I'm falling more in love with this tale and I didn't think that was possible.
I love the way you add in subtle things that she remembers and the way he texts her the answers to her questions later in the night.
That convo between the Bhalla siblings was so real! I could totally imagine that playing out in front of me...I do it all the time with my own siblings and cousins. It seems like both of his sisters love II already!
Mihir's comment was the best though!