Nisha... this just keeps getting better and better. Life got me busy so i wasn't able to enjoy this properly and I come and read and I feel like I've bee on a roller coaster ride...
I really admire the tempos and mood switches in each chapter and how beautifully you handle, craft and balance between them. What I love about your writing is that it's never OTT... always beautifully written and described and right at the edge of the emotion without seeming cliche .
I love the little peeks into R&B's mind- you really keep him mysterious in the best of ways and I love it. But his concerns and inner battles read so genuine- I appreciate that he isn't shown to have a 'eureka moment' so to speak but rather going to the process of evaluating and understanding to get to his realization- very realistic. I think that's the word I use most when I describe your work but I just can't think of a better compliment for this... or a better way to describe why it has such a pull for me and I'm sure so many others as well.
I also really appreciate your little insights in to both sets of parents' minds... and your description of the chocolate cake comparison honestly made me laugh because @ some point I think I relayed that that's how i feel about this story.
Things are finally at a heads now and I am so excited to see what's next for all of them. Seems everything is out in the open for the most part on II's side at least and it's a beautiful place for her to be really. She needs to go through that to get to the other side and I am eager to see how she gets there.
Terrific job, as always. And thank you very much for taking us on this beautiful journey.
Edited by RomComFan - 6 years ago