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I am finally back with an OS. I know I'm very late but this OS Im dedicated it to Luvsakshi on her birthday. Belated Happy Birthday Neel...I know i am very late to post it...πŸ˜†
Hihihi...I know Neel likes Romantic stories but this story is far away from itπŸ˜†. Hope she will like it and here u go...πŸ˜‰

I divided this OS in two parts...
Here's the first part
 
 

OS- Raya Milan

 

Ram, Vikram, Ashwin, Priya, Neha, Shruti and Esha are from same college same class. This is their last year in this college. Ram - Esha are  a couple, Vikram - Neha are a couple and Ashwin-Priya are a couple. Shruti is best friend of Priya and Ashwin and having a secret crush on Ashwin. Esha is childhood friend of Ram. From childhood both are in the same school, same college, they both always join in any course together so nobody dare to come in between Ram and Esha. But Ram secretly loves Priya and only Vikram and Neha knew about this.  Esha is very possessive towards Ram. She never allows any other girls to come near to Ram.

In college,

Ashwin and Shruti are sitting together doing some project work and Priya is sitting alone in another bench. Seeing her alone Ram came and took permission and sat beside her. Esha is talking with her classmates when she saw Ram and Priya together she frowns in anger.

Ram:- Kya kar rahi ho

Priya:- Kuch nahi bass eise hi padd rahi thi and again engrossed in the book.

Ram:- Tum Ashwin aur Shruti ke saat nahi baith rahi ho

Priya:- Nahi woh dono kuch project ka kaam kar rahe hai..I don't wanna disturb them.

Ram(hesitantly):- Priyaaa...tumhe problem nahi hoti jab Ashwin aur Shruti saat hote hai.

Priya closes the book and looks at him and said "Nahi...Muje problem kyun hogi"

Ram:- Nahi Ashwin jyada waqt shruti ke saat rehta hai toh tumhe gussa nahi aata.

Priya:- Mein tumhare Esha ki tarah nahi hoon ki apne boyfriend ko pakad kar rakku...and she laughs. Ram also smiles but somewhere inside it stab in his heart.

Everybody knows that Esha never allows Ram to talk with anybody.

Priya continued...

Meri aur Ashwin ke beech ek understanding hai. Hum dono ek dusre ko achhe se jante hai issliye na woh meri personal life mein interfere karta hai aur na mein uske personal life ko control karti hoon.

Ram:- Aur shaadi ke baad

Priya:- Shaadi ke baad equation change ho jaati hai... Ram abb tum Esha ke paas jao warna woh samjegi tum mere saat flirt kar rahe ho...and she again starts laughing.

Smile also appears in his face.

Esha notice this and she fumes in anger. Ashwin also notices this and he does not like this too.

 

Class started. Ram came back to his place and sat beside Esha. After the class Esha took out her books and barged out of the class. Ram also followed after her.

Ram:- Esha...Esha...But Esha without listening to him ran very fast. At last he caught her. Kya kar rahi ho...itni naraz kyun ho

Esha:- Just leave Ram...tumhe meine kitni baar kaha hai ki muje tumhare kisi ladki se baat karna pasand nahi aur khaskarke uss Priya se...U know that I hate her. Muje Priya bilkul pasand nahi hai.

Ram:- Esha stop it...sab dekh rahe hai yahan tamasha matt create karo. But Esha in no mood to listen and continued.."Uska boyfriend toh jab dekho Shruti ke saat flirt karta rehta hai toh abb woh tumhe apne jaal mein fasa rahi hai...apne boyfriend ko sambhal kar nahi rakk sakti aur mere boyfriend ke peeche padi hai"

Ram:- Esha eisa kuch nahi hai

Esha:- Eisa hi hai... mein eisi ladkiyon ko achhe se janta hoon bahut chalaak hote hai.

Ram:- Enough Esha...Im sorry..please gussa matt karo.

Ram and Esha fights almost every day. Esha make issues for every small thing.

 

Ashwin:- Kya zaroorat thi Priya Ram se baat karne ki..tum janti ho na Esha ko usse Ram ka kisi se bhi baat karna pasand nahi hai.

Priya:- Mein kahan Ram se baat karne gayi thi woh khud hi aaya tha mere paas baat karne.

Ashwin:- Achha teek hai..abb yeh sab sochkar tum tension matt lo.

After the college,

Esha confronts Priya

Esha:- Priya stay away from Ram. Get that in your mind. Tumhe problem nahi hoti hogi tumhara boyfriend kisi aur se baat kare lekin muje zaroor hoti hai. Priya said nothing and left.

 

 

 

At KM,

Ram is very upset with Esha.

Krishna:- Kya hua beta aaj fir se Esha se jagda hua kya

Ram:- Aapko kya farak padta hai maa...Aap hi chahti ho na Esha iss ghar mein aapki bahu bankar aaye...Apne bete ki pasand se aap dono ko kya lena dena hai. Saying this he went to his room.

Priya's house,

Shipra:- Priya jakar taiyaar ho jaa. Tujse milne ladkewale aa rahe hai

Priya(shockingly):- What???..aapne mujse bina puche ladkewalo ko yahan bulaya hai...aur waise bhi mein abhi shaadi nahi karna chahti aur agar karungi toh sirf Ashwin se.

Shipra:- chup Ek dum chup...abb aage ek nahi bolegi tu. Meine aur tere papa ne tera Rishta Rajat se karane ka socha hai...tere papa ke dosth ka beta hai...bade company mein manager hai. Mein use teri  tasveer bheji thi usse pasand bhi aa gayi hai. Abb woh tumse milna chahte hai ...tu jaa aur jaakar taiyaar ho jaa...woh aate hi honge.

Priya tries to convince her parents but Shipra and Sudhir are in no mood to change their decision. Marriage was fixed and finally Priya has decided to speak with Rajat. She called him in the coffee shop. Ashwin and Shruti are also accompanying her.

Priya:- Rajat mein aapse shaadi nahi karna chahti...mein Ashwin se pyar karti hoon...please aap iss shaadi se mana kar dijiye.

Rajat:- What!!!! Agar shaadi nahi karni thi toh pehle batana tha...abhi toh card bhi distribute ho gaya hai...next week shaadi hai..Sorry mein abb kuch nahi kar sakta.

Priya:- Teek hai aap baraat lekar aayiye lekin shaadi karne ke liye mein wahan nahi rahungi...

Rajat becomes shocked seeing her rudeness. Ashwin came in between and said "Sir aap samajne ki koshish kijiye hum dono ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hai lekin Priya ke gharwale nahi chahte ki hum dono shaadi kare...Please aap iss shaadi se peeche hatt jaayiye".

Marriage was cancelled. Sudhir and shipra becomes very angry with Priya. Having no choice left they fix their daughter marriage with Ashwin on the same date.

 

Finally the D-day arrive,

Today is marriage. Priya is getting ready, Neha is helping her.

On the other side Ram also getting ready for the marriage. Esha came and asked "ohh toh tumne decide kar hi liya ki tum Priya ki shaadi mein jaaoge"

Ram:- Kyun tum nahi chal rahi

Esha:- Muje iske alawa aur bhi kaam hai jo mere liye important hai. Tum jao aur enjoy karo.

Here

Priya:- Neha...Shruti abhi tak aayi nahi...usne kahan tha ki woh aayegi...phone bhi nahi lag raha hai uska.

Neha:- Priya tu uski tension kyun leti hai...aa jaayegi.

Priya:- Pata nahi Neha...bahut ajeeb sa lag raha hai...ek ajeeb sa darr lag raha hai

Neha with a naughty grin...Madam isse darr nahi anxiety kehte hai...aaj raat ko tum apne pati ke baahoo mein hogi aur woh tumhare saat...

Priya:- Shut up Neha...Kuch bhi bole jaa rahi ho...muje sach mein eisa lag raha hai kuch jo sahi nahi hai

Neha:- Priya yeh sab sochna bandh kar aur sirf apne shaadi ke baare mein soch...Soch ki aaj raat tu aur Ashwin kya kya kar rahe honge.

Vikram and Ram also reached. Everything is ready from Priya's side. Panjit ji came. Everybody is waiting for groom. Priya, Neha , Vikram all are continuously trying Ashwin on his phone but his phone is not reachable.

Pandit ji:- Muhurat ka samay nikla jaa raha hai

Shipra to Priya:- Ashwin kahan hai abhi tak aaya kyun nahi

Priya(worryingly):- pata nahi maa Ashwin ka phone lag nahi raha hai.

Shipra:- dekh priya..waise hi teri wajah se kaafi badnami ho chuki hai abb ek aur tamasha matt kada karna.

Neha:- Aunty...kuch nahi hoga...Ashwin aa jaayega...Vikram dekhne gaya hai.

Shipra left in anger. Priya becomes more worried.

Neha:- Priya tu tension matt le...Ashwin aa jaayega.

Ram was watching all this silently.

 

They waited for some more time when a little girl came with a letter in her hand and gave it to Priya and run away. Priya become worried and opens the letter and reads it:-

 Priya I am Sorry. Mein tumse shaadi nahi kar sakta. Ho sake toh muje maaf kar dena...Ashwin. 

Priya was baffled and frozen in that moment...Neha took the letter from her hand. News spread like a fire and people have started talking about Priya's character. Neha tries to console her but she is sitting like a rock. She shakes Priya a little but Priya is not showing any reaction. No tears, No movement nothing. Ram could not control himself anymore and he went tocheck Sudhir condition. Sudhir is sitting with his head down. Ram introduces himself and said "He is willing to marry Priya". 
                                                      Vikram and Neha become shocked but at the same time happy for Ram because they know Ram loves Priya a lot and Priya is a good choice for him. But Priya opposes this but this time Sudhir did not listen anything and said "Priya abb tune yeh shaadi nahi ki toh hum kisi ke mooh dhikane ke laayak nahi rahenge...hamare baare mein toh nahi toh kam se kam apni behen ke baare mein toh soch...tu Ram se shaadi karegi warna hum sabka mara hua mooh dekgi". Priya left with no option and she reluctantly agrees to marry ram. marriage was over..

When Esha came to know about Ram and Priya marriage she fumes in anger. She screams and throws the things here and there breaking the mirror. She's gone mad. Ram informed his parents and they made all arrangements for Priya's grahpravesh. In the Evening he brought Priya home. She entered after hitting the kalash. Then both took blessing from Ram's parents.

Krishna:- Ram...Priya ko apne kamre mein lekar jaao.

Ram takes her to his room.

Ram:- Tum chaho toh fresh ho sakti ho...mein abhi neeche se aata hoon. Priya is silent. She feels she is in a dream. So many things happen in one day. She still not believes that she was actually married to Ram. She has never imagined Ram will be her husband even in her wildest dream. She takes mangalsutra in her hand and stare it for some time and remembers her marriage. tears threating to fall from her beautiful kholed eyes... Drops of tears fall from her eyes.

 

Priya thinks "Mein abb Esha ko kaise face karungi...kya kahungi mein usse se...Ashwin mein tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi". She got up, took her night suit and went to change. Ram came back to his him. He sits on the bed and switch on the TV. At the same time Priya came back from washroom.

Ram:- Priya tum aaram karna chahti ho toh mein TV off kar deta hoon.

Priya:- Mein ek baat puchu???

Ram:- haan pucho

Priya:- Tumne mujse shaadi kyun ki.

Ram looks at her closely and said "woh issliye kyunki mein tumse pyar karta hoon "

Priya:- Aur Esha????

Ram:- Meine kaha na Priya mein tumse pyar karta hoon

Priya:- Phir toh aap aaj bahut kush honge ki meri shaadi Ashwin se nahi hui.

Ram heaves a sigh and said "Muje sirf iss baat ki kushi hai ki meri shaadi tumse hui. Ashwin se muje kuch lena dena nahi hai.

 

Next morning,

Priya stirs from her sleep. She looks everywhere but Ram is nowhere in the room. She gets up from the bed, takes her clothes and went to freshen up. After gets ready she came down. Priya greeted Krishna with a smile.

Krishna:- Aa gayi beta...kal teek se neend aayi na...Kal meri tumse jyada baat nahi hui...issliye pehle tum nashta kar lo uske baad hum baithkar bahut saari baate karenge.

Priya(hesitantly):- Maa...Ram kahan hai

Krishna:-Aaj sham ko party hai na toh Ram uski taiyaari karne hi gaya hai.

Priya is taking her breakfast silently. After breakfast she spends some time with Krishna.

Krishan:- Pata hai Priya aaj kahi dino ke baad meine Ram ke chehre mein itni kushi dekhi hai. Esha aur Ram mein hamesha jagda hota tha aur Ram hamesha chup rehta tha...pata nahi usko kisne keh diya ki hum uski shaadi Esha se karana chahte hai...lekin mein bahut kush hoon ki usne tumse shaadi ki. Muje mere bete ki pasand bahut achhi lagi...saying this she kisses her on her forehead.

Krishna:- Priya yeh tumhare liye... aaj sham ko yahi pehenna.

Priya nodded and goes back to her room.

Priya came back to her room and kept the sari set on the bed when Esha barged into the room. Priya turned back with the noise...before she reacts Esha slap her hardly on her cheeks and shouted "How dare you Priya...tumhari himmat kaise hui Ram se shaadi karne ki... tumhari aaukat nahi hai iss ghar ki bahu banne ki... muje pehle se hi shak tha ki tum eisa hi kuch karogi issliye tumne pehle Ashwin se shaadi karne ka natak kiya. Tum achhe se janti thi ki Ashwin tumse nahi Shruti se pyar karti hai aur baad mein tumhari situation ko dekhkar Ram ko daya aa gayi aur usne tumse shaadi kar li".

Just then Ram enter his room and shouts back at Esha "How dare you Esha...tumhari himmat kaisi hui meri biwi par haat uthane ki...just get out of my room...iss kamre se hi nahi iss ghar se hi tum nikal jaao aur yahan dobara phir kabhi nahi aana"

Esha held him and said "Ram...dekho...mein tumhari Esha hoon. Priya ne hi yeh saara natak kiya hai...woh janti thi ki Ashwin usse pyar nahi karta phir bhi yeh natak kiya taaki tumse shaadi kar sake...yeh bahaut chalaak ladki hai...tum iski baato mein matt aavo Ram"

Ram controlling his anger "Just out Esha...chali jao warna mein kuch kar dunga...just go"

Esha again turns towards Priya and said "Tumne mere Ram ko mujse cheena hai Priya mein wada karti hoon tumse mein tumhe chain se jeene nahi dungi. Mein tum dono ko barbaad kar dungi yeh mera wada hai tumse".

Priya closed her eyes and listen everything and said nothing. Tears rolled out from her eyes.

The liquid sadness flowed down her soft cheeks, leaving a wet, black trail of makeup in the path. Her body shook and convulsed as if she no longer had control of it. She struggled to breathe with each desperate gasp of air she took, only to release it again in another forceful sob. 

Esha left in anger. Ram tries to speak with Priya but she wipes her tears and left the room.

 

After some time Priya came back to room to take some rest but many unwanted thought came into her mind so she decided to read some books and divert her mind. She saw Ram had big collection of books. She checks one by one when her eyes fall on his dairy. She is in dilemma whether to read the dairy or not but at last she decided she will read his dairy to know about him.

Priya opens the dairy and turns the first page. She becomes stunned and her eyes becomes wide when she saw her pencil sketch in the dairy and below it written PRIYA MY LOVE. She turns the second page and started reading. Ram inscribed everything about her in the dairy. His feeling when he first saw her...her looks her dressing, about her smiles, how he felt when he talks with her first time. How much he misses her on Sunday. He hate Sundays. He knows everything about her. Her likes, dislikes everything. He penned down everything about her. She also came to know he never loved Esha. Esha is a big mistake of his life. Reading his dairy Priya eyes becomes teary. She cannot believe how anybody can love to this extent madly.

She closed the book. She is feeling miserable. She kept the dairy back in place.

Krishan called her for lunch and she shrugged off everything for some time.

Krishna:- Tum jaldi se lunch kar lo..Meine beautician ko bulaya hai uske baad tum taiyaar ho jana

Priya Nodded.

 

In the Evening:

Priya gets ready for the function. Beautician did her makeup , dressing and left. Neha also helps her in getting ready. Priya is nervous and hesitate to come out because of her deep back cut blouse as she was not used to.

Neha:- Kya hua Priya...tum itni pareshaan kyun lag rahi ho

Priya:- Neha meine pehle kabhi eisa nahi pehna hai...mujse nahi hoga.

Neha:- Madam abb tum Mrs. Kapoor ho...aur inn sab ki aadat daal do...waise kal Ram aur tumhare beech mein...

Priya:- Neha...shut up yaar...Neha giggled and both came down.

In the function,

Ram and Priya exchange the rings. Both cut the cake together and fed each other. Ram's hand slightly brushes Priya's hand and he held her hand slowly.. priya just glance at him but said nothing. Function goes off well and Raya came back to room.

Next morning Priya gets ready for college. Seeing her dressed up Ram asked "tum kahi jaa rahi ho"

Priya:- Mein college jaa rahi hoon...tum nahi aa rahe

Ram:- Nahi...Mein aaj se dad ke saat business join kar raha hoon...mein sirf exam attend karne jaaunga.

In college, everybody wish her.

Esha:- Ohh Good toh tum college aa gayi...kyun Ashwin ko dekhe bina nahi raha jaa raha

Priya:- Shut up Esha

Esha:- wow...sab dekho kon muje shut up kar raha hai...abhi Ashwin ki baate isse achhi nahi lag rahi ...mere Ram ko cheenkar tum eise aaram se nahi reh sakti. Tum dogli ho Priya subah Ashwin ke saat aur raat ko Ram ke saat.

Neha shouts and stops her in middle and said "Bass abb ek baar aur tumne Priya ke baare mein kuch kaha toh mujse bura aur koi nahi hoga. Mein tumhari frustration samjajti hoon Esha lekin tumhe yeh sachaayi accept karni hogi ki Ram ne kabhi tumse pyar nahi kiya...Aur mein bahut kush hoon ki Ram ki shaadi tumse nahi Priya se hui hai".

Esha:- How dare you Neha...tum mujse eise baat nahi kar sakti...Ram sirf mera hai aur mera hi rahega.

Priya:- Neha...Please chalo yahan se...and she took Neha from there.

Neha(angrily):- Esha tumhe itna sab kuch bol rahi hai aur tumne usse kuch nahi kaha.

Priya:- Mein kya kahu Neha usse...Mein samaj sakti hoon ki Esha par kya guzar raha hoga...apni aakhon ke saamne apne pyar ko kisi aur ka hote hue dekhna koi nahi seh sakta.


Evening Priya came back from college. She opens her suitcase and saw her clothes are missing. She came back to room and saw Ram is doing some work. Priya called Ram angrily "meri dress kahan hai"

Ram:- konsa sa dress...ohh achha woh...woh toh meine cupboard mein rakk diya.

Priya:- What???...tumne mere kapdo ko haat lagaya.

Ram:- haan...kyun..tum itna overreact kyun kar rahi ho. Tum dress ke liye apna suitcase baar baar kholti ho toh muje laga ki cupboard mein rakk deta hoon toh tumhe problem nahi hogi. Eisi baar baar apna suitcase kholna bhi nahi padega.

Priya:-Thank you for being so generous...mujse bol diya hota eise mere kapdo ko haat lagane ki kya zaroorat thi... Aapne mere woh wale kapde bhi...she stops and continued...How you could do this...she stare at him angrily.

Ram:- Kyaa kiya meine cupboard kholkar dekh lo sab wahi rake diye hai...bhalayi ka zamana hi nahi raha.

Priya becomes so angry...Grrr...she stamp her feet and murmurs "what he thinks about himself...meri cheeze mujse bina puche haat lagaye. She went inside and opens the cupboard and she got another shock. ...What???...mere kapde apne kapdo ke saat mess up kar diye hai aur shelf kitna gande se rakka hua hai...eise lag raha hai kapde rake nahi phek diye hai...shelf kitna messy hai...isme muje apni cheeze dhundne mein hi ek ganta lag jaayega...Ohh God...meri kisse shaadi hui.  Mein janti hoon Ram ne jaanbhukar muje pareshaan karne ke liye kiya hai yeh sab.

Priya heave a sigh in frustration and said "Chal Priya abb tuje hi cupboard saaf karna padega. Ohh god muje itna saara work karna hai college ka aur mein yahan fasi hui hoon".

She takes out all clothes from the cupboard and neatly folds it one by one.

Ram:- Priya ko itna waqt kyun lag raha hai...mein hi jaakar dekhta hoon. He entered into the changing room and peeps inside and saw Priya is neatly folding her dresses. She kept all her dress on one side and throws Ram's dress on the other side and closed the cupboard angrily.

Ram(think):- What???? Mere kapdo ko phek diya

She moves from there but she stops, turns back and opens the cupboard and takes out all Ram's cloth and folded it nicely and puts on the other side of the cupboard.

Ram watches this and smile appear in his face. He came out and after some time Priya also came out. She looks up in the watch and realizes she took full two hours for cleaning.

 

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Yayyy ... ...πŸ₯³

after a long time ,, I reserved first on your post again πŸ˜‰ 
feeling happy πŸ˜›

Unreserved ::****

Oh My Oh My i haven't expected that its all over a new story , aww baby Thank you so much for the wonderful gift πŸ˜‰ Romantic nahi toh kya baby RAYA hai na πŸ˜‰ .. 
aww sandy beautiful start with twists pe  twist in only on update .. 
 I HATE that  fellow still u brought him in this update also too bad sandyyy .. this is my bday OS πŸ˜­πŸ˜† 

I loved the way Ram aproaches priya and talked with her . she lightly   took off everything and talked with him , i hate this ashwin , when he has feelings for sruthi than why the hell he cancelled priyas wedding , but her parents did good thing arranging the marriage same day with ashwin 
lol he might not expected this soon so he left with sruthi .. 
and coming to Esha being together growing together with Ram she must felt  he is only hers . but she has to think from hisside also na  .. whats there from his side .. 


Good narration about the relationship  Ram & esha .. 
eqaully all characters .. 
Sandy I wanted to tell one thing here , after reading esha and Ram 's realtion  i just want to share my feelings .. 



 When the two persons or in a realtionship called friendship , 
wether its female or male has feelings for the opposite 
first they have to think about the other person feelings also ..well does he/ she having same thoughts or not or feelings or not .. 

and In any relationship , If you want to lock him/her [ like esha did to Ram ,dont talk with anygirl etc etc ] 

Obviously how he will get love on her .. 
Common They needs trust each other .. esha dont have that .. 
so the relationship brokes in a part .. and who will live with a spouse who fought for every small thing 

under line the point , OVERLOVING also not good in some cases .. 




And coming to priya point of view , she has trusted ashwin so much but from ashwin side he betrayed her 
here lack of genunity in Priya's trusting means thats called blind trust .. 
 hope i voiced out my opinion here .. 

 but in one episode you have too beautifull nararted every aspect sandy 
hats off to you once again .. and loved to the core ... 

Thank you thank you once again .. 
And im already eagerly waiting for your next part .. 
when u going to post .. 


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Awesome OS...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
At first i was shocked that Raya r not a couple... its interesting Start...
nevik toh hamesha couple hote hai... aur raya k milaane k koshish karte rehte...πŸ˜›
and then i was bit relaxed to know that ram have a crush on priya...πŸ˜‰
yehh Ashwin n Isha jaisa log raya k beach mai aate jaate rehte haiπŸ˜†...but finally raya hi milenge...⭐️
Esha kuch jyaada hi over kar rahi. hai..😑
achaa shipra priya k shaadi rajat se karna chahti...πŸ˜†
how straightly priya replied to rajat...very nicee...πŸ‘
yehh ashwin n shruti kitna acting kar raha hai...
yayyy finally raya k shaadi hogayi...πŸ₯³
Grrr...esha slapped priya..😑 how dare she...? ram have given a good reply to her..πŸ˜†

woww...!! priya found ram's diary... dairy scene is very good...
cupboard part is very nice...and u nicely described abt priya's reaction...so cutee..
achaa...priya ram k kapde b nicely fold karke rakha hai... how sweet...
continue soon...😊

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Awesome OS...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

At first i was shocked that Raya r not a couple... its interesting Start...
nevik toh hamesha couple hote hai... aur raya k milaane k koshish karte rehte...πŸ˜›
and then i was bit relaxed to know that ram have a crush on priya...πŸ˜‰
yehh Ashwin n Isha jaisa log raya k beach mai aate jaate rehte haiπŸ˜†...but finally raya hi milenge...⭐️
Esha kuch jyaada hi over kar rahi. hai..😑
achaa shipra priya k shaadi rajat se karna chahti...πŸ˜†
how straightly priya replied to rajat...very nicee...πŸ‘
yehh ashwin n shruti kitna acting kar raha hai...
yayyy finally raya k shaadi hogayi...πŸ₯³
Grrr...esha slapped priya..😑 how dare she...? ram have given a good reply to her..πŸ˜†

woww...!! priya found ram's diary... dairy scene is very good...
cupboard part is very nice...and u nicely described abt priya's reaction...so cutee..
achaa...priya ram k kapde b nicely fold karke rakha hai... how sweet...
continue soon...😊

Thanks for comments joπŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
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u r welcome di...πŸ€—
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waiting for next part...πŸ˜›