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Posted: 7 years ago
I loved loved loved their recent encounter on the train! I am sucker for anything romantic and this was absolutely romantic for me. He being there at the right time to save II like a knight in shinining armour! Nothing filmy yet so real! Does not have to be one's lover only..any guy who you know..be it your colleague, your friend in that situation or any acquaintance would have done the same and gotten protective about a girl in that situation!SmileClap I loved that part the most! It was so real!
Even though they are still not expressing themselves about their feelings for each other, I like that they are getting so comfortable with each other..just like a real couple..!Day Dreaming

I have been a  M&B fan since the time I started reading them and even though I am way past those teenage years now, I still grin and blush like a teenager whenever I read one of them even now .LOL

And reading your story is making be behave like a teenager again!Embarrassed Reading about R&B and II and their encounters and escapades, make me Blushing
 I would put your story among the top love stories I have ever read in my life!Smile and the one that I know I am going to remember for rest of my life. Some stories just leave a mark on your minds and hearts and this one i know does that!


And your R&B, the tall handsome punjabi munda who speaks less,  gives those looks all the time, those half smiles,  has an attitude but still polite, ready to pick up a fight anytime yet so overtly protective about the ones he loves...haaye..is straight out of  M&B novel for me..my hero!Blushing

Do such men exist in real life?Day Dreaming Kahan milte hai aise log ??Embarrassed
Posted: 7 years ago
oh forgot to mention..this part.  has to be the BESTEST so far. (all the other part are BEST and I am waiting for the BESTEST EVER!LOL)..I loved that it was just II and R&B  in that train..and you gave THEM that time between them. was nice to lil more about the man himself..
And I loved the way he spoke in Hindi in such polite way to the help..well brought up kid he isSmile...just looses his cool when madame II is aroundLOL..love makes you do crazy things isnt it!LOL

And I loved the "ceasefire" wala bitSmile. Can he get any cuter!

Haaye..mera pura weekend R&B ke baare main sochtey nikal gaya! Day Dreamingand I still cant get enough of him...

Jaldi next update plz..pretty plz!Embarrassed
Edited by Jyoe - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
Yay..i see the title changed for new update..ok I am not getting up from bed now...and will be waiting.

Its winter time. still being in bed, cuddled up in warm blanket and reading such love stories.and feeling the love of the couple...haaye..life could not be any better!!!Embarrassed
Posted: 7 years ago
Acts of Felony & Protection
Part 87

"What do u always listen to?" she askedEmbarrassed
He didnt hear.. but sensed it, he opened his eyes and looked at her
She blushed and changed her mind...Blushing
He placed one in her ear... she immediately grabbed the lil bulb, so his hand wouldnt touch her ear... her ear and the cheek became ruby red...Embarrassed
"Billboard 100" he saidBig smile
She didnt have a clue, she went overseas for Grad School but did not hear much English music...Tongue

"Sam Smith-I am not the only one" he explainedBig smile

He left it in her right ear, lowered the volume to a whisper... on the volume dialEmbarrassed

When she pushed his hand away while inserting the head... and now his finger tips was still in her grip...Embarrassed
"dont U listen to any Hindi?"Cry

AYYYO!! WHY DO U CARE? DONT ASK HIM THINGS... U ASK HIM SOMETHING IT WILL SEAR YOUR BRAIN, U WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO FORGET ITCry
II, DIG UR OWN GRAVE, FIND OUT EVERYTHING ABOUT HIM, CARVE IT IN UR BRAIN... GO AHEAD MASOCHISTCry
YOU ALREADY KNOW WHAT IT FEELS LIKE TO SIT BY HIM LIKE HIS WIFE... OR HIS GIRLFRIEND, HIS LOONG LEGS RUBBING YOURS... 
HIS KNEE READJUSTING ITSELF EVERY FEW MINUTESCry
THAT GODDAMN CITRUSY SCENT OF HIM, I COULD BE DEAD, BUT WILL COME ALIVE IF SOMEONE WAVES IT UNDER MY NOSTRIL
THE ZERO GRAVITY DROP HURLING HER INSIDES in hypersonic speed...Cry

"Sometimes" he said very crypticallyBig smile

WHEN? WHEN U ARE HAPPY? OR WHEN U ARE SAD? WHO DO U LIKE TO LISTEN TO?Embarrassed
WHERE DID U FIRST HEAR? WHAT SONG? DO U SING?Embarrassed
Something about him listening to Hindi or humming Hindi tunes while in the shower aroused her...Blushing
I SHOULD HAVE JUSTTT LET HIM LISTEN... Rakshasan...Cry
AYYO RAMA, WHY DID U SEND HIM? WHY DID I EVER SEE HIM?
HE BROKE MY HEART, YET I WANT HIM?
HOW COMPULSIVE AM I?Angry

"Amma makes me listen to Carnatic or sing it" she said blowing air through dry lips, almost croaking... Embarrassed fighting her pounding heart

"And everything Amma says you do?" he asked...Smile
HE DIDNT HAVE TO BE NAKED TO HAVE HIS EYES TWINKLE...
 HE DOESNT HAVE TO BE ON TOP OF ME, HE HAS TO BE SITTING BY ME, FACING ME ON A FRICKIN TRAIN..CryAngry

"Always" she said in a whisperBig smile
He leaned forward...She saw every .5 mm?  1mm? 1 cm? bristle on his jaw...
Nope, I wouldnt have lasted until the Big O I would have died when he saw me naked, or I did.. vice versaCry
GREAT IT ENDED when it did!!CryClap
Its good... I wont die at 27... the strange whirring in her heart slowed down a bitCry

IF it were not a train, they would be kissing... he would be angling to pull her tee off, or unzip her hoodie, as she fought his stubble and his hands, 
unable to decide which one she should fight firstEmbarrassed
She bit her lower lip to suppress the sob...
He held her chin and pulled it out softly

"How many songs do u know?" he asked...Big smile

She cradled his wallet and phone on her lap and used her left hand , counted on the phalanges... pulled her right hand off his grip
"I need my hand to count"Big smile
"use this" he said offering his right...Embarrassed
"Ermmm" she muttered... dry mouth
Long slender fingers...
I am thinking over 100" she said unsureConfused

"Count again" he saidWink
"I am an auditor" she said smuglyBig smile
"I am told they make the most mistakes", he mockedWink
RAKSHASAN... EVEN WHEN MAKING LOVE HE WILL FIND SOMETHING TO MOCK MEConfusedLOL

She quit counting, but he held her other free hand, her left in his right...

"Are u still learning?"Embarrassed
She nodded sheepishly.. "Once a month... I lie and try every trick in the book to get out" she shut her eyes and turned red guilty redBig smileEmbarrassed

"II a felon? who would have guessed?" he said softly not smiling, his eyes roving...Blushing

"somewhat like R&B as a loan shark?" she asked sweetly...Blushing

For a split second their 6 weeks together flashed in tandem in their vision...being kissed by the Monet, and at the office, and when she came to pick Shravu up
And the many many encounters...Blushing
"MY life of crime has been tremendously rewarding though" he murmured... CLOSE-ER

He held both her hands, she faced him like he did... and he just said to her that he loved kissing herBlushing

He shifted his legs again...
"U must have the worst plane and train rides" she muttered smiling...LOL
"Glad it amuses you" he said his half smile coming and going quickly

SHE REALIZED HE MUST FLY FIRST CLASS UNLIKE HERShockedAngry

"U probably fly first class, so I am wrong" she said trying to pry her hand to hide her eyes in embarrassmentEmbarrassed

He held the hands... "U can laugh if u want... I know I am too tall" he said kindly NOT saying YES I DO FLY FIRST CLASS ONLYClap
"I am too... most men are shorter" she said LOL
WANTING TO HAVE SOMETHING COMMON WITH HIM, NOT FIRST CLASS NOT MALCHA MARG NOT A FRENCH BOY FRIEND... BUT HEIGHT
YES HEIGHT...Cry

"Most" she began and stopped, he saw but didnt prod...
 I WONT SAY AMMA IS UNABLE TO FIND GROOMS I WONT SAY MOST "SUITABLE BOYS" ARE SHORTERCry
I WONT TALK ABOUT MY WEDDING, I WONT TALK ABOUT YOUR LOVE LIFE...Cry

She yanked her hand..."If I say I want to feel ur stubble will u let go?" she asked
He let go of both, she crossed it across her chest, shutting her eyes with a smile... "thanks" she saidWink
He pulled both out held one and rubbed one on his cheek... as she watched open mouthed...Embarrassed

"Felony DOES come easily to you II" he said, as her hand rasped on his cheek and jaw, he rubbed bruisingly...Blushing

The train pulled in... the bigger lights came on... he yanked his ear bud , pulled the pin and cord off the phone..and tucked it into his pockets, 
she handed him her ear bud, BUT KEPT HIS PHONE AND WALLET while packing her things, he carried his backpack... it was worn and bore scars of his many travelsBig smileCry


He stepped out and waited for her to lead, she stepped down, his phone and wallet in her purse, on auto pilot

They took a few steps back and forth on the platform...
"Let me call" he said
And searched for the phone..." and looked inside the train window

"I am sorry, yikes" she handed him hers...Embarrassed
He smiled... taking it...Smile

"Kidhar ho aap?" he asked his eyes following something he spotted

THE TWO MEN... AND TWO MORE...
She was checking her phone...so didnt notice the 2*2 creeps
Appa had called twice...
"Appa I am getting a ride" she texted her belly lurching, NOT CALLING
AYYO WHAT IF HE IS AWAKE
SOLLIDLAMA, SHUD I TELL HIM?Cry
AYYO
I CANT MAKE APPA COME NOW
AYYOShocked
I dont know when the network came back

OK GOOD BALLY VIDRANA? Is it Bally?" he textedSmile
YES she LIEDEvil Smile

"Lets walk" R&B said hand on her elbow,  pushed the various bag straps 
back on her shoulder, tote, laptop and purse, kept texting... Akka... returning her texts

"Faster II" he hissedAngry

He spotted A GUARD and relaxed
A GUARD... A GUARD .. A UNIFORMED GUARDShockedEmbarrassedBig smile
NO AUTOMATIC WEAPONS PHEW!!LOL
But they carried those at the gate... she had seen this guy... ermmm in her 4? three visits... big and beefy, one hand shake 
and he could cut of II's blood supply
A GUARD...escorted them to the car...ShockedEmbarrassedBig smile

The man offered to carry her bags or his they both declined
"Go ahead" R&B offered
"Nahi" she said..
The creeps followed them at a distance to the car and watched the guard... carefully
The guard opened her door and they sat down...
HE HAD ASKED FOR A GUARD?ShockedEmbarrassedBig smile

He went back to his Billboard and texting, she lay back and snoozed, when they arrived she was asleep... FAST ASLEEP...

She felt a tap on her shoulder, the driver was tuning the radio and the guard was offering advice
She was disoriented for a second...

He did not say "Stay if u want to go to Malcha Marg with me"Cry


"Thanks" ClapClapStarshe said sincerely... "I have no idea .. I dont know what I would have done" she put her hand on her chest, in gratitude.. and
reminisced the 10 minutes of horror standing behind her seatCry
"An Iyer warrior once threatened me... I wouldn't doubt their valor" he muttered... softlyClapClap

She blushed a deep crimson and stumbled out clumsily...

Stepping out his door, watching her go up, she didnt turn back or wave or smile, he didnt hold his breath hoping for it
He put his left ear bud back on as he sat down... and the driver gassed the car..




Posted: 7 years ago
"An Iyer warrior once threatened me... I wouldn't doubt their valor" LOL
They are actually talking! Dancing
I like it when Rakshasan talks. Just enough he says. Unlike her, who just can't stop. In more ways than one they are completely opposite, but there is a tendency for opposites to attract. And they are most definitely attracted to each other...STRONGLY! 
Glad to see the attraction still remained strong even when they weren't being physical (I think I forgot to comment on that earlier). Their mere presence near each other is enough for both of them to feel the heat. Embarrassed

"she didnt turn back or wave or smile, he didnt hold his breath hoping for it"
But he still watched her as she went up. Approve And it gave me immense satisfaction to read that. Big smile 

Just small hints like this from his side is what I want in future updates as well...it's enough, just right.
Posted: 7 years ago
Jyo
THANKS FOR THE THREE FOUR FIVE NOTES

Will respond to all of them

I am sorry to all others who I have ignored

I JUST DONT HAVE THE TIME 
I AM SO SORRY

P.S. Please tell ur bosses, a friend uses Google to write romance fiction
WHO WOULD HAVE THOUGHT...
Ive kept my story decent enough, they could read if they want to... 
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Jyoe


oh forgot to mention..this part..84  has to be the BESTEST so far. (all the other part are BEST and I am waiting for the BESTEST EVER!LOL)..I loved that it was just II and R&B  in that train..and you gave THEM that time between them. was nice to lil more about the man himself..
And I loved the way he spoke in Hindi in such polite way to the help..well brought up kid he isSmile...just looses his cool when madame II is aroundLOL..love makes you do crazy things isnt it!LOL

And I loved the "ceasefire" wala bitSmile. Can he get any cuter!

Haaye..mera pura weekend R&B ke baare main sochtey nikal gaya! Day Dreamingand I still cant get enough of him...

Jaldi next update plz..pretty plz!Embarrassed

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU
For loving it SO VERY MUCH
I mean u are  my ONLY Google employee reader... in like... EVERLOL

I TRY my BEST to keep it as real as possible
He is EXTREMELY WEALTHY...MAYBE  the odds of such a guy falling for an Iyer chick is highly implausible,Cry BUT BESIDES THAT EVERYTHING ELSE IS 99.9% REALClap

I  am reaching inot every cornet of my brain and my virtual memory to search and locate the right pieces of information to make it real, OWN PERSONAL EXPERIENCES, OR ONES PEOPLE HAVE SHARED while I moonlight as cupidLOL
Almost ALL of it is as REAL as it can be Jyo
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Jyoe


I loved loved loved their recent encounter on the train! I am sucker for anything romantic and this was absolutely romantic for me. He being there at the right time to save II like a knight in shinining armour! Nothing filmy yet so real! Does not have to be one's lover only..any guy who you know..be it your colleague, your friend in that situation or any acquaintance would have done the same and gotten protective about a girl in that situation!SmileClap I loved that part the most! It was so real!
Even though they are still not expressing themselves about their feelings for each other, I like that they are getting so comfortable with each other..just like a real couple..!Day Dreaming

I have been a  M&B fan since the time I started reading them and even though I am way past those teenage years now, I still grin and blush like a teenager whenever I read one of them even now .LOL

And reading your story is making be behave like a teenager again!Embarrassed Reading about R&B and II and their encounters and escapades, make me Blushing
 I would put your story among the top love stories I have ever read in my life!Smile and the one that I know I am going to remember for rest of my life. Some stories just leave a mark on your minds and hearts and this one i know does that!


And your R&B, the tall handsome punjabi munda who speaks less,  gives those looks all the time, those half smiles,  has an attitude but still polite, ready to pick up a fight anytime yet so overtly protective about the ones he loves...haaye..is straight out of  M&B novel for me..my hero!Blushing

Do such men exist in real life?Day Dreaming Kahan milte hai aise log ??Embarrassed

BLUE... MAKES MEBlushing
I could write ALL night long JUST for thatBig smile

Red... I WANTED to keep it real, WHO HAS SEX ON A TRAIN? I am sure SOME do, MY leads will never do so... I cannot imagine him taking her into a stinking toilet and stripping her clothes offCry

NOOO!!!!Cry

OR making out while sitting... its too creepy and gives me visions of  women complaining of molestation on Delhi busesCry when I lived and worked in DelhiDeadAngry

P.S. I actually went to the Indian Railways website and got the timings and the stations all right... makes us believe we are reading about a real couple doesnt it?Wink
Ive taken the Blore Mysore Shatabdi and Chennai Blore Shatabdi but not this one

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