My oh my what a conversation. Totally digging R&B's dialogues,
He is a one smart ass. Concise and precise. The story is moving very well. I
enjoy when there is a background and sane talk not just mushy all the time
(Hated 50 shades). I relish the way you incorporate the humor in the story, can't
get over that u told Sharvu that his folks are getting another one. It was so natural, we all have said things of
that nature in our life. There was a
mention somewhere on the thread about a dip in readers so u are thinking of
ending it, please there is so much to explore in this story. I list few things
that I have done just to read your updates:
1)
Ignoring house guest.
2)
Read it under comforter.
3)
Read while at Costco.
4)
Pretended to do some outdoor work (in winter)
just to have a quick read.
5)
Ignored kids and let them lose to their antics just
because I needed to read.
6)
Hooked my friend in reading so we could discuss.
7)
Wrote comment to your post ( I never do it, too
lazy or too busy most of the time)
8)
Read some amazing comments on your story.
9)
I feel I in a good company when I read someone
had a same reaction as me.
10)
Always excited to see your update.
"YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER WHO
HAS WAY BEAUTIFUL WAY WITH WORDS"
Thanks for giving us this symphony,
million times better then TV, I haven't watched and I have no interest in that
anymore
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