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Thanks for reading. Will update soon.Edited by doc_kash - 2016-11-27T21:31:07Z
Afternoon at Priya's House. Shipra, Thinking aloud.
Shipra: I will write the profile after I hear from Mrs Khanna. I wonder when she will come. I am eagerly waiting. God hope this works out.
Just then the door bell rings and enter Mrs Khanna.
Mrs. Khanna: Shipra, kaiso ho? Priya Kaisi hain? Sudhir ji ne Bathaya hoga na.
Shipra: Come inside please. Sudhir mentioned. Please sit, I will make some tea and we can discuss the proposal for Priya.
Shipra gets some tea and biscuits. Both sit down with tea and start talking.
Shipra: How is Mohan Ji? Tumhari beti kaisi hain? Is she still in Delhi? Visiting you soon?
Mrs. Khanna: Sab teek hain. Actually, hum log jaa rahe hain Delhi next week. My daughter and son in law are busy with their work, no holidays. So, humne socha ki hum chale jayaenge ek do hafte kay liye. I miss them.
Aur batao, Kartik ne kaam shuri kardi na? Aage padne ka irade hain?
Shipra: Ache kiya ki tum sab ja reho ho. Kartik ne kaam shuru ki, ek hi hafta hua hain. He wants to study further, par apne paise pe. So, decided ki do saal kaam karke, paise bachake, kudh apni fees pay karna chata hain. Bol raha tha ki experience bhi mil jayaga. Ab aaj kal ke bacche to aap jaante ho na...
Acha, aap boliye. Ye Priya ke liye proposal kya hain. Ladka kon hain, kya karta hain, kahan rehta hain, maa baap kaise hain?
Shipra tries to continue on and on but Mrs. Khanna stops her.
Mrs. Khanna: Wait Wait... Main bhol thi hun. I understand your concerns. Ladka, 33 years old, Mumbai main rehta hain, apni kudh ki company hain. Mujhe details patha nahi company ki. Unke parents bhi Mumbai main hain. My sister in law, Veena hain na, uski sister ke pati ke relatives hain. They know the family well. Dekh agar tujhe teek lage to main unki number de sakti hoon. Maine Veena ko bataya hain Priya ke Baare me, aur usne unlogon ko. They are interested in talking to you and taking this further. I am not sure, but they may contact you directly. I have given ur number to Veena. Ok?
Shipra: Teek hain. Thanks. Aap ek kaam karo, mujhe unki details be de do. Main he contact kar leti hoon. Waise be ladki wale hain na...Smiles
Mrs. Khanna: No problem. I will forward the details to you.
Ek aur baat karni thi. Maine na ek party rakhi hain, Monday afternoon, hum sab doston ke liye. Sab aa rahe hain, mere ghar pe. Aarahi ho na?
Shipra: Kyun nahi. Phir bhi call karke confirm karungi.
Mrs. Khanna: Ok. Waise aaj Chai acchi thi. Main chalti hoon, call karke tujhe details de dungi. Bye.
Mrs Khanna leaves. Shipra thinks that this time Priya cannot simply reject this proposal. The boy seems like a nice fit for her. I hope that this madam will agree to meet at least. Suddenly, looks at the time and realizes she has house chores to finish before everybody comes home. She puts on some music and gets to work.
Mrs Khanna calls Veena, gives her a green signal regarding Priya. Veena contacts her sister and gets the details and all the info reaches Shipra the next day. Meanwhile, Veena's sister conveys this message and the boy's parents decide to call the Sharma's house with the proposal.
Next chapter, Ram's intro...
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