*UPDATE* OS - Tum Dena Saath Mera LAST PART on Page 4 *18/01/15*

Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Friends Here Is OS from Jineejiggs U All know Her This OS is lock So here i m posting Again So that Who wanna Comment Can Comment...Thank You...

OS Tum Dena Saath Mera


Part 1


Priya...Priya...,aree tu abhi bhi yahin hain jaa jake naha le, haldi chadd gayi hain lekin abhi tak bachpana nahi gaya tum dono ka, jaa jake naha ke taiyyar ho ja, phir dadi ke paas ho aa, ab jaa bhi...


Aaj Shipra aur Sudhir Sharma ki laadli beti Priya ki shaadi hain. Sharma pariwaar Amritsar se hain. They are in the garments business, quite respectable among his circle. Sudhir Sharma's wife Shipraji is a housewife and a loving mother of his two children Karthik and Priya. Karthik is his elder son, who looks after his business, a 29 year old young blood devotes his time in business and gym. He is quite a fitness freak. Priya being the youngest is pampered as well as loved by all specially by neighbourhood children, though she is 23 now still her innocence and childishness is what makes her out of the bunch from the rest. Isi Priya ki aaj shaadi hain Devdeep Singh se. It's a love marriage arranged by both the family.


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Edited by aman.anjaan - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update..
Alresdy read this FF..but loved to read again..
Thanks for posting...
Posted: 9 years ago
Superb OS thanks for posting it again
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome OS!!!
Love it
Plzz continue soon!!!
Posted: 9 years ago
thnks for pm
will read and comment soon..
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by jodude


thnks for pm
will read and comment soon..


Lol who sent Pm i ddnt ???
Posted: 9 years ago
Superb OS .. have read it already.. but it was nice to read again ...
Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely os... 
I think I have read it before...
Please continue soon...
Posted: 9 years ago


 Hello Friends Hop you Like This OS


Part 2

The men became busy with the preparations, lekin Ram ke mann me kai saare sawaal uth rahe hain, aisa nahi hain ke usse Priya pasand nahi hain, actually yahan pasand na-pasand ka sawaal hi nahi uthta hain, Priya ko woh bachhpann se janta hain, achhi ladki hain, uske gharwalen bhi sab Priya se pyaar karte hain, lekin Ram yeh shaadi nahi kar sakta, Sanjana ko abhi tak usne bhula nahi paaya hain, thinking of her, he came to the window and gazed outside. Sab shaadi ke preparations me jut gaye hain, Sudhirji is looking relieved, Karthik is smiling, yahan tak ki his dad is also looking after the arrangements, Rishabh is full on with energy, Ram kept looking at his family without blinking, they are HAPPY with this relation, suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder, he turned and saw dadi is standing there,


Dadi - Ram, main janti hoon beta tujhe mera yun achanak rishte ki baat karna achha nahi laga hoga, lekin beta mujhe aur koi raasta nazaar nahi aa raha tha, meri gudiya tut gayi hain, main usse aise nahi dekh sakti, main janti hoon agar usse koi samhal sakta hain toh tu hi hain, bol samhalega na meri gudiya ko, usse woh har khushi dena jo uska hain, tu saath dega na uska, uske damaan me koi aanch nahi aayega, tu rahega na zindagi bhar uske saath?





Ram - dadi yeh jante huye bhi ke main Sanjana se...


Dadi - woh tera ateet tha beta, aur Priya teri aaj hain, haqeeqat hain. Jo ladki pyaar ki keemat ko nahi samajhta hain woh kaise kisi aur cheez ki kadr karegi? Tu ne apna pyaar khoya hain isi liye tu hi samajhega ke apne pyaar ko khona kya hota hain, Priya ne Deep ko nahi balki apni zindagi khoyi hain, tujhe usse wahi zindagi lautani hogi, main janti hoon tu yeh kar payega, bolt u karega na?


Ram - main koshish karunga dadi ke main Priya ko phir se nayi zindagi de saku.


Dadi took Ram in her hig and blessed him, bohot khush reh mere bachhe, main babaji se yehi dua karti hoon ke tum dono ke zindagi me khushiyaan hi khushiyaan ho.


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Posted: 9 years ago
superb aman. priya is in so much pain. pl fill her life with rams love. hope u uodate soon. thaks for pm.

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