Software Symph 4--Walking to Ranthambore on 146 - Page 85

Ashu

This content was originally posted by: ashu9

There I gave you one, now gimme an update, easily negotiable 🤣

Dude, it is cruel of you!!! You know I cant express..I cant write...I have each and every sentence written by you in my head but to put it to words, I lack the articulation sadly !!! 

I wont say I wont write, I will if it makes you write many many many updates just for us ardent readers 🤣

trust me I will write crap and you will never have an iota of idea as to what I exactly said or wanted to say , Like am writing right now 🤣🤣

This content was originally posted by: Seriousreader

Don't say that Ashu, because I use you as my medium of expression. I ride on your shoulders...remember?😭

This content was originally posted by: ashu9

HHAHAHAHAHAHAH

Dont say that seriousreader 😆😆😆!!! I might have a panic attack now!🤣

Okay, for you, I shall try my best to articulate my thoughts and give a "near to FAIR" review for the next update 😭😭

Wow'

This content was originally posted by: Nisha0604

Ashu

The walk wont happen tonight, if u read carefully u will notice THEY FOUGHT di

THEY FOUGHT

why will she go on a walk with him?

He has a 11:30 with Paris... he will go...

Walk will be some other day maybe next time she goes to Malcha Marg?

Kuch na kuch karte hain ruk ja

Whoa! Their first fight as a "couple" was intense, well they both really have it in them to hurt each other "mercilessly" as you mentioned. Geez! Well I guess its an intense emotion, I totally understand that, intense love, intense hate, intense anger. You really show your intense emotions on people you love/care about! Lets just say they have a LOT to work on, and this is just the first step. I have to admit that the last few lines for II did scare me, I mean no matter how ferocious she is, she is very sensitive at the end of the day. I am extremely biased towards her, because I can connect with her more than I can connect with R&B, so I feel II has much more to deal with than R&B but that is my opinion! That is something you know, and for me to find out(hopefully soon)! 😆 

I agree with Ashu. I'm not vocal like others here who are also more experienced and wise. But if that's your condition then here goes my contribution towards making this story move. I may not be as articulate but I've turned into a crazy obsessive insomniac with a serious attention deficit disorder after reading this story. I zone out anywhere and keep thinking  about these two. 

This content was originally posted by: modernfamily

I agree with Ashu. I'm not vocal like others here who are also more experienced and wise. But if that's your condition then here goes my contribution towards making this story move. I may not be as articulate but I've turned into a crazy obsessive insomniac with a serious attention deficit disorder after reading this story. I zone out anywhere and keep thinking  about these two. 

Coming to this part. It scared me. There was romance and flirting and blushing but there was a tension brewing inside inside my head as much as in D II with parallel scenes of the couple and the family. I feel so bad for appa.  At the moment I'm only worried about him. I just feel for him. There are times when I feel for r&b, especially when he talks about his mom, for II and for vandita.  But abhi all I'm worried about is appa

This content was originally posted by: Vsoujanya

Whoa! Their first fight as a "couple" was intense, well they both really have it in them to hurt each other "mercilessly" as you mentioned. Geez! Well I guess its an intense emotion, I totally understand that, intense love, intense hate, intense anger. You really show your intense emotions on people you love/care about! Lets just say they have a LOT to work on, and this is just the first step. I have to admit that the last few lines for II did scare me, I mean no matter how ferocious she is, she is very sensitive at the end of the day. I am extremely biased towards her, because I can connect with her more than I can connect with R&B, so I feel II has much more to deal with than R&B but that is my opinion! That is something you know, and for me to find out(hopefully soon)! 😆 

What I admire about this is that it is such a real relationship, its not OTT, too flowery or too sad/hurtful. Its just real which makes me happy. Its not all rainbows for couples or all gloomy clouds, its a mix of both! 👍🏼

I have exams coming up (ughh), but I had to give you my feedback!