OS- Chahu Mein Yaa Naah

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Posted: 2015-02-10T11:29:50Z
This OS Im dedicated to my sweet lovely friend Mini aka SoulScorer on her birthday.
Mini this one for you hope u will like itWink
 
 
OS- Chahu Mein Yaa Naah
 

Priya:- 

She belongs to a middle class family. She is Very simple and Single. She never say No to marriage but she rejectedevery proposal. Why..?? what's her problem ??...let's see...

Daily routine in Sharma house,

Shipra:- Priyaaa...kabse bula rahi hoon utt beta subah ke 8 bajj gaye hai...Aaj tuje classes ke liye nahi jana hai kya

Priya:- Utt rahi hoon maa...kitna chillati ho subah subah.

Shipra:- Priya jab tu sasural chali jaayegi toh eise hi 8 baje tak soti rahegi kya

Priya murmurs "shuru ho gayi...shaadi, sasural bachhe..uff log shaadi karte kyun hai"

Shipra:- tu meri baat sunn rahi hai kya

Priya(irritatingly):- Utt rahi hoon maa...aap bhi na subah subah shuru ho jaati hai...she checks time and said "Uff aaj bhi late ho jaayega...she quickly jumps out from bed and went to get ready".

 

At Dinner table::

Shipra:- Chal abb jaldi se nashta kar le

Priya:- Nahi maa...late ho gaya hai mein bahar se kuch khaa lungi

Shipra:- Abb dekha na...tuje mein subah se uthne ke liye bol rahi hoon aur abb dekh nashta bhi karne ka time nahi hai

Priya:- Ok maa Im sorry...she kisses on Shipra's cheeks, who is still angry on her daughter 

Shipra:- Achha sunn...class khatam hote hi jaldi aa jaana

Priya:- Haan maa...and please class ke time call matt karna...bahut odd lagta hai.

Shipra:- Aur sunn aate waqt garma garam samosa aur pakode lete aana

Priya:- Kyun maa koi aane wala hai

Shipra:- Haan...sham ko tuje dekhne ladke wale aa rahe hai

Priya:-ohh Goddd..aap bhi na...abb kon aa raha hai

Shipra:- Kya god...teri umrah ke sabhi logo ki shaadi ho chuki hai...bachhe bhi ho chuke hai aur tu abb bhi shaadi ka naam sunte hi ohh god keh rahi hai...chupchap se class khatam hone ke baad ghar aa jaana.

Priya left in anger.

 

 

In the institute Priya is sitting in office engrossing in some thought. Neha came and sat beside her.

Neha:- Kya baat hai Priya...tu itni khoyi khoyi kyun hai

Priya:- Maa ne phirse kahi se ek naya rishta lekar aayi hai

Neha:- Toh isme itna udas hone ki kya baat hai...tu shaadi nahi karna chahti hai kya.

Priya:- Kisne kaha nahi karna chahti...chahti hoon...lekin tuje pata hai kaise kaise log aate hai milne. Abhi last time hi ek ladka aaya tha mujse kaha ki mein job chod du aur ghar par rehkar uski maa ki seva karu...I mean muje problem nahi hai ki uski maa ka dhyan raku...pata hai kya keh raha tha ...woh nahi chahta ki uski biwi bahar jaaye ,kaam kare...kamal hai biwi padi likhi chahiye lekin naukri na kare...yeh konsi baat hui.

Neha smiles and asked "phir tune kya kaha"

Priya:- Mein kya kehti...meine bhi keh diya meri aur tumhari height match nahi hoti.

Neha:- Aur ladke ne kya kaha ????

Priya:- Uska kya chala gaya... lekin papa kaafi naraz ho gaye the...pata hai Neha ek aur rishta aaya tha isse pehle...mere hi ghar mein woh mujse keh raha hai ki ander jao...I mean sach kahu muje usse wahi ek lagakar dene ka mann kiya...aur tuje pata hai ek ek naam sunte hi pata nahi...I mean iss jamane mein bhi koi eisa naam rakta hai kya.

Neha (controlling her laugh):- Naam kya tha             

Priya:- Nahi...rehne de.

Neha:- achha dhikta kaisa tha  

Priya:- Kajal se kam nahi dhikta tha

Neha could not able to control herself and starts laughing.

Priya:- Shut up Neha...mein waise hi pareshaan hoon aur tu hai ki

Neha controls herself and asked "Sorry...lekin tere maa ko eise rishte milte kahan se hai"

Priya:- Pata nahi Neha...aajkal mummy batati bhi nahi hai kon aa raha hai...pata nahi aaj kon aane wala hai.

 

On the other side

In Sharma House,

Shipra is worried about Priya. She is walking to and fro in tension.

Sudhir:- Oh oh Shipra...kya hua itna pareshaan kyun ho rahi ho

Shipra:- Dekiye ji aapki beti ki yahi aadat ek din usse bhi le dubegi aur hame bhi

Sudhir:- Abb kya kar diya Priya ne

Shipra:- Aapko yaad bhi hai ki yeh kitna rishta hai...har rishte ko koi na koi wajah se usne mana kar diya hai. Abb usne iss rishtey ko bhi mana kiya na toh mujse bura koi nahi hoga. Muje toh lagta hai ki Priya kisi aur se pyar karti hai.

Sudhir:- tum ek baar baat karke dekho na usse

Shipra:- Mujse woh kuch nahi bolne wali...ek kaam karti hoon Neha ko mein yahan bulati hoon aur ussi se kehti hoon ki Priya se puche ki woh kisi aur se pyar toh nahi karti.

 

Evening,

Shipra:- Neha...muje eise lagta hai ki Priya ke dil mein koi aur hai jiski wajah se woh har rishte ko naa karti hai...tu hi usse puchna koi hai kya uske dil mein.

Neha:- Aunty waise muje toh eisa kuch nahi lagta lekin aap keh rahi hai toh mein ek baar puch kar dekhti hoon.

In Priya's room

Neha:- Priya ek baat bata kahi tu kisi se pyar toh nahi karti.

Priya(shockingly):- What???? Pagal ho gayi hai...tune muje dekha bhi hai kisi se bhi ladke se baat karte hue.

Neha:- Agar eisi baat hai toh tu shaadi ka naam sunte hi itni pareshaan kyun ho jaati hai...Bata na koi problem hai kya

Priya heave a sigh. She sits on the bed stare at Neha and starts  "pata hai Neha tu sahi keh rahi hai muje na sach mein shaadi ke naam se hi darr lagne lagta hai. Pata nahi lekin mein inn sab se comfortable nahi hoti hoon. Muje pata hai shaadi kya hoti hai, shaadi ki raat hoti hai...she gets up from the bed and said "Mujse woh sab nahi hoga Neha".

Neha:- Kya nahi hoga

Priya:- common Neha tu janti hai mein kya keh rahi hoon. Muje koi touch wouch kare nahi pasand.

Neha started laughing uncontrollably. Neha is Rolling on the bed and laughing. Priya gets angry with this.

Priya:- Neha...please stop it..mein tujse itni seriously baat kar rahi hoon aur tuje hasi aa rahi hai.

Neha(controlling her laughter):- Hasu nahi toh kya karu...hasne wali baat hi toh kar rahi ho...Sach bata Priya...tuje koi waise wali problem toh nahi hai na.

Priya:- Shut up neha...mein bilkul normal hoon.

Neha:- Dekh Priya...Marriage means sirf physically ek hona nahi hota hai. Husband-Wife mentally bhi ek dusre se judte hai. They become one soul. Aur jiss cheeze ki tu baat kar rahi hai it's a part of love. Yeh pyar dhikane ka tarika hota hai. It's a Promise and trust ki I belong to you. Isse hi toh shaadi kehte hai.

Priya:- Muje pata hai Neha phir bhi muje woh sab sochkar...

Neha:- Tu filhaal yeh sab sochna bandh kar aur jaakar taiyaar ho jaa. Mein tab tak aunty ki help karti hoon.

 

Neha told everything to Shipra and she gets a shock with what she is listening from neha. 

Shipra:- Neha bol na mein iss ladki ka kya karu.

Neha:- Kuch matt kariye aunty...aapki beti aaj bhi bachhi hi hai...ek baar iski dor sahi haato mein aa jaaye dekhna sab teek ho jaayega. She murmurs to herself "Pata nahi kon bechara Priya ke zindagi mein aane wala hai"

Evening, Boy and his family came. Shipra called Priya...She came and looks at boy once.

Boy's mother:-Priya beta teek se dekh lo yeh hai hamara beta Mr. Ram Kapoor.

Priya looks at him and thinks"Ram Kapoor Kapoor industries ke maalik ...lekin itna bada aadami mujse shaadi kyun karna chahta hai". Her chain of thought broken when Shipra said "Priya...ja beta Ram ko apna kamra toh dhika aa"

Neha(thinking):- Toh beta tu hai jo Priya ki kismat bankar aaya hai...beta Ram dekhna Priya teri kya parade lagati hai.

Priya takes Ram to her room. The Moment both entered into the room Ram closed the door. Priya startled and asked "Aapne darwaza kyun bandh kar diya".

Neha who is following them jolted and said "khadus kahi ka"

Ram:- Darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...mein kuch nahi karne wala...mein sirf chahta tha ki hamari baate koi na sune.

Priya:- Aap itne bade ghar ke mujse shaadi kyun karna chahte hai.

Ram:- Tumse kisne keh diya ki bade ghar ke log sirf bade ghar ki ladkiyon se hi shaadi karte hai.

Priya kept silent. Ram continue"Meine tumhe first time Institute ke bahar dekha tha. Uske baad tumhe roz subah wahi dekhta tha. Ek baar Institute mein jaakar tumhare baare mein pucha aur tabhi pata chala ki tum wahan classes leti ho".

Priya:-...

Ram:- Abb apne baare mein kuch batao

Priya:-...

Ram:- muje na khane ka bahut shauk hai...tumhe aloo ke paranthe banana aate hai kya...muje bahut pasand hai.

Priya:-...

Ram(clearing his throat):- Toh aap mujse shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar hai na...mein bahar jaakar sabko haan keh du

Priya:-...

Ram(thinking):- Yaar yeh kaise ladki hai...Kuch bhi pucho jawab hi nahi deti. Hey Ram shaadi ke baad isse kaise handle karega.

Ram:- Aapko mujse kuch puchna nahi hai

Priya:- Muje aap aap karke matt bulayiye..mera naam Priya hai

Ram:- Thank god tumne baat toh ki...haan Priya bolo mein pasand aaya ki nahi.

Priya:- Mein aapse ek baat puchu

Ram:- Haan ek kyun jitney chahe sawal puch sakti ho

Priya:- Aap mujse shaadi kyun karna chahte hai

Ram:- Kya!!!! Kyunki jab se meine tumhe dekha hai muje tumse pyar ho gaya hai.

Priya again silent and looks down.            

Ram:- Ho gaya ...aur kuch nahi puchogi

 

Priya nodded her head in negative. Both families agreed tor their marriage. the Engagement Date was fixed which is after one week. In between Ram called Priya but she never picked up the phone.

On the engagement day both are looking utterly beautiful. Both exchange the rings and marriage date was fixed after three months.

Ram:- Priya abb hamari engagement ho chuki hai we are officially engaged toh abb toh mera phone tum receive karogi na.

Priya smiles. Seeing nobody near them Ram slowly kisses Priya on her cheeks. Priya becomes shocked but Ram smiles and winks at her and left after that Everyday Ram calls her and slowly Priya becomes comfortable with him. Earlier he used to call her for five minutes now even five hours are not enough for them. His morning and good night love messages make her day and night beautiful. Daily Ram meet her in the Institute and drops her home. Sometimes they used to spend time together. Priya is happy with those changes. Finally the day arrived and both get married following all rituals.

First night,

Priya is sitting on bed calling all gods' name when she hears the door knob twist. Ram entered and closed the door. Ram is very excited but Priya starts shivering. He goes near her and sits beside her. Ram look at her carefully. First he removes her ghunghat. Instantly Priya stiffens her body.

Ram observes this and smiles at her uneasiness and asked " excitement or fear??". Priya said nothing and put her head down. Ram continue "achha ek kaam karte hai...hum aaj ek different karte hai aaj FN ke din hum kuch khelte hai"

Priya(slowly):- Kya

Ram:- kya khele...carrom khele. Priya smiles. Both play carom together. Priya feels little relaxed. Ram telling her some jokes and both are laughing loudly. Ram just mesmerized in her innocent smile. He said "Priya I wanna kiss you". Suddenly she stops laughing and stare at him scarily. His intent gaze made her weak and she closed her eyes. Her lips are shivering. Ram gets the signal. He slowly lay her down and bends towards her. His half body is on her. Priya body responded with the touch. He presses his lips with hers. Sensation ran through her body. She held the linen tightly. Ram was damn good in kissing for which Priya gave up and she slowly responded with the kiss. Ram becomes happy and he deepens the kiss and Priya left the sheet and ruffles his hair. Kiss turns into passionate one. Ram in no mood to leave her but seeing her suffocating he left her lips. Both are fully satisfied and breathing heavily.

Ram:- Please open ur eyes Priya...Priya slowly open her eyes. He held her chin and looks at her closely. He kissed her on her forehead and kept her head near his chest. Night went off.

 

Next few days Raya came to know each other routines and behaviour. They became very good friends. Both spends most of the time together. Priya is enjoying her new life. She is very happy with Ram. His caring nature made her to fall for him. But their relationship never goes beyond the kiss. Ram understands her problem and her uneasiness and ready to wait for her. Priya felt very bad but she know that she has to overcome from this. 

Today is her birthday and she is very excited because it's her first birthday with her man.

Priya(said to herself):- Aaj Mr. Kapoor hamari zindagi mein jo kami hai usse mein zaroor pura karungi. Aap meri zindagi hai aur abb mein aapko aapki kushiyon se dur nahi rakungi. Aaj ke baad aapki Priya pure tarike se sirf aur sirf aapki ho jaayegi. She is very excited for today. She cuddles herself and said "Happy Birthday Priya"...Lekin Mr. Kapoor kahan gaye hai. Mera bday hai aur abhi tak unhone muje wish bhi nahi kiya. She pouts and went to freshen up.

Priya quickly takes bath, gets ready and came down. She saw Ram is taking his breakfast. She smiles and wished everybody Good morning.

Kk came forward and wishes her very happy Birthday. Priya said thank you and looks at Ram.

Ram:- Ohh...Aaj tumhara janamdin hai...mein toh bhool hi gaya tha...Happy Birthday Priya...saying this he casually wishes her and again start taking his food.

Priya felt bad. She thought that he would happy and would do something special but he reacted as it is not matter to him. Ram finishes his food and wipes his mouth and said "Priya...aaj sham ko tumhare liye koi gift lekar aavunga...Byee...see you"

 

Priya felt very bad and eyes filled with tears. Seeing her upset KK said "Priya tum Ram ki baato ko dil se matt lo...woh kabhi kabhi eisa hi karta hai. Kaam ke aage usse kuch dhikayi nahi deta hai. Aaj koi badi deal sign hone wali hai issliye shayad bhool gaya hoga. Aane do mein uski achhe se khabar leti hoon.

Priya wipes her tears and said "maa mein apne ghar jana chahti hoon...sham tak aa jaaungi"

KK:- Haan beta zaroor jao. Sham tak aa jaana.

Priya reached Sharma house. Everybody wishes her and Priya replies all with a fake smile.

Shipra made all her favorite dishes but she is missing her man. She is checking her mobile every minute in order to check is there is any miss call or any message from him. But there was nothing. She thinks "waise toh MR. Kapoor mera achhe se khayal rakte hai lekin baat agar kaam ki hai toh unhe uske alawa kuch nazar nahi aata. Mein hi bewkoof thi jo Ram se expect kar rahi thi. Abb mein samaj gayi hoon ki aapke liye kaam se alawa kuch important nahi hai. She is trying to absorb the truth.

In the evening she came back to KM. She entered in the room and sits on the bed leisurely when suddenly she felt two hands encircle her from waist. She becomes shocked and turned back and her eyes popped out. Ram is smiling and looking at her with so much love. Both are very close. Their eyes met and a sweet eye lock session. Priya suddenly remembers morning incidence and she broke the eye lock and turns her face to  other side.

Priya:- Mr. Kapoor please chodiye muje and tries to remove his hand from her waist. But Ram pulls her towards him. Priya eyes again met his eyes. Her eyes become teary and change her turn her gaze down.

Ram removes his hand from her waist and looks at her very closely. He held her chin and made her to look into his eyes but Priya closed her eyes. He then takes her hand and put one file in her hand.

 

Ram:- Apni aakhen kholo Priya aur dekho yeh kya hai.

Initially she denied doing but later she slowly open her eyes. She looks at him asking him what

Ram:- Abb isse kholo aur pado. Priya opens the file and reads.. her eyes becomes moistens.

Priya:- Aapne mere naam

Ram:- Haan aaj subah jo important meeting ke liye gaya tha na woh issliye tha taaki mein apni biwi ko uske birthday par yeh nayi company gift kar saku.

Priya becomes emotional. Ram cupped her face and said  "How can you think Priya ki mein tumhara bday bhool jaaunga. Mere liye yeh deal bahut bahut important thi kyunki mein yeh company apni Priya ke liye khareedna chahta tha".

Priya:- Muje aapne pehle kyun nahi bataya...pata hai aapne eise muje avoid kiya muje bilkul achha nahi laga. Mein pure waqt udas thi aur aap abb aakar muje surprise kar rahe hai.

Ram falls on her innocent talk. He said "Sorry...dekho meine kaan bhi pakad liye...yeh dekho. Next time se mein raat ke 12 baje hi wish kar diya karunga. OK...waise agar pehle bata diya hota toh  yeh surprise thodi hota aur mein apni patni ko surprise karna chahta tha. Priya could not control her feelings and she hugs Ram. Ram embraces her into tight hug. After sometime he whisper in her eyes "Mrs Kapoor surprises abhi khatam nahi hua hai"

Priya broke the hug and asked "Kya"                         

Ram:- udar dekho and Priya turned her gaze to other side. She saw 4 boxes. All boxes are neatly wrapped and kept it on the bed. She excitedly takes first box and unwrap it and saw a beautiful netted red color sari along with deep neck blouse. She took another box. It contains a matching jhumka and matching bangles. She opened the third box and saw a beautiful matching necklace and then she opened the fourth and last box and saw a beautiful golden anklet. Her eyes sparkled with joy and she hugs him once again and held him very close to her.

After some time Ram broke the hug and said "Abb mein chahta hoon tum yeh sab pehenkar jaldi se taiyaar hokar neeche aa jaavo".

Priya:- Kyun hum kahi bahar jaa rahe hai

Ram:- Surprises hai Mrs. Kapoor...abb jaao aur jaldi se taiyaar ho jaavo.

Priya smiles and took the clothes and went to freshen up. She was too happy and thinks"surprise toh mein aapko dungi Mr. Kapoor. Aapne mere liye itna kuch kiya abb meri baari". With this thought she quickly took bath and got ready and came down. Ram jaws dropped with the beautiful sight. She looks utterly beautiful and looks no lesser than a bride. Ram murmurs "Beautiful". Priya blushed with his gaze and goes near him and closed his mouth with her hand and said "chale".

Both sat in a car.

Priya:- Mr. Kapoor hum kahan jaa rahe hai.

Ram:- It's a surprise dear. Mein abhi tumhe kuch nahi batane wala.

He was driving from last one hour and Priya became impatient and restless to know where they are heading. She again ask"Kahiye na hum kahan jaa rahe hai...aap pichle ek ganthe se gaadhi chala rahe hai...kuch toh batayiye na".

Ram:- Priya only fifteen minutes more uske baad tumhe sab pata chal jaayega. Finally their car stopped in front of the cottage.

Priya:- Hum yahan kyun aaye hai.

Ram:- Yeh cottage meri taraf se tumhare liye Bday gift.                    

Priya could not believe how much her man loves her. She asked "Aap mere liye itna sab kyun kar rahe hai"

Ram:- Because I love you. ...Ab bander chale

 

Both stepped inside the cottage. Cottage is designed beautifully from inside. Ram showed her every room. Every room is designed differently. Finally they reached the last room. Ram immediately kept his hand on her eyes and whisper in her ear "aur yeh hum dono ka kamra hai...saying this both steps inside and he removed his hand from her eyes. Priya becomes amazed at the view of the room. Everything is made up of glass which gives romantic look to the place. Room is fully decorated with Red Roses and many flowers , Red colours heart shape balloons, and a king size bed at the center. She overjoyed with the happiness. Ram then took her near the centre table where again a heart shaped cake was kept. Ram lit the candle and told priya to cut the cake. Priya blew off the candles and cut the cake. She took a small piece and fed Ram and the same piece he fed priya. He then takes her to the balcony where dinner was already arranged. Ram fed Priya and both finish their dinner. Finally they came back to room.

Ram:- Tum change kar lo cupboard mein night suit hai. Hum kal subah ghar jaayenge. Priya went to change. After some time she came out and Ram jaws dropped. She is in a red colour nightly looking utterly hot and sexy.

Priya said nothing and she goes near him and instantly she kissed him on his lips. Ram responded immediately and kiss turned into a passionate one. After some time both broke the kiss. Both were intently looking into each other eyes.

Priya:- Muje nahi pata tha Mr.Kapoor ki shaadi itni koobsurat bhi ho sakti hai and I am very proud ki aap mere pati hai. Meine zaroor koi achha kaam kiya hoga pichle janam mein jo muje aap mile. This is the most beautiful and memorable movement of my life. Muje isse pehle itni jyada kushi kabhi nahi mili Ram.  Aapne mere liye itna sab kuch kiya...itna kuch diya lekin mere liye aapse badkar koi bhi bada gift nahi hai.

Saying this she hugs him possessively. After some time both broke the hug. Both are sharing a sweet eye lock. Ram looks hungrily in her eyes. Priya can see lust in his eyes and she also need him and completes herself in full sense. Ram lifts her from the ground. Priya circled her hand around his neck. Without breaking the eye lock he goes near bed and placed her carefully at the center of the bed.

Ram(in a hoarse voice):- Priyaaa...I don't wanna waste this night. I want to make this night memorable. I want to feel you, touch you. I need you Priya...I want you. I want to be inside you. His intense gaze and wishes made her weak again. She hugs him very tightly so that not even air can enter between them. She said "Please complete me Ram...I need you too, I want you ". Her wish becomes a command for him and Ram continues his work making sure she is comfortable all the time. Starting from the kiss finally he very carefully and slowly enters into her. She felt pain but his deep love takes away all her pain. After depositing in her he falls on her bosom. Both complete each other.

Ram:- Thanks Priya for coming into my life...U r very precious to me. I love you Priya love you very very much.

Priya:- I love you too Ram and thanks for understanding me. Both sleep in each other arms holding closely each other.

Next morning Priya woke up from sleep. She reminisces her night and blushing coyly. She looks on other side and becomes shocked Ram is watching her. She realized her state and covers herself immediately.

Ram came near her and said  "Tumne apne ko cover kyun kar diya Priya".

Priya:- Ram please...aap jage hue the ...mein jaa rahi hoon washroom. Mera dress dijiye.

Ram:- Priya tum itna sharma kyun rahi ho...yaad nahi mein tumhe dekh chukka hoon.

Priya face becomes tomato red. She said "Please Ram and tries to move out from bed. But Ram holds her; removed the sheet from her and came on top of her. They move into another hot love making.

They spend some more days in cottage. It's beginning of their love journey. 

 

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Sorry for the mistakes

Edited by sandhyasn - 2015-02-11T07:39:01Z
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Posted: 2015-02-10T11:33:29Z
LOL
Lovely osWink
Saandy k.k.c.n.dAngryAngry
Ab ye k.k.c.d. kyun bol rhi tumhe pataa haiLOL
Chaahu mein ya naLOL
Chana to padega naLOL
Ye kya institute mein entry maarte hu ram ko pyaar ho kyaLOL
Aur priya sochte hi reh gyi chahu mein ya naWink
Shadi bhi ho gyiLOL
Ye gya fn mein game khel rheLOL
Kaun hara kaun jeetaWink
Birthday pr raya aage bad gyeEmbarrassed
Eske baad kya hua LOL
Aage kyun nhi likhaAngry
Ye os mere liye likha s.s.b neEmbarrassed
Tq so much Heart
MuahhhHug
Edited by SouLScOREr - 2015-02-11T23:09:53Z
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Posted: 2015-02-10T11:37:40Z
hheeelllooo...!!! LOL LOL 
aagyi..!! LOL LOL

super os..!! Wink Wink Wink

suna suna lg rha... LOL
khi se copy kia kya...!!! ROFL

ideas share ho rhy fn aur bdy ka...!!! ROFL ROFL
maza aayaa padte...!!!! LOL LOL

thnx fr the pm..!!!!!
Edited by chillpc - 2015-02-13T21:12:03Z
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Posted: 2015-02-10T11:45:47Z
1st of all Happy bday

$oUL$cOREr


os is amazing priya's insecurity her fear superbly written

ty for pm do write more

Edited by aman.anjaan - 2015-02-10T13:31:06Z
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Posted: 2015-02-10T11:49:19Z
wonderful os...di...Clap
nicely written..
i love it,..
priya n neha talk is very funny...
kajal se kam nahi dikta... i like this dialogue...LOL

awww ram was so sweet .. he didnt force priya... he gave her some time to adjust
so sweet of him...

thnks for pm...Smile

happy birthday darlingSmile
Edited by jodude - 2015-02-11T20:32:01Z
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Posted: 2015-02-10T11:52:44Z
Lovely n romantic part
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Posted: 2015-02-10T12:38:57Z
Every girl went form this phase and same is with Priya and with Neha being supportive she is feeling good. Ram is straight forward confessed his love for her and so with agreement of marraige both the kapoors and sharma's are happy. Now with the birthday of Mrs. Kapoor Raya became one soul.

Thanx for the pm i so like the Os
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Posted: 2015-02-10T16:59:44Z
Beautiful romantic update...
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zeenathsheikh8 3 540 2014-06-03T10:56:34Z Mani-RK
RaYa OS: Bahon mein chale aaooo...

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