Originally posted by Divya.S.R
WOW!! This is one helluva story.. ❤️ I'm in love with it..Yhm made me fall in love with Raman Kumar Bhalla ... And you made me fall in love with hot & sexy R&B..
R&B and II's fights were fabulous from the start.. And sexual tension between them..
The first or second or third or the nth number of kisses they had was Hawt..
Their fight and then their passionate makeouts.. I can't help but fall in love more with the story..😳
Bhallas seemed to be floored by II.. For various reasons.. Be it the father or son or the sisters😉😆
Like every story.. Without twist the story will be bland.. And here enters Srikanth 😆
The guy is a 10/10 in every parents list but he wasn't able to score that much in II's heart.. 😆
How is it possible when you have R&B for competition.. 🤣
R&B and his cargo's😆 can totally imagine a laid back sexy guy.. That's a view any girl would want to see at work..
Ohh dear!! I need to keep reminding myself that I'm married.. See what you have done!!
But can't help drooling over this guy.. ☺️ lucky II
Now the sisters (vandu and sam) are on the mission of milao their siblings.. Oh so waiting to see their plan.. Well two parts of it must have been done by now..
I'm sure vandu sending II to Sam's place and Sam lying about him not being there must be part of the mission.. 😆
Waiting to see how you play this through.. And yes, please do not stop continue the story..
p.s. naanum oru tam bram dhaan aanal naa oru iyengaar.. 😃
p.p.s sorry for the short comment.. It doesn't justify you beautiful story..
Divya
Its my my mission to collect the MOST addicted people.😈 I will put you in the bin where 40+ others are dreaming You will be in good company
THANKS SO VERY MUCH FOR READING AND LOVING THE STORY😳
I TRY my best not to make it a whiny sob fest, or too DEEP DEEP DEEP DEEPLY emotional mumbo jumbo with odd symbolism and inane metaphors🤣
Its a SERIOUS INTELLIGENT LOVE STORY that happens to be funny and heart warming... and the phenomenal response proves people love it. I am not entrusted with the task of initiating IF teenagers into po*n so my story will not have explicit sex😃
I've kept my characters to a minimum so there are no 100 friends and side characters to deal with, this way people will recall this tale for a long time, recall value is what a writer craves for😉
The 50 odd that regularly read and comment JUST TOTALLY GET the humor, and so its a total pleasure to write
I am told I am extremely funny in real life, so writing humor comes easily I think😳
Edited by Nisha0604 - 9 years ago