Bade Acche Laggte Hai

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Hope u all remember the scene where Karthik chooses Jhanvi over Natasha and the relationship between Raya becomes ruined and after the plane crash they becomes united. Instead of plane crash I showed Raya milan in my way.

 

OS: Love Forever 


Ram stirred from his sleep. Priya is not there in the room. He gets up and gets ready for the office. Absence of Priya in the room made him angry and it can clearly see on his face. He raises his voice and called Bansi kaka. Bansi Kaka came running.

Ram:- Priya Madam kahan hai

BK:- Saab Priya Madam toh subah hi kahi nikal gayi

Ram:- Kuch batakar gayi kahan jaa rahi hai

BK:- Nahi saab...Madam ne kuch kaha nahi

Ram:- Teek hai tum jao...Ram thinks "Ohh toh iska matlab Priya ko abb batakar jaana bhi zaroori nahi lagta. Gayi hogi apne bhai ke paas...waise bhi usse iss ghar se jyada uss ghar ke logo ko jyada chintaa rehti hai. Itna sab hone ke baad bhi Priya apne bhai karthik ka saat de rahi hai...teek hai agar Priya karthik ka saat de rahi hai toh mein bhi apni behen Natasha ka saat dunga"...Ram came out from his room and looks for Natasha.

He enter into Natasha room

Ram:- Chotti...kya kar rahi hai...chal aaj hum dono saat mein naashta karte hai

By then Rishab also entered.

Ram:- Rishab tu...achha hua...ek saat milkar naashta karke kaafi time ho gaya..chale

Natasha:- Rishab chalo na aaj hum dono kahi bahar se breakfast karte hai...waise bhi iss ghar mein sirf priya ki pasand ka hi khana banta hai

Ram:- Chotti yeh tu kaisi baat kar rahi hai...yeh ghar tum dono ka hai

Rishab:- bass kariye bhai...yeh natak aap kisi aur ko dhikayiye...humne dekh liya ki aap kiske saat hai aur kise apna maante hai.

Natasha:- Karthik ne muje chod uss Jhanvi ke saat rishta bana liya toh phir Priya iss ghar mein kya kar rahi hai.

Rishab:- chalo Natasha..yahan waqt barbad karne se koi faida nahi...Bhai badal gaye hai...kuch bhi ho jaaye yeh apne biwi ka hi saat denge.

 

Ram came back to his room. He said to himself "Priya aaj jo kuch bhi ho raha hai uski wajah sirf tumhara bhai hai aur tum apne bhai ka hi saat de rahi ho. Mein tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga.

He then called her in her mobile but he hears the sound from his room only.

Ram:- awaz toh yahi se aa rahi hai...he followed the tune and found the cell phone on the side of the bed.

Ram(irritatingly):- wahh...Madam phone yahi rakkar chali gayi...abb mein sharma house call karke tumse baat nahi karne wala Priya.

Shrugging out his thought Ram went to check Pihu. He entered into Pihu's room and saw Pihu is doing something.

Ram:- Kya kar rahi ho rockstar

Pihu:-  mumma ke liye card bana rahi hoon

Ram:- Kyun

Pihu:- Papa aapko yaad nahi aaj mumma ka birthday hai. Mein morning mumma ko wish karne ke liye aayi bhi thi lekin mumma room mein nahi thi.

Ram(confusedly):- B'day!!!!!!...Aaj 12 january hai...oh shit!!!.mein Priya ka b'day bhool kaisa gaya...Shaadi ke baad muje kabhi mauka nahi mila Priya ka b'day manane ka aur abb panch saal ke baad aaj muje mauka mila hai Priya ka b'day manane ka aur mein priya ka B'day hi bhool gaya. Yeh mujse kya ho gaya. 

Ram forgets all his anger and call in Sharma house. Shipra attended the call.

Shipra:- Kahiye mr. Ram kaise phone kiya

Ram:- Muje priya se baat karni hai

Shipra:- Priyaaa!!!! Lekin Priya toh yahan nahi aayi

Ram:- Priya wahan nahi hai

Shipra(worriedly):- Priya teek toh hai na

Ram:- Haan..haan Priya bilkul teek hai...usne kaha tha ki mandir se aate waqt wahan aayegi...Priya aaye toh ek baar phone kar dene bolna...woh apna phone yahi bhool gayi hai

Shipra:- teek hai Mr. Ram..woh aati hai toh aapse baat karne ke liye kehti hoon. Both hangs the call.

 

Ram thinks "Priya apne ghar nahi gayi toh kahan jaa sakti hai" worriedly he called Neha but Priya was not there...Priya Neha ke saat bhi nahi hai...shayad Shruti ke paas gayi hogi...Ram then called Shruti but he got the same answer.  Priya Shruti ke saat bhi nahi hai toh kahan jaa sakti hai...tension arose in him.

Ram:- kahan jaa sakti hai Priya...meine kitne baar usse samjaya ki kahi bhi jaaye toh apne phone saat lekar jaaya kare...lekin woh meri baat sunti kahan hai...kahi doctor ke paas toh nahi chali gayi...nahi nahi...uska aaj appointment bhi nahi hai woh toh next week hai..kahi Priya ko koi problem toh nahi hua...he becomes more tensed. Hurriedly he left to vikram's house.

In Vikram's house

Vikram:- Kya hua Ram...Tu priya ke baare mein itna soch kyun raha hai...Priya jahan bhi hogi teek hi hogi..sham tak ghar aa jaayegi

Ram(angrily:- Priya muje bina bataye kahi chali gayi hai...kahan gayi kyun gayi kuch nahi pata...Mein pata karu toh nhi kahan karu...aur tu keh raha hai ki kyun soch raha hoon...

Vikram:- Toh tu kya chahta hai Ram...Priya kahi bhi jaaye  tuje batakar jaaye

Ram:- Off course muje batana chahiye...usse muje batana chahiye ki woh kahan jaa rahi hai kyun jaa rahi hai

Vikram:- Kyun??? ek baat bata jab se Natasha aur karthik ke beech mein problems start hui hai tune kab Priya se teek se baat kiya hai...Kab tune usse bataya ki tu kahan jaa raha hai kya kar raha hai...Jab bhi Priya tujse baat karne ki koshish ki tune hamesha usse gusse se jawab diya... tune ek baar bhi nahi socha ki she is pregnant aur abb tuje chintaa ho rahi hai ki Priya kahan hai...Y Ram

Ram puts his head down. He was silent

Vikram:- Ramm...mein janta hoon tu Natasha se bahut pyar karta hai lekin jab bhi koi problems aati hai tu Natasha ko hamesha Priya se upar rakta hai...Jab bhi Natasha aur karthik ke beech mein koi bhi problem hoti hai toh uska asar tum dono ke rishte mein dhikta hai.

Neha came with a cup of coffee.  Ram kept silent ...He realized his fault and felt bad for his behavior.

Vikram(consoling):- Ram tu tension matt le Priya kahi gayi hogi aa jaayegi.

Neha:- tune uske ghar phone kiya

Ram:- Priya wahan nahi hai meine Shruti se bhi baat ki Priya wahan bhi nahi hai

Neha:- yeh ladki hai kahan jaa kahan sakti hai

Ram:- Priya ke saat mein hamesha hi eise karta hoon...hamesha usse hurt karta hoon.

Neha caresses him and said "Priya aa jaayegi"

Ram nodded and said "teek hai mein nikalta hoon..shayad Priya ghar aa gayi hogi"

 

Ram came back home and look for Priya everywhere but she is not back. Ram in his room waiting for Priya.

Ram:- 12 baj gaye lekin priya abb tak ghar nahi aayi...apni sehat ka ek baar khayal toh karna chahiye ...Ram gritted his teeth and murmurs "aane do usse". By then Natasha knock the door. Ram turned towards her

Ram:- Chotti tu yahan

Natasha:- Toh aapne kya decide kiya bhai...aap kiska saat denge mera ki apni biwi ka

Ram smirked at her for some time and left from there.

Around 2'o clock

Ram skipped his lunch. He is waiting for her. Tension grew in him. Stress can clearly saw in his forehead. He wipes his sweat and said to himself "kahan chali gayi Priya..please come back. Tumne mujse wada kiya tha ki tum muje chodkar kabhi nahi jaogi..hamesha mere saat rahogi...tum apna wada nahi todd sakti...please come back...wapas aa jaao..mein wada karta hoon Priya aaj ke baad mein kabhi dusro ka gussa tum par nahi nikalunga. Mein hamesha tumhara saat dunga. Kabhi dusro ki wajah se hum mein apne rishte kokharab nahi karenge. Im sorry Priya..eise waqt mein bhi meine tumhe bahut takleef diya...please come back priya. Im nothing without u...His eyes become wet. He put his head down when suddenly he remembers something.

He gets up from the place; took out his mobile and dialed one number. Person from the other side attended the call. He asked about the Priya and immediately left to there. He came out from the room and saw Natasha and Rishab is sitting in the hall discussing something.

Ram(Looking at Natasha and rishab):-  Natasha tum yahi jaanna chahti ho na ki mein kiske saat hoon toh mein kehta hoon mein hamesha Priya ka hi saat dunga. Agar tumhare aur karthik ke beech mein problems hai toh iska matlab yeh nahi ki mein  Priya se alag ho jaau...haan mein manta hoon ki hamari shaadi teri aur karthik ki wajah se hui hai lekin iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum yeh decide karogi ki kab hame saat rehna chahiye aur kab hame alag hona chahiye. Priya ne karthik ka saat bilkul nahi diya phir kyun usse Karthik ki behen hone ki saza de rahi ho...aur Rishab tum Bhabhi bolta hai na apne maa ke samaan manta hai na phir eisa kya kar diya Priya ne ki achanak woh tumhari dushman bann gayi...tune Priya ko itna sab kuch kaha lekin phir bhi Priya ne palat kar tujse kuch nahi kaha. Eisa kya kiya Priya ne jo tum dono Priya ko iss ghar mein dekhna nahi chahte.

Both Natasha and Rishab look down.

Ram:- Aaj Priya ka janamdin hai...aur dekho aaj priya ghar par nahi hai...shaadi ke baad se lekar abb tak meine kabhi bhi Priya ka janamdin nahi manaya...Ram tries to control himself...after pause he continued...mein usse lene jaa raha hoon. Agar tum dono ko lagta hai ki Karthik ki behen hone ki saza Priya ko milni chahiye toh mein Priya ke saat hamesha hamesha ke liye yeh ghar chod dunga. Saying this Ram left.

Ram in car and speeding his car to the orphanage. He was dying to meet his love.  In an hour he reached the orphanage. He already made all arrangement and discussed everything with the Administrative head.

Ram(excitedly) :- Priya kahan hai

HOD:- Priya bachho ke saat garden mein hai...chaliye mein aapko wahan lekar jaati hoon.  

Priya is playing with the childrens and very happy with them. Ram becomes composed when he saw Priya. Already he hurt her badly. Slowly he moves towards her...he was craving to take her in his arms and pour all his love to her.

HOD:- Priyaa...yeh dekho tumse milne kon aaya hai..Priya turned back and saw Ram is standing in front of her. Priya becomes surprised. She never expects Ram will come to orphanage. Sweet eye lock. Ram smiles and take her into warm hug and wishes her Birthday.

Priya broke the hug and asked "aapko yaad tha". Before he said anything all the children came and loudly said together "Happy Birthday Priya Di". All came and hugs her dearly. Priya becomes surprised and becomes very happy.

HOD:- Priya janamdin Mubarak ho...

Priya smiles and nodded her head.

HOD:- chalo ander chalte hai

All the children took Raya inside. Priya becomes surprised to see all the arrangements. Room is beautifully decorated with flowers and balloons and a big cake is placed at the Centre of the table.

HOD:- Priya chalo cake kaato bachhe kabse wait kar rahe hai

Priya:- Aapne yeh sab...I mean aapko kaise pata chala ki aaj mera janamdin hai

HOD:- Mr. Kapoor ne phone karke sab bata diya tha...aur bachho ne yeh sunte hi jaldi jaldi saare arrangements kiye...tumhe pasand aaya

Priya had tears in her eyes and said "Bahut". Priya cut the cake. She takes the small piece and fed Ram first. He takes the same piece and fed her too. After spending some more time in the orphanage Raya left.

 

Raya in car. Ram was silent. Priya ko laga Ram gussa karenge kyunki Priya Ram ko bina bataye gayi thi. Finally she spoke "Mr. Kapoor Aapko pata kaise chala ki mein yahan rahungi"

Ram:- Priya aaj tumhara janamdin hai aur tum kahan ho sakti ho yeh jaane ke liye muje jyada waqt nahi laga. Mrs. Kapoor bahut dara diya...batakar nahi jaa sakti thi

Priya:- Eisa nahi tha Mr. Kapoor mein aapko batana chahti thi lekin aap kaise react karenge muje nahi pata tha issliye nahi bataya

Ram stopped the car. He stares at her for some time. He take her hand in him and said "Priya humne wada kiya tha ki hum kabhi bhi ek dusre se koi baat nahi chupayenge...mein jnta hoon Karthik ka gussa meine tum par nikala...unn dono problems se hamare beech mein problems hui lekin mein wada karta hoon priya aaj ke baad durso ki wajah se hamare rishte mein koi daraar nahi aayegi.

Priya have tears in her eyes.

Ram:- I love you Priya...and he kisses her hand.

Priya wipes her tears and said "I love you too Ram"

Ram:- Lekin Priya muje batakar nahi jaane ki saza toh tumhe zaroor milegi

Priya:- Kyaa???? Saza kaisi saza

Ram came very near to her face and smirked at her and said in a husky tone "woh toh tumhe ghar jaane ke baad apne kamre mein dunga"

Priya blushed and said "Mr. Kapoor aap bahut besharam ho gaye hai...aap ek beti ke baap hai aur do aur bachho ke baap banne wale hai...eisi baate aap par achhi nahi lagti"

Ram pull her near him and said "kyun nahi achhi lagti...kya mein apne biwi ke saat romantic nahi ho sakta...mein jab chahu apni biwi ke saat romance kar sakta hoon...uska mere baap hone se koi relation nahi hai...aur tum yeh matt bolo ki tumhe meri eisi baate karna pasand nahi...mein tumhare chehre par dekh sakta hoon ki tum kitni sharma rahi ho".

Priya:- Mr. Kapoor chodiye muje aur ghar chaliye...Pihu hum dono ko na dekhkar pareshaan ho rahi hogi.

Raya reached KM. Its 7'oclock in the evening but KM is fully dark.

Ram becomes surprised and said "arre bahar toh lights on hai phir ghar mein itna andera kyun hai"

Priya:- Ander chalkar dekhte hai...Both entered and Ram called bansi kaka...suddenly all lights becomes On and everybody KK, Rishab,Saumya, Natasha, shipra ,sudhir Neha, Vikram and Pihu loadly wish Priya a Very happy Birthday.

Priya stunned and delighted and put her both hands on her ears. Ram also becomes happy.  Natasha and Rishab came near her and said sorry.

Rishab:- Bhabhi mein aapse maafi maangna chahta hoon...meine aapke saat bahut batameezi ki hai...Muje maaf kar do Bhabhi

Natasha:- Haan Priya...Meine bhi karthik ka gussa aappar nikala aur aapko iss ghar se nikal jaane ke liye kaha

Priya held both of them and said "pagal ho tum dono mein janti hoon tum dono ko...mein tum dono se bilkul naraz nahi hoon. Tum dono mere saat ho isse jyada muje aur kuch nahi chahiye and she kisses both on their head.

Rishab broke the hug and turn towards Ram and hug him tightly. Priya took Natasha into tight embrace. After pause Saumya said "Bhabhi aap jaldi se jaakar taiyaar ho jaayiye uske baad cake kaathe hai".

Seeing Ram, Priya, Natasha and Rishab together Neha and Vikram becomes so happy.

Neha:- chalo Priya mein tumhe taiyaar karti hoon

Natasha:- mein bhi aapke saat chalti hoon and both took Priya to her room. Ram becomes thrilled to see everybody together.

 

Priya becomes ready and she came down along with Neha and Natasha. No doubt she looks beautiful but due to her pregnancy her face is glowing extremely. Though it's her initial stage of her pregnancy period and she looks little plum which enhances her beauty. Ram tries to control his emotion in front of all. He needs her badly.  Priya cut the cake. Raya fed each other. Pihu gave her a birthday card. Dance and music started. Raya dance in each other arms...After doing lots of masti party ended in a beautiful note. Everybody retire to their rooms.

Priya is standing in front of mirror caressing her tummy.  Ram went to change. After change he came back and goes near Priya. He hugged her from back and circled her from her waist and entwine his hands. His chin is on her shoulder. Priya rested her head on him.

Ram caresses her face with his face and asked "kya dekh rahi ho"

Priya:- Kuch nahi soch rahi hoon aaj ka din kitna lamba tha na...aaj ek din kitna kuch ho gaya..

Ram:- Hmm...and continuously caresses and kisses on her ears and neck...

Priya felt sensation all over and said "abb chodiye muje... muje bhi change karne jana hai". But Ram in no mood to leave her and continuously nuzzling and giving wet kisses on the nape of her neck and shoulder.

Priya:- Chodiye Mr. Kapoor...muje change karna hai...

Ram:- Tum kaho toh mein tumhari madat kar deta hoon change karne mein

Priya:- Thank you but no thank you mein khud kar lungi

Ram:- Mrs. Kapoor aaj tumne muje bahut daraya hai...iski saza toh tumhe zaroor milegi aur aaj toh tumhara b'day bhi hai toh aaj mein tumhe nahi chodne wala.

Priya:- Mr. Kapoor please aaj nahi...mein aaj bahut tied hoon...But Ram in no mood to listen and he carried her in his arms

Priya:- Mr. Kapoor aap kya kar rahe hai...uthariye muje... Ram carried her and placed her on the bed and came on top of her. Priya kept her both hands on his shoulder.

Ram in a husky voice "pata hai aaj party mein tum bahut khoobsurat lag rahi thi aur muje tab se eisa mann kar raha tha ki sabse chupakar tumhe uthakar kahi akele mein le jaau"

Priya blushed with his comments

Ram:- Priya I need you now ...saying this he takes her lips with him. She also responded with the kiss. While his one hand is holding her and his other hand is moving all over her body squeezing her stomach and bump. Both are as engrossed in the kiss as there is no tomorrow. Both are not leaving each other. After the passionate kiss Ram slowing removed her all jewellery. He undresses himself and takes off all her clothes from her body. He then takes out the box from the side shelf and gave it to Priya.

Priya:- Yeh kya hai

Ram:- tumhare liye hai..tumhara bday gift.

Priya:- Mere liye and very excitedly she open the box and saw the diamond heart shape pendant.   She takes the pendant in her hand.

Ram:- tumhe pasand aaya

Priya:- bahut khoobsurat hai...Thanks you so much...I love you Mr. Kapoor

Ram:- I love you too and takes the pendant and wore it around her neck and said "Happy Birthday Mrs. Priya Ram Kapoor"

Her naked skin glitters with the pendant and Ram kiss the pendant through her skin. Priya closed her eyes with the tingling sensation and took him into her arms. Priya's body is rejuvenated with the kisses. Both made love and sleeps in each other arms. Pendant becomes the witness of their love.

 



Author : Sandhya 



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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome asusaul .. 
I loved the way you take up the scene ..superb 

will give my full comment later 


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Hi sandy ,missing your stories very much , and its a treat for me ,  The way Ram behaved and thought baout priyas absence made me remeber Typical Ram kapoor πŸ˜† wali style .. when he realises her bday how cutely he forget his anger and called her .but instant reply made him worry "where is she " 
Than he got to know where is hse , and immedieately left from there giving peace of mind to both youngers πŸ˜† than everything he did for her is really awesome adn amazing she is happy relaising his love again and again . The night witness both lovers love once again . uncredible narration along with Raya cute  lovely moments .. Loved it 

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awesome OS di...πŸ‘πŸ‘
love it... nicely written
ram made arrangesments for priya on her bday. woh toh karna hi chahiye.. πŸ˜‰
ram cm into naughty mood..thats awesome...πŸ˜‰
awww ram n priya scenes are too good... very cute n romantic...πŸ‘πŸ‘
superbly written...
every scene was good...
pendant gift is very nicee..!!




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Hayee very cute part kaash show Mein aisa hota n thanks for lovely os
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Awesome asusaul .. 

I loved the way you take up the scene ..superb 

will give my full comment later 

Thanks Neel...πŸ€—
and thanks for the title neelπŸ˜†...its nice
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awesome OS di...πŸ‘πŸ‘

love it... nicely written
ram made arrangesments for priya on her bday. woh toh karna hi chahiye.. πŸ˜‰
ram cm into naughty mood..thats awesome...πŸ˜‰
awww ram n priya scenes are too good... very cute n romantic...πŸ‘πŸ‘
superbly written...
every scene was good...
pendant gift is very nicee..!!




Thanks for comment JoπŸ€—
haan muje pata hai tumhe Pendant pasand aayegaπŸ˜†
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Hayee very cute part kaash show Mein aisa hota n thanks for lovely os

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