Software Symphonies 5--Spice Route on 148 - Page 70

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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Ranu1234


Sorry havent read the update yet ..I so want KG and Taara to be back ..
When i created my "marketing thread" nobody even read it till Taara told me to change the title ..
I will PM them too..
I know its IF .. these things happen and folks leave but these two LOVED Sosy and Nisha loves them too Cry
I AM SO SORRY IF I HURT FOLKS u know when in a group of friends two leave angry the rest of the group is not very happy ..
i just got hold of these  to rekindle memories
Nisha
Thanks for the faith... you, Columbia, Ashu, Goosecool Modernfamily Seriousreader, Wings, Nivi Nidhi Hsp, RCF, taara, Arya, Payal, Sparkleamina, KG, have compared me to some of the greatest in the literary world from Aristotle to JK Rowling. 

KG
KG1404
"My task...is, by the power of the written word to make you hear, to make you feel - it is, before all, to make you see. That - and no more - and it is everything."
--JOSEPH CONRAD--

Nisha, Just like a few books, this quote has stayed with me over the years and today after reading the pt.Strangers on a subway, I see you in the Quote more than Conrad...
I have read somewhere that we do not remember days but we remember moments. The symphonies in
Letting Go...
Reading &YT History...
Morse Code...
Strangers on a subway...
will stay etched in me forever. Looking forward to lock away more in my 'Godrej Safe''''


Taara
Anyone who LOVES LOVE...Read Software Symphonies...
I'm a very proud reader and can say this for atleast a good 100+ ppl...


come back guys ...

Fully agree Anu
I am DELIGHTED to give up talking about the show. Its a very easy trade.LOL
I hope they can come back...Embarrassed
My resentment is with the show and its creators and its characters NEVER was or is with the 60+ faithfuls on this topic
I told both over PMs...repeatedly

Life is so much bigger...


Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Hsp.canada


Originally posted by nidhi.b23


samyukta spilled the beans... ww3 in making now...appa vs R&B...both ready to claw each other...n II...she will be stuck between them...poor her...getting bashed from all the sides...appa already doesn't like R&B and now when their being together in Jaipur is out in open he will just breathe fire...yeh sam bhi na...she is no less than II...may be she was trying to portay her brother as a caring and loving fianc but yaha yo sab ulta ho gaya..

good that II has made herself clear... if he really wants 3 kids then they should really plan it out..why is the guy in such a hurry...it's not if II is running away...they need to have time after marriage for themselves... already they don't agree to most of the stuffs...how will they raise together kids is a serious mystery...

i didn't undestand one thing.. what having baby is to do with his company fiscal year...

Based on viewing many relationships in my life , and I will say mostly gora people, when they realize that they met the ONE, they marry and start the family right away. R&B views II as his soulmate, hence he has the urge to stamp her forever and most men ( western world) show this as ultimate commitment
( having kids). 

i see never thought of it that way ..good point
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Goosecool


U r sooo right my kids 9 year old frie nods have egos bigger than elephants. . They r all DIVAS ... itttakeaway guts to arrange a dance for them...

I SALUTE U COMRADE Thumbs Up Clap

i am so going to take all the salute on this one .. actually post the dance practice my husband takes away both my kids and gives me 2 hours of kid free time .. i am praying this time its easier!
Posted: 7 years ago
ok finished reading through the comments my only comment on
Rhapsody was
was actually expecting Mahabharat when i went to sleep and landed with Rasaleela LOLROFL
his making her comfortable and her nervousness very well portrayed Embarrassed.
and her enjoying herself to the hilt in a strangers house was so cute.. i used to be like that now a bit careful..
I can see/ imagine his half smile when they have the Nandan,Shravu, Lasya sleepover..Big smile
Posted: 7 years ago
There's a thin line between po*nography and erotica and it's commendable that you always maintain that. Like tweety said your choice of words is fabulous. This part was a wonderful conclusion to the jaipur trip. With fights and sickness and arguments you did a good job by ending all of it with this scene. It's like this is the only way they can communicate, express their love and shed their inhibitions. I realise that touch is very important in a relationship. It gives you an understanding of the other person's insecurities. It's important to talk but it is equally important to touch. There has to be something palpable in a relationship to assure you of its existence. 
I may never be able to put into words what I felt while reading this. It's something very personal. I'm sure everybody must have deduced something or the other from this scene. Again I would reiterate what tweety said that it was abstract and is hence open to interpretation. I had tears in my eyes while reading.  Don't know why. 
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by modernfamily


There's a thin line between po*nography and erotica and it's commendable that you always maintain that. Like tweety said your choice of words is fabulous. This part was a wonderful conclusion to the jaipur trip. With fights and sickness and arguments you did a good job by ending all of it with this scene. It's like this is the only way they can communicate, express their love and shed their inhibitions. I realise that touch is very important in a relationship. It gives you an understanding of the other person's insecurities. It's important to talk but it is equally important to touch. There has to be something palpable in a relationship to assure you of its existence. 
I may never be able to put into words what I felt while reading this. It's something very personal. I'm sure everybody must have deduced something or the other from this scene. Again I would reiterate what tweety said that it was abstract and is hence open to interpretation. I had tears in my eyes while reading.  Don't know why. 


So well put Clap
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by modernfamily


There's a thin line between po*nography and erotica and it's commendable that you always maintain that. Like tweety said your choice of words is fabulous. This part was a wonderful conclusion to the jaipur trip. With fights and sickness and arguments you did a good job by ending all of it with this scene. It's like this is the only way they can communicate, express their love and shed their inhibitions. I realise that touch is very important in a relationship. It gives you an understanding of the other person's insecurities. It's important to talk but it is equally important to touch. There has to be something palpable in a relationship to assure you of its existence. 
I may never be able to put into words what I felt while reading this. It's something very personal. I'm sure everybody must have deduced something or the other from this scene. Again I would reiterate what tweety said that it was abstract and is hence open to interpretation. I had tears in my eyes while reading.  Don't know why. 

"U might hate it" she whispered sobbing
He gathered her to his body and hugged her tight "U are insane" he scolded her
had me ..
and of course i know in my prev post i didnt mention i loved how she stole the lotion,turned on his lights, ordered food he may like, used an excuse to use the shower first LOL, and the nailpolish love and of course enjoying hair shower... such lovely details and buildup Clap

Posted: 7 years ago
Transfer of Allegiance
She was knocked out... completely knocked out, as she clutched him like he was a precious toy
"I dont know if I am going to be OK" she had whispered shuddering... as uncontrollable tremors shook her body 
"I agree" he said kissing her neck deeply while burying her into him...

He had to wake her at 9, she pulled the covers over and snuggled deeper... until she realized she was in her underwear... completely nude waist up... and it all came back to her...
He was behind her... blocking the sun...
"Please da 10 more minutes" she begged
"I can stay here all week II, I thought u had a job to return to"
"Smug bas***d" she cursed hoarsely, as she began coughing... he sat in bed and leaned on the headboard, his arm going over her head
"Zyaada show off mat karo I can smell the soap, u showered" she said... 
she saw his long tapering fingers lay in front of her... she blushed gloriously as he turned her
She gently slithered out  covering herself with a white sheet and lay on him... shutting her eyes
"I dont want to talk about it"
His arm wrapped around her form... he was cold and fresh like a morning... she was soft and tender like a kissed flower, he wore a burgundy Lacoste tee and some cargos, one leg was up..
He held her between his legs... as she shut her eyes and lay dozing... her nose under his raspy chin, 
he head flopped on his shoulder like a child's, he pulled the right ear phone off and placed it in her ear, she had no idea who sang or what they sang...
She was just happy to listen to whatever he was.. as he put his left ear phone back on
She lay in the tight embrace for a half hour? in a asleep awake asleep cycle... he drew art on her back... trying to wake her up, she grabbed his hand and stilled it
He used his left hand
"I am going to sleep on the bed" she said furiously.. getting off
He cuddled apologetically...
"Have u eaten?"
"Ummm ya... at 6"
"Tum sotey hi nahi ho?"
"No I do"
"We went to bed at 1?"
"I slept a good 5 hours"
"Stay off my bed if u sleep less" she ordered
he pinned her down and climbed over moving... "Will do my best" he said softly... peeling the white sheet off as she arched..
She watched him nibble.. and tease... she she held his moist hair in a familiar hold..
Her phone rang!!
He stopped she urged him to go on doing what he was...
The ringing stopped as she groaned delighted... letting him take her hand wherever he wanted... 
unescorted by her.. to explore new territories, on his torso... and south of his torso...
"U are a good teacher" she clung and whispered in his ear nipping it
"Just good?' he asked
Jerk" she gasped... as he her hand encountered something she hadnt expected
Her phone rang again...
"No da" she begged
he crushed her for a few seconds into a paste... on the bed... as he crushed his arousal... and reached with the serpent like hand to grab her phone
"Ur Dad" he said handing her the device, by then it had stopped ringing... only to start when he moved off her... she was still eager to continue so she curled up under him as close as possible
"I wont say anything about ur stubble" "I swear" she promised.. begging
Holding his face... as she stroked his whiskers with her thumbs. softly...
She answered it the third time... as he lay lay hugging her
"Hmmm"
"Are u coming home" Appa asked sternly
"Yes Pa" she said feebly
"Its Monday, dont u have to go to work?"
"Innikki I took the day off Pa"
"Where are u?" he demanded as if he didnt know
"In Jaipur" she said irritably
"I know THAT, are u staying with Baldev's relatives?'he demanded
"Umm... hmmm" she spoke half truth
"are u coming back today?"
"Yes Pa" she nodded reluctantly...
"For lunch?'
"I ll try"
He hung up... he wasnt talking to her in Delhi and he had called her now? She wondered why... 
She turned away from him thoughtfully
"Hamey chalna chahiye" she said morosely
Trying to free her legs from the layers of sheets and blankets... 
as she pulled a white sheet to drape herself... his burgundy tee was easy... she grabbed it and wore it hurriedly as she got off the bed in her lil dress
He was no longer in his face down position, he watched her move around packing everything up as if she would head out the door in a minute
"Get up da" she ordered
He lay and ogled..
She went to the bathroom and brushed and combed her hair into a braid and... he was switching playlists on the phone, leaning on the head board
"How long does it take?" she asked
He looked at her like "HOW did u get here on Friday?"
"I was sick and sleeping APDI PAAKADE (dont look at me like that) she yelled agitated
He shrugged "OK... I just saw u got off the wrong side of the bed" look
"So ethana time da?" (how many hours?)
"4? 5?" he said carelessly
"Ayyo!! THAT FAR? IS IT THAT FAR? U are lying... I dont believe you" she threw at him
He put his ear phones back on and grabbed a paperback from his nightstand...
She frantically yanked all the covers trying to find her clothes from last nite, shoes, his hers... everything under the bed... books, power cords...
"where are YOUR things?' she demanded, he removed his ear phone from one year with a Note to self:"cant have both on when II is around"
He tilted his head towards the closet..
she opened it... there was stuff everywhere...
She just shut it... took her clothes out and went to take her shower... opened the bathroom door and flung his tee on him
"Clean up da" she ordered

She wore a new acquistion, a red and off white ensemble... expensive and elegant...
"DO U LIKE IT?' she asked wearing her gold beads in her ear...
He shrugged smiling "Ya"
"Onn kitta poi ketene. I shud ask Akka. I should never ask you" she cursed
He smiled as she muttered leaving the room...

When they left the hotel it was Noonish...she had to EAT, he had to FINISH reading the chapter he was ON..
UNREASONABLE LAZY BUM!!
They had to buy a dozen bottles of overpriced water from the hotel... he drank water like it was alcohol...
He drank atleast 4 by the time they got to Delhi
His delay her delay, a call he had to take, she had to refuse Bally's invite for lunch... 
they forgot the shopping bag she took up last night

They drove up to the spot where her Corolla parked at 6 ish...
APPA was in the balcony, he hadnt called her since morning, she had texted Amma and Akka... and Bally as they left...
She took as much as she should carry, the driver offered... R&B refused and carried half her load and nudged her to lead the way up the stairs
Her stomach churned in fear... terrified she dragged her feet...
He went ahead of her and waited by the front door...Appa had left both doors open, he set the bags on the long runner table by the wall
Took his sun glasses off... Appa appeared like a avenger... arms across his chest
"Hello" he said carelessly
"Good evening Mr Iyer" R&B said politely
He didnt take his shoes off... she held his tee and yanked, but the dude walked into the living room
And extended his hand
Appa offered his reluctantly
"Do u have a minute" he asked R&B
R&B nodded sincerely, he was completely unfazed
"Appa, we couldnt get here sooner" II's plea
"Nee po ma ulle" softly (u go on inside love) but dismissively

"Appa dont make a big deal. He brought me home... he came to check on me because I was sick... 
he came because" (HE WANTED TO SEE ME?) You look and sound angry Pa, FOR NO REASON. We were in a car for FIVE bumpy hours.
 Vandavana okaara kooda solla maatela (WONT U ASK THE GUY TO SIT DOWN?) II appealed

"the front door is open kanna. We can talk  later" he reached and bolted the grill door and the twin  wooden...
"We dont wear shoes at home" Appa pointed...
He took his velcro strap sandals off by the door
And went off to wash his hand
She chased R&B down..
" I dont know kya kahenge" she looked terrified. 
"I am going to be making chai. I am not going to let him harass you" she said protectively
He leaned on the bathroom door jamb hands in his pockets looking down at her
"Warrior?" he asked with a half smile
She smiled nodding softly..."Ya, an Iyer" she chuckled at the humor of the newly discovered term...
From fighting him she had gone to fighting FOR him...



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