fact. She wanted to knw


Stamping her foot unable to control her curiosty she moved downstairs tiptoed into the living area to chck out wats happng. 


All tht was visible from the place of hideout was her picture as ram's lappy wallpaper. Her lips started to curve...a smile adorned her face...knowing they were teasing him about her and he was there blushing all red. But then she wanted to knw the whole matter and so titoed furthr... feeling her prsnce ram looked through the crnr of his eyes and saw how she was tryng to spy on them... immeditly he shut his laptop and sgnlld evry1 of priya's prsnce. 


Understnd his gesture evrybdy kpt quiet. Feeling djctd she turned back when ram called her.


Ram- priya kya hua wapis kyun ja rhi ho???;

Her trck came to a sdn stop and she bits her lips knowng that she's caught.


She turned back 


Stammerd - woo...woo...main..kuch nhi...bas dadi ne khaa aapko bulaun toh...but  looks like u guys are bsy in smthng toh... 


Ram turned his head- dadi aapne mujhe bulaya ???? Mein toh aapke samne hoon... fir aapne priya se kyun khaa mujhe bulane... 
Dadi- nhi golu meine nhi kuch nhi kha... 
Priya was now under total shock...as..vik neha moved aside and she cld see the complt family smiling at her from the dining table


She mentally kickd herslf for not chckng properly..

Ram- par priya ne toh khaaa...looks at priya... 
She undrstnds that ram has caught her off-guard...glares at him...grittng her teeth. 
Priya-mein...mein aati hoon...!!! And runs from der... 

All laugh...

neha-fatty u r gonna be a deadmeat... jaaa manaaa use ab...

Ram- smirks

Reaching his room, prays to the almighty to save him from his wife's wrath.

Steppng into the room,
Ram
-slowly, priya...??? 
Looks aur not finding her calls in a lil hghr volume.. priyaaa...???

He could hear the sounds of payal from changing room...

Moving in there, goes towards her...

Ram- priyaa...
Priya
...looks at him wid anger and goes away. 
Ram
- priyaa pls...!!! 
Priya
 turns back... but still only her angry looks remain the answer.
Ram catches hold of her both hands... putting them on his shoulder mover nearer... and cricles his hand on her slender waist...pulls her more closer... but then she remains uneffcted... her eyes still showing anger.
Ram
-kya huaaa... gussa ho... 
Priya
 jus turns and looks other side...

Ram- dekhooo plsss... gussa mat ho...ise hi mazak krrhy thy...

Priya-hgyaaa hasna aur blush krna???

Ram- sorrryyy... 
Hey wait...mtlab tum tab se whaaa chupke se dekh rhi thi????
Kyun chup chup ke... ;)

Juhi comes into their room callng ram...chckng in mobile...
Juhi
-ram, client cal hain...and looks up and finds ram and priya gettng back to their normal posture listng to her voice... looks down...

Ram- haaan...bolo juhi... 
Juhi
-wo ram actually ek client ka call aaya
Ram
-haan...ok. tum chalo mein abhi aata hoon. 


Turning to priya, 

Ram
-priya bas once the deal is finalized... we will b leavng to attend a party. A buissiness party. Be ready. ;)
Priya
-smirk. We means...!!! 
Ram
- we means...u & me.
Priya
-ohhh... me...!!! Laughs sarcastc.
Ram
- what did u think???
Priya
-these days we is usually being used for u and ur khas dost. Rolling eyes...
Ram
-kaun khas.??? :o 
Priya
-realsng he's gettng late...abhi aapko late nhi ho rha call k liye... jao. We will talk later.
Ram
-chckng his watch...oh yeah. Thnx fr reminding. Looks loke sm1 is jealous here while Evry1 out der are jealous over u... ;) 
Pickng up the nearst pillow priya thrws it on ram...getout...!!! 
Catchng the pillow... he laughs...and tell careful drln...byee...luv u...gives a flyng kiss...

Priya sits on the bed smiling to herslf. she wanted to dressup at her best. She felt jealous... she knew juhi will also b presnt in the party...there was no way...she will b allowng her man's attntn to dvrt from her... 
Cmmn priyaaa gear up...be ur best...she said to herslf.

She went downstairs to tell dadi and mom that they will b out...though she knew juhi must have alrdy infrmed...

Downstairs, 
She sees krishna and dadi gettng ready & neha & vikram alrdy left without infrmng her. Strange.
Priya- khi ja rhyyy aap dono. 
Dadi- haan priya puttar. Satsang hain toh ja rhy...aane mein late hoga... theek hain... 
Priya- ok dadii...no problem. Mr.kapoor ka bhi kuch  bussiness meetng hain toh hum bhi niklngy kuch 1hr mein... 
Krishna - theek hain betaa...tab tak hum aajyngy wapis. 
Priya - abhi nikl rhy aap??? 
Krishna- haan beta. Chalo hum nikalty. Tum dono khyal rakhnaa apnaa.
Priya- haan ma. 
Krishna- bye beta
Dadi-bye priya puttar.

Priya sees them off to their car, waves them bye as they leave...


Moves into house..

Soumya- bhabhi. Soumya call out
Priya
-haan soumya..
Soumya
- wo rishab ka call aaya... kuch kaam hain...toh mein nikal rhii... priya-ohh...ok soumyaa.. hum bhi niklngy in some tym...
Soumya
- ok bhabhi... byeee... 
Priya
- byee... winkng...have nice tym.. 
Soumya
- same to u bhabhii..  winks... byee...

Priya moves to her room...
Priya to herslf lookng at watch... cmmn priyaaa get ready...u have to b ur best.

Sees that there's a box gft wrapped on bed. Guessing it must be from ram for the party, opens the box, to find a beautiful white saree with a note.


Priya, 
A small gft from ur mr.kapoor. hoping to see my love soon.
Ram.

Smiling to herslf...takes the gft...and smiles to herslf.

Moves intoo washroom...

Pmperng herslf in warmwater for quite some tym...comes out aftr her long shower. 


Starts dressng up fr the party. 
But like alwys gets in to trouble with her hook. 


Just then ram steps in the room..stands rooted... water slightly dripping from her hair... her lil frustrated face...and her everlastng hook problem. 


Slowly moves behind her... catches hold of the hook.
Priya
 shocked looks up - aap...!!! Red clr slwly filling her face that therz no need of a seperate blush.
Lockng the hooks... ram circles his hand over her waist...pulls her closer to him...nuzzling her... hmmm...felt like smbdy needed my hlp...and iam here...slowly bites the juncture of nech and shoulder.

Priya- aah...ram..!!! Not now...leave me...turning to him... kisses on his cheek...thanks fr the help... now go..get ready... mujhe bhi ready hona hain...

Ram- looks like my wife is in mood.winking.
Priya
-blushes. Hmmm...nhi jaate na ye party mein. We will go smwer else. U have been v.busy... i miss u... hugs ram tghtly. Her mood compltly down. 
Ram
-  makng her stand back..holding her face in his palms... dekhooo...to b with u only...i have been compltng my meetngs faster...evn iam missing u...bas ye party hojayy... iam totally free... pls jaaan...this party is being arngd by one of the imp clients. Only one... plsss...

Priya-smiling...ok... abhi ap ready hojao. 
Ram
- thats like my girl..hugs her...

By the tym ram gets ready...priya finishes her final touches... blushng...thinkng of his reactn...

Ram comes out...looking no less than an angel...priya turned back hearng sound... 
Ram was gazing at her without a blink...
She blushed deep... 
Coming to her... he kneeled... forwadng his hand...mrs.priya ram kapoor...my luv... mind gng on a date with me..!!!

Puttng her hand in his... mrs.priya ram kapoor is alwys ready to go on a date wid u mr.ram kapoor. 
Standng... took her face in palm...kisses her forehead...u r looking beautiful. 
Priya looking down...thankyou...

Ram-forwadng hand...chale drln.

Priya keeps her hand in his...as he leads the way...

Coming out of their.mansion priya finds a new jaguar car waiting... 
Priya
- ye car??? 
Ram
-  hmm...new one...;) psnd aaya??? 
Priya
- haaan...lkn ab kyun??? 
Ram
- uff...kitne sawal puchti ho yaar. Bas meri drln wife k liye lene ka mann kia aur abhi abhi markt mein release hua...i orderd. 
Priya
- mere liye :o 
Ram
- joining hands...meri ek hi wife hain... toh tumhare liye hiii... 
Priya
- hahahahaa...thank you... lkn kya spl???
Ram
- pta thaaa meri drln wife mujhe miss kr rhi...for being too bsy...isliye sochaa gft karlun.. 
Priya
- wah... mr.ramkapoor.
Ram
- hehehehe...chale...!!! 
Priya
- haan chaliye..!!!

Aftr a long drive in the city outskrts...
Priya
- yha party??? Itni door??? 
Kaunse client rhty aapke..!!!

Ram- bas paunch gy drln. 
Priya
- koi raat k 12 ko.party krta kya.. 
Ram
- ab kya kare drln... buissines parties u see... kuch bhi ho sktaa...
Priya
- uff this buissiness.
Ram laughs..

As they reach the venue the wide gates...
The building dcrted wid lghtss

They park their car...ram.come out and opens the door for.priya.
Ram
- chaliye madam. 
Priya
- haha...thankyou sir...

Entwining their  hands... they walk inside... as the guard opn door. Theres nthng but darkness... priya clutches rams hand tghtly. 
Priya
- ye kaisi party hain ram. Koi nhi hain yha...aur sab dark...
Ram
- mujhe kya ptaa jaaan.
Priya
- aapko hi toh pta hogaa...aapke client ka.party hain
Ram
-laughing...arey abhi 12 hone mein 2min hain naa..isliye party shuru nhi hua. 
Priya
-uff ram..tum logo k buissines meatngs tum log hi jaane. 
Ram- rofls

As the clock strikes 12...a tune starts playing wid the chorus...happy birthdaayyy priyaa...and the lights come...and priya can see her complete family and also the rams bussines associates...singing for her.. the red helium balloons touchng the roof... and the clred ribns attchd to it...makng the hall look beautiful... 
While some balloons cvrd the floor...

Shocked for some tym... she looks up at ram
Ram smiles kissing her forehead. 
Happy bdy priya. 
Priya looks into mb to chck the date. Shocked that she herslf forgt her bdy as she was caried away by the jealousy.

A slow smile starts adorning her face as ram.pulls her into hug. 
Whispers. Mdam...aaj aapkaa bdy hain... happyy bdy jaaan.

Chale andr... 
She looks at the gathering..  
As they enter she obsrvd that the whole buidlng in white.. the big chandelier hanging in the center but a wall had a red satin cloth cvrng it. She felt that odd... but Her family was waiting for her in the center wid candle glowing on the three tier cake. 
Ram leads her to the cake... 
Cmmn drln. 
Priya cuts the cake. While evrybdy clap And takes a piece to ram.smiles..
Slwoly saying thankyou...

Evryone wish her happy bdy while ram nvr left her sidee... 
Rishab announces a couple dancee...  and ram asks her fr a dance...
Ram
- chale bdy grl...my lovelyy wifeee... 
Priya
- wat if i say no... 
Ram
- hmm... he moves from der.
Priya to herslf.-ye kyaa...ise kyun chlygy...

Taking mike from rishab... 
Ram
- evyrone...attntn pls...   i have a req to make to my lovely wife... kneeling befr priya...
Priya, my luv, can i have the opprtunity to dance wid u...

Priya embrssd... getup mr.kapoor
Ram
- ahaan...frst acpt. Forwds his hand.

Rishab, nuts, soumya, karthik... shout...bhabhi accpt krloo naa... bhai kitne ache se req kr rhy...

Priya- yes... whsprs pls getup...

Lghts dim... as the music starts... 
Taking her hands...slides on his shoulder, and slides his hands on her slender waist pullng her closer... sending shivers down her spine... looks up at him...
Priya
- toh ye hain aapki buissiness party... 
Ram
- haan... my most imprtnt client and buissines is u drln... hua naa buissines party..  
She hits his shoulder...

And slwly hugs him and they contn dancing...

Neha vikram come closer to the couple... neha coughs... 
Neha
- uhu uhu...coughing... yha sab hain madam... apka romance baadmein contn krlenaa... akele akele mein.. 
Brkng hug... priya blushes... 
Ram and vikram laugh...

Ram- chalo priyaa... tunhare liye ek aur srprse hain...

Takng mike... gathrng evrybdys attntn... 
Ram
- attntn evrybdy...
Priya
- kya hain... 
Ram
- shhh...!!! 
Neha
- have patience priya... ;) ;) 
Ram taking a remote presses a button...

The wall in cvrd in red satin opens up... 
And there is a life size painting of priyaa...

Priya- shocked...ram...!!!!!
Ram
- this was done when u were in come priya. Whenevr i missed u...i came here and used to paint... 7yrs widout u was a hell... and this was the only source wer i cld help myslf... tears in his eyes...threateng to come down.
Evrybdy there was overwhlmd wid their love... evrybdys eyes moistnd... 
Priya hugged ram tghtly... not carng of others... all she wanted was comfrtng in his arms...

Evrybdy clapped for their bond.

The party ended...and evrybdy startd to leave only the family left behind.

Neha- chalo.hum sab bhi chalty hain ab..
Dadi
- haan chaloo bht latee hgya...
Priya puttar apna khyal rakhna... 
Neha
-happy bdy priyaa... 
Priya
- ty nehaa... arey hum bhi chal rhy na...
Neha
- tum kha... 
Priya
- aur kha ghar... 
Neha
- hehehe...madam... aap aur aapke patidev khi nhi ja rhy... srf hum sab ja rhy.. 
Priya
-mtlab..
Neha
-whisprng...aaj aapka bdy haim madam...private tym u see...fatty toh kab se wait kr rhaa... tumhare sath tym spnd krne. 
Priya blushing... kyaneha tum bhi.

Neha laughng... khyal rakhnaa...;) ;) madam... !!!

Evrybdy leave..leavng raya... 

Priya locks the door and turns... 
Only to b jammed between wall and ram.
Ram
- kab se wait kr rhaaa...sabke jaane k liye... 
Happy bdy priya...bends his head and takes her lips without gvng her a momnt to respnd.

Priya slides her hand into his hairs... grippng them tghtly... pullng him more into her...thankng him for evrythng.

Brkng for air...both gasp fr air... touchng their foreheads... look at each othr. 
Priya slwly leans frwd and kisses lghtly on his lips...thankyou ram..
Ram bends kissing on her neck... nuzzles her shoulder... 
Theres lot more drln... winkng at her...
Lifts her from ground...in his arms... moves to their bedroom upstairs... 
While priya circles her hand around his nech...digging her head into his chest.

Kickng the door of his room... he carried her inside... plcng her on  bed...came over her...  
Circlng her hand over his neck pulled him on her... 
Ek min... one more...;) ;) 
Laid beside her...  and swtched on the buttn and a slideshw startd on the roof... 
Priyas lips turned to the shape of O seeing the video... it consisted of their her childhood pics to their marrge to their intimate pics...

As the video ended...priyas eyes clouded wid tears... hugged ram tghtly... seeing how much he missed her these 7 yrs..!!!! 
Iam sorry ram...iam sooo sorry...startd sobbing.. 
Ram
- cmmn drln...aaj tumhra bdy han and u r back aftr so long... stop cryng...njy ur day...kissed her forehead... 
Priya
-thankyou ram... thankyou so much... 
Ram
-sshhh...keepng a fngr on her lips...
Priya liftd herslf...kssing him deep... ram turned priya came over her...holding her tght in his arms...lik tym later... brkng the kiss... startd kissing all over face...

as the moon faded into clouds... the breeze providing the needed atmsphere... making the nyt young fr the duo...
the wait and passion of seven long years melting...resltng the union of 2bodies...sleepng under the duvets...making it one of the most memorable nyts...!!! and  to wake up for a new dawn of their lifes...for the beautiful life ahead...!!!! 


the end...

ty all for bearing this... 😆 😆

Posted: 9 years ago

Superb update...
Hayeee 
Ram k lappy mein priya ka pic😳
Pc wo kaun sa pic tha😆
Wo jo tumhare mb mein hai😆
Lol
Priya j ho rhi😆
Wo bhi us juhi k karn😆
Dadi bula rhi acha bahana tha ram ko bulane ka😉
Waise priya bula kyun rhi thi😉
Ufff...ye juhi yha bhi😡
Raya ko akle rehne hi nhi deti KK😡
Wah raam kya kya mast planning tha👏
Oye ram ne priya kaa pic banaya😲
Ram babu painter kb se ban gye😆
Pc tumne banake to nhi diaa na😆
Lovely gift jaanu😳
Priya bhi yhi boli hogi aur mai bhi yhi bol rhi 😳
Tq jaanu itne pyare os k liye 🤗
143❤️ye mera wala 143 hai😆
Muahhh...
Edited by SouLScOREr - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
very nice concept...👏
 beautifully penned down...
juhi ko ek hi line diya... good...😆
business meeting..😆
heyy nice gifts yaar...!! ram painter ban gaya kya?😆
good one..😊
Edited by jodude - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice OS
Jealous part was nice.
How dare juhi enter without knocking the door😡
no juhi afterwards but I wanted to see her face😆
surprise birthday for Priya😉
Raat ke 12 baje meeting😆 PC kahi dekha hai kya😆
PC aage likho na😆
Nicely penned down
thanks for no PM😡
Edited by sandhyasn - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Very romantic OS pls keep writing
Posted: 9 years ago
superbb OS jealousy part superbbb
do write more

TY FOR PM
Edited by aman.anjaan - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Jealousy is another form of love which Priya was feeling while seeing Ram Juhi together. Being a naughty and loving husband he is not missing any chance to tease her along with his friends Neha Vik. But as her birthday come a surprise made her surprise to witness the love of her husband...
Posted: 9 years ago
finally i am done..
sorry for  late yaar..
busy ..
superb os..jealous priya great...
thank u for ur pm
all the best for xam
Posted: 9 years ago
Pc welcome back 
bang wali update 
the jelousy her hesitaion 

dadi wala trick 😆 

lol rofls .. 😉 superb one 

loved Rams whole drama .. to make the party surprise 
awww
that was so sweet .. 

loved it 
thanks for pm 

sorry for late reply 

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