OS- Chahu Mein Yaa Naah - Page 4

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by sandhyasn


Baap re itne achhe achhe naam mere liye๐Ÿ˜†
dekho Ram kitne gentelmen hai. Priya ko comfortable karane ke liye game khel rahe hai๐Ÿ˜†
Priya hi jeeti hogi๐Ÿ˜‰
aage likhne ka problem tha...koi aur saamne aa raha tha likhte waqt๐Ÿ˜†
haan tumhare liye...pata nahi chala kya padte waqt๐Ÿ˜ณ
thanks for comments๐Ÿ˜ก...agar aaj comment nahi karti toh padti bhi nahi๐Ÿ˜ก

Hahahah
Tumhare naam hai to tumhe hi bolungi na๐Ÿ˜†
Haan priya smart hai jitegi hi๐Ÿ˜†
KK comments kri na
Ab bhi gussa ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜•
Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful OS Sandhya...๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

So realistic...Priya's hesitation and Ram's reaction...he just plays along with her...lovely...

Wonderfully written.  Eager to read more of ur works.

Thanks for the pm.
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by luvsakshi


Wowww sandyyy 


super duper os from you 
 haha this time i think im the last person to comment ๐Ÿ˜† 

lol very sorry  for that 
but super simply superb os 
while reading the OS i have two names in my mind i imagined them only ๐Ÿคฃ
i think you know who are those ๐Ÿ˜† 

lovely start with priya's nature and how the things will go in a family while seraching for matches 
how weird matches she will get 
wah wah superb 
Ram gave her sweet time and made her understand 
giving sometime  and making her his 

superbly penned down 


once again happy birthday mini .. 


NO...this time madhu is last.
Haan mein janti hoon woh do kon hai๐Ÿ˜†. Mein kya malu bhi janti hai kon hai woh dono ko.๐Ÿ˜†
Muje maza aaya likhkar๐Ÿ˜†.
Thanks for comments๐Ÿค—
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by lalmadhu


Wonderful OS Sandhya...๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

So realistic...Priya's hesitation and Ram's reaction...he just plays along with her...lovely...

Wonderfully written.  Eager to read more of ur works.

Thanks for the pm.
Thanks for comments ๐Ÿค—
will try to write ๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 8 years ago


awesome too good story & concept dear just loved the way RaYa's relationship come from which to where they were stringer turned into and lovers... made it more beautiful just simply loved it awesome... but it was indeed awesome update to read really enjoyed through out the part... so waiting now for next...

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