SW Symph 3-"I am Sam" on 139 - Page 12

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Posted: 7 years ago
Ok I have a lot of catching up to do with my comments. Tongue
For thread 2 updates.

Part 100:
I am falling more and more in love with the Shravu-II jodi...they are so damn cute/adorable! She's totally a doting aunt to her nephew but yet questions if she can be a good mother...go figure. Confused

You left it off at a huge cliffhanger but I can just go to the next part. Benefit of reading late and having to catch up. LOL

Part 101:
Scalene triangle! ROFL 
Bande ko 2 words bolne nahi pade ki madam pinghal gayi...I knew she was a goner before, but now it's confirmed, totally lost case she is. Tongue
The babysitting sesh was much better than I expected. Thank you for that! Smile

Part 102:
Oh dear god...Sree is at Vandu's? At 10:30 pm on a Sunday night when everyone has school/work the next day?? Seriously?
Never have I been more thankful to be catching up...yeh kaisa cliffhanger tha! 

Part 103:
He agreed with Vandu that II is a brat. LOL
Uske peeche peeche khada raha..."like he's some 3 yr old kid" Tongue So cute. Day Dreaming
Akka is very perceptive...more than Sam for sure.
Chalo, at least now the truth about his double CMU degree is out.
I don't like Sree...he's too ?? Idk...pushy? But in the indirect kind of way...which just makes it more annoying.

Btw, the part about Bournvita was a nice touch. In our house, we usually make badam ka milk with kesar. Smile

More in a bit when I read the updates from thread 3. Big smile
Posted: 7 years ago
Part 104:
Aww poor II. A hug to her...Hug
Rakshasan has upstaged her in the education department aur ab ghar pe bhi. Cry
All I have to say for Vandu is that she is one smart woman. 
Pata chala nahi ki R&B is a CMU grad and she shows up in his office with a marriage proposal. LOL
Loved the Vandu-II convo though and her ending up at R&B's office was a total shocker, completely unexpected. Shocked
Posted: 7 years ago
Part 106
The Devil & his consort

R&B glanced at her, did not pause or look at exchange any meaningful message with her, Ouch
she wore a black and white kalamkarti kurta with a Nehru collar and a white churidar, her hair braided up higher and wore a black kajal bindi like an arrow
Ominous sign? Maybe...Embarrassed

She saw his watered down pink cotton shirt as thin as muslin, reflecting the white vest underneath... he could be wearing a garbage bacg and he would look sexyBlushing, carelessly tucked in at some places and left out at othersEmbarrassed as if tucking it all in would be too much workBlushing
She told herself

"EPPO VANDEY? "when did u come?" she ran to hug VanduHug
Vandu hugged her stiffly, turned and saw the elevator door close on a inscrutable R&B, he had both his ear buds on nowEmbarrassed

"A while ago" Akka mutteredAngry
"Let me show u my cube ka" she dragged her
Found an attendant in the marble hallway, "Akka ke liye chai laaogey kya please, nahi ruko Perk se milkshake... aao mere cube mein"
"No kanna I ate veggie puffs, pastries, cookie and some almond dessert" Aka said SMUGLYEmbarrassedLOLWink
"Where?" II asked annoyedCry
"R&B vaangi kuduthan he bought stuff" Akka saidROFL
II turned red "Why did u eat with him when u were coming to see ME" II was offendedAngry
"I didnt come to see u" Evil SmileAkka said as they entered her large-r cube... with emails and reports stacked everywhere.. 
and two huge 27 in monitors and her Apple iMac open and glowing at a distance... Shravu and her pictures everywhere...Embarrassed
Her Grad school commencement photo, both IIM and GT... and some goofy Madurai pictures and Delhi winter pictures in bed with Appa watching Sun TV
Making facesLOL

A wall had lots of pictures...
Akka browsed... not talking...
"Idu eppo eduthadu?" "when was this taken?" she asked
"2012 June Madurai trip" II said cheerfully
"II found her purse and handed the guy Rs.500, do vanilla milk shake" she smiled
"Bhayya mere waale mein zyaada whipped creamEmbarrassed" (YA II IS NOT A FUFU fat free milk free calorie free  sugar free chickClap)
He smiled and left...
"Lunch enna kudutha Amma?" Vandu askedEmbarrassed
"MMM... shimla mirch paneer and roti" II saidLOL
"How are u feeling ka" II hugged...Embarrassed

"Akka looked at the pictures and and asked "Nee avan kitta sonneya nee Sree Kalyanam pannikka poren nu?" "Did u tell the guy u will marry Sree?"Angry
II dropped the cordless mouse...ROFL
"He told u that in the elevator?" II asked sarcasticallyAngry

Akka turned, her eyes were bloodhsot... Akka didnt get angry much... errmm... a lot with Bala and a ... lot-er with ShravuLOL... but with II... she adored II
But today II will get a taste of Akka's gussaAngry

"No I asked him if he will marry you and he told me taking two husbands is illegal in India" Akka bit out each wordAngry
II was a glorious redBlushing

"Marry ME?" II croaked

"Well he cant marry ME ille? Bala will kill him" Akka joked without smilingEmbarrassed
Bally walked in

"arey wah Iyer ke cube mein visitor?" 
"Yeh le yaar I looked at Dilshad Garden system reports nothing jumps out at me, East ka pehla showroom hai na, installation ke liye... so anyway Ashwini is all upbeat, tu bhi check kar le"
He left a stack of paper reports

Turned to smile at Vandita... II was still red and almost choking...

Her mind channeling that image of her as an Iyer bride from four? five Sundays ago... 
when Appa was talking to her in her room and she was putting press waala clothes away... 
she felt R&B's fingers on her toes, as he pushed the tuby mettis/toe rings on her long toe, his hair slipping to his forehead, bending down at her feet...
Her other hand held in a scooped grip... firm grip... like he will never let her go... she would carress 
that toe with the big toe when he would be done, or think he was done, only to find his fingers with it... she choked... gasping for air

"Hey, Vandan? Vandu?" Bally gushed
Vandita composed her expression and smiled half heartedly

"U must think its a 21st century tech firm, aur dekho ek poora ream paper ka chhodne aaya banda" Bally laughed "Yahan hum KUCH kaam 18th century mein rehkar karte hain" "Baldev Gupta" he said
"Ofcourse I met u at Ankur's sports meet, Shravu was in cross country, yaad hai inter school?" Vandu recalled
"Oh teri! U have a great memory, Suman se kabhi nahi milna please, meri yeh aapse request hai..."
"Yaad hai KV IIT mein hua tha meet" Vandu continued
He held Vandu's hands and looked at II "Dekh Iyer ise kehte hain memory"
"II nodded fearfully... afraid whats coming after Bally leaves...

AYYO NANNA MAATTINDE, AKKA WENT AND ASKED THE GUY TO MARRY YOU
RAKSHASAN!! HE TOLD HER HE "WOULD" IF II WAS NOT MARRYING SREE
RAKSHASAN... LIKE HE EVER PROPOSED TO ME...
AYYO
NOT ONCE HE HAS SAID ANYTHING TO "ME"
HE TELLS AKKA I WUD HAVE MARRIED HER IF SREE WAS NOT...
HOW ABOUT TELL AKKA "Well I cant marry her because I cant take a wife to Paris to the house my GF is IN"
She felt sad and teary... HOW DARE HE...

"II to Mars mein rehti hai aajkal, Good to meet u... aaj Ankur ka cast utar raha hai, 
Suman mujhe  woh cast chadha degi main chalta hoon, le jao isko ghar, office mein padi rehti hai 70 ghante hafte mein" Baldev ordered Vandita
"Haan ghar le jaakar iska keema banane aayi hoon main" Akka said bluntly

"Iyer log keema bhi khaate hain?" Ballya sked
"Majboori mein keema... falooda sab khaana padta hai" she smiled
"Oh BTW, suna hai aap isko phir maasi bana rahe ho?" Bally asked returning
Vandu smiled shyly... "Congrats, khaana mithai, kuch nahi aaya Iyer ke ghar se"
Akka took her phone out and asked for his number, texted her address and said she will call suman for dinner over the weekend
Baldev gave II a "look"
"Shaadi karo aur jaldi se have babies, I need dinner and lunch invites kiddo" he tapped her head and waved and left

"Karegi na shaadi sapne mein to a man who she doesnt like.." Akka hissed

"WHY DID U ASK HIM TO MARRY ME?" II shrieked
"WHY? Do I have toa sk u EVERYTHING?" akka demanded
The attendant brought their milkshakes, she let him have the change

Akka said, "lets go to an empty conf room, they found one in the center island... a 4 seater one... Akka shut all the blinds and the door and leaned on it
"ETHANA POI ISHITA?" "Why SO MANY LIES?"

II leaned on the blinds... red and ashamed

YOU DID NOT LOOK AT Sree yesterday... OR THIS MORNING (his flight was cancelled he didnt 
leave until Noon so he came by in the morning too, before II left for work from Akka's house, will update on that later)

R&B sticks to u like GLUE when u come to Munirka... have u noticed the way he LOOKS at you? or u think everyone is blind?" Akka demanded
II mumbled shocked

"Are u two dating?' akka asked
"NOOO DID HE SAY THAT?" II demanded
DO NOT ARGUE, AND DO NOT BAD MOUTH HIM" Akka hissed
" Did he say"
"Shut up Ishita... uve been seeing him havent you?" Akka asked
"NO I HAVE NOT... NOT ONE DATE AKKA" II expressed grief... despair HE HAS NOT TAKEN ME ANY PLACE ROMANTIC HE HAS NOT 
LOOKED AT ME LIKE I AM THE ONLY ONE, HE NEVER BOUGHT FLOWERS FOR ME HE SENT ME A BUNCH OF BOOKS TOLD ME HE WANTS TO MAKE LOVE TO ME IN WRITING... IN WRITING
SLEPT IN MY BED... ATE ALOO MATAR...

"Not one date na... uve seen him outside of dates?" Akka asked
"A couple times... when I went to pick Shravu up" II said
"Ayyyoo Kanna... why did u create this house of cards... he came home didnt he when Periappa had an AIIMS apptt?" Akka asked
II began to cry... and nodded
Akka went up and hugged her

"he was really mean to me at work... and he came to apologize"

"Shhh... shhh" Akka consoled... cajoling her "No kanna... no da" please
"He is a devil.. he is a rotten devil" II ranted
"Did he spend the day with u?" Akka probed

II nodded deafeatedly, savoring the best Saturday of her life

"Shhh...u told him u will marry Sree? Why? Did he ask u to marry him?" Akka asked

II turned crimson... "Noo" "Noo" "Not once" she mumbled sobbing

"WHY DID U SAY U were getting married?"

"Because he is a dog.. he has a French girlfriend... some say she is older, he has a on again off again or an OPEN (air quotes) relationship
and that he is a nomad and will never settle down, and doesnt even live in India, 
since he cannot live without sex I am his sex toy" II sobbed into her Akka's shoulder

Akka froze in shock
NO... SHE IS WRONG R&B IS NOT LIKE THAT... Ishita thinks like THAT about him? Akka's gut was not willing to hate him...
Akka held her face and asked
"When did he tell u that?"

"HE DIDNT" II sobbed, his sister did
"SAM? SAM DID?" akka asked
"Ille Manny" Ii sobbed
Akka looked confused...
"His other sister Manny"
"she TOLD YOU?" akka asked
"No she told Tan... Tanmay at the baby's party she said wiping her tears,
The whipped cream had watered down, she just drank the leaking milkshake furiously giving herself a milk moustache

"IS THAT WHY YOU GOT SO SICK?' Akka asked dumbfounded
Akka sat down... "Thats why u did didnt u? The Doctor asked me if u are in a relationship" Akka recalled
II blushed gloriously
"Is it physical?" Akka asked seeing her go red..
Akka reached for a spot on her ear tip and didnt touch... just let her shocked finger drop
"You have love bites" she said staring at her shy sister

"I mean... no... I mean... yes... but not... I mean.."II fumbled and stumbled and gasped.. "Akka I am unable to think straight" she begged

"He knocked your socks off?" Akka asked startled...
"I feel unsteady and light headed when we fight... he is very persuasive" II said HONESTLY

Ii stood up turning away hiding her face and ear, letting out a lock over it

Akka walked behind her... turned her around...

"So it is him... thats been causing u to be so deviant... and a compulsive liar... did HE send the silk pouch to me?" she asked
II nodded feebly... sitting down
Akka wiped her tears and held her face...
Akka looked baffled "Ayyo he is a devil" "isnt he?"
II's heart expanded in her chest 5 times the size, choking her...

"Why are u trying to hurt him so mercilessly?" Akka whispered on her face held in Akka's hand
"Because I hate him" II said, as if any other answer would be like baring it all and she wouldnt even bare it ALL to HERSELF
"Thats what I thought" Akka said... letting go of her face

"what a mess kanna" Akka fumed... "Your Rakshasan is the proverbial devil" "AND U ARE HIS CONSORT" Akka said angrily




Posted: 7 years ago
Part 105:
He really just doesn't get fazed by much does he? Or maybe he does and he's just really good at hiding it? Confused But kuch bhi kehlo, he is definitely internally affected by her announcement of marriage to Sree. Kahin na kahin to jal raha hai thoda sa. LOL And he finally admitted indirectly that he has at least thought about THEM being together. Dancing
Poor Vandu...she's not understanding how she could possibly be wrong. But of course, II toh khud ke hi pair pe kulahdi maar kar baithi hai Angry
Vandu's plans went down the drain, but at least he didn't outright reject the proposal. He just truthfully revealed to her about II announcing her marriage to Sree. Matlab, there's hope!
Btw Vandu shouldn't give up so easily because without her and Sam secretly pushing II-R&B together, there's no hope.
His google search is something that I also did...beautiful pics. I can only foresee how amazingly you will describe their wedding. Can't wait for it, but lots to happen before that!
Edited by nividances - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
All her lies finally came out...
You hinted at how her house of cards was going to fall soon and it finally did. Loved it Nish, but what's the next bomb that you're going to explode?
I see that we are going to get a glimpse into the Sree-II meeting from earlier than morning, but when are Amma-Appa finally going to be let into the circle of truth? I don't foresee that revelation going as smoothly as this one did.
Posted: 7 years ago
Phew! Finally all caught up for now. Smile
Congrats once again on the thread 3 Nish...and more than 100 parts. Clap 

When I started reading I never expected to get so hooked onto this story, nor did I expect it to turn out so elegant and composed. Truthfully, I was a little confused/unimpressed by your writing style when I read the first chapter, but you've really grown on me as a writer in this short time. I'm sorry for underestimating you earlier (even if it was just in my head). *kaan pakde*
It was one of my better decisions to both start and continue reading though because you totally proved that you can't judge a book by its cover. Hidden behind the imperfect sentence structure and grammar is a solid story that stands on its own.

I'm running out of adjectives to describe your story with so I think a Google search is warranted...I'll be back with a whole new arsenal of words in my future comments. LOL
Posted: 7 years ago
Part 106 - Awesome Smile
Posted: 7 years ago
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