Software Symphony-Munirka Mutiny on 148 - Page 58

This content was originally posted by: Nisha0604

Anu I have NO motives to torture my readers

I dont have "unresolved issues" from childhood, that surface when I write this

I am not getting paid to write this

This is NOT for TRPs

There is NO reason for me to be cruel and unkind to my characters

This is something I absolutely enjoy doing so I want to put my most sincere self out there, not all of it you may love, but I hope you dont hate all of it either

Edited by Ranu1234 - 9 years ago

Aiyooo Kadavule .. I read these updates and I have a weird lump in my throat... whether it's as a commiserating with II or  anxiety over what's next, I don't know. 

This FF is like a  ready heady red velvet cupcake.. the supercalorific ones that you can't stay away from but you just can't resist licking every crumble off  your fingertips.  You are way too good at this Nisha...I bow to your mastery!👏👏

Also,  how much do I love the convos in the Iyer house, especially II's thoughts about  Srikanth and the reasons Vandhu is recommending him- it is so reflective of some conversations I've had with my family on the topic of marriage, I can't get over how realistic it is.    So well done!

Putting aside the R&B factor, there is nothing as hard as trying to explain to your loved ones why someone that is so ideal according to them is just all sorts of  wrong for you  - and you captured that struggle so beautifully.

Re.:  'because I am that important'... L.O.V.E!

.. not the perfect GIF  but I could not resist- sorry!😉

Edited by RomComFan - 9 years ago

This content was originally posted by: RomComFan

Aiyooo Kadavule .. I read these updates and I have a weird lump in my throat... whether it's as a commiserating with II or  anxiety over what's next, I don't know. 

This FF is like a  ready heady red velvet cupcake.. the supercalorific ones that you can't stay away from but you just can't resist licking every crumble off  your fingertips.  You are way too good at this Nisha...I bow to your mastery!👏👏

Also,  how much do I love the convos in the Iyer house, especially II's thoughts about  Srikanth and the reasons Vandhu is recommending him- it is so reflective of some conversations I've had with my family on the topic of marriage, I can't get over how realistic it is.    So well done!

Putting aside the R&B factor, there is nothing as hard as trying to explain to your loved ones why someone that is so ideal according to them is just all sorts of  wrong for you  - and you captured that struggle so beautifully.

Re.:  'because I am that important'... L.O.V.E!

.. not the perfect GIF  but I could not resist- sorry!😉

waiting for the update Nisha di.. when u r going to update??IST??

This content was originally posted by: Nisha0604

I bet you all know this by now

But the ONLY barrier to this love story from his side is his feelings.

I mean his sister met someone in first class and started going to bed with him. There is no mother in the picture. He doesnt care about his Dad...

WHO WILL STOP THIS UNION if R&B reveals he is love?

NOBODY. They will just shrug and go about their business

Revealing THAT would be like telling you who the murderer is in a crime story. Whats the fun in that? I mean knowing the guy loves her, will u still be on your seat's edge?

There are MANY barriers from her side

His perceived lack of education

His wealth

The family scandal

The fact that they are NOT Iyers

The fact that they are not morally upright and of such high values as Iyers

I have to somehow evoke feelings in family, ON BOTH SIDES "these two belong together"

AND

I have to evoke the feelings in THESE TWO "I CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT YOU"

In true Iyer style this marriage will happen

Its a simple love story, told differently

I DONT have a fetish for perverted creepy stuff

ok Nisha..sorry to have been missing from the scene and not been able to comment in last few days Been caught up in some pending work to be completed and was so missing reading the story.

This content was originally posted by: Jyoe

ok Nisha..sorry to have been missing from the scene and not been able to comment in last few days Been caught up in some pending work to be completed and was so missing reading the story.

BUt here am now!😳 Read each and every update "back to back" (like I was on some mission or had to meet a deadline😆) and now I feel at peace that I am up to date with the story!😃

I am not very good with words😒 so wont be able to analyze or write greatly about this story. But wud definitely want to share my view about and whatever i say its dil se...

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story and EVERYTHING ABOUT.it.the characters, the whole family set up, those discussion, the sibling banter, the hot romance, the fights, the little subtle things and nuances you bring out during coversation, the descriptions , the realistic approach in it, use of french language ( I learnt French in my grad as I thought it was one of thet sexiest languages ever to be spoken and still do think it is! especailly when men like R&B talk 😳)and  the use of Google ! (everytime you use the reference, I have this huge grin and smile 😃) ..the discussion from other readers of this story, your explanations, the craziness, anxiety of readers waiting for the next update...oh LOVE JUST EVERYTHING about this story!😊

Trust me when I say this, after a long time I was addicted a show like YHM and got so hooked to it that I let go of  other shows ..and for a TV addict like me it wasnt easy ..but like a lot of us here, now I too have quit the show (you know the reasons already) and was feeling heartbroken!😭  But am so so so glad that I started reading this story of yours and I am happy to say this that I am OVER the   heartbreak that the show gave me! So, THANK YOU for being my saviour and help me get deaddicated of the show and getting me addicted to your R&B and II!😳 I will be indebted to you for that.. 😊

I LOVE R&B☺️ but I guess I relate more with II 😳now  emotionally and feel everybit of what she's going thru although I am not even 10% crazy as she is 😆! She makes me laugh like no other female character has done ever!!!   I have been a TV show addict and never ever any female character has made me laugh so much the way II does..I dont know what is it about her..but she is as real as she can get!! just love her too!(more in a friendly way!)😳 But with R&B..he has churaofied my dil...☺️ I feel all the emotions of II or any girl wud go trhu if they meet someone like him!

You are a brilliant writer..and am super super super impressed with your writing! You seriously should consider writing as a profession (even if its part time) and definitely publish you work.. its so worth it!! 

And if you do publish, please do let me know😃... I will be among the 1st few ones (i know there are so many from this thread) who want to have a copy of your book in our collection...and yes please do autograph it for me😳 so that I can flaunt it around saying I know the author! Celebrity connection you see!😉

 

Oh, I forgot to mention, I have now decided to learn Tamil from my friends at work(there are loads of them!) Even though I dint understand the tamil phrases you used, the translattions helped and I must say I am loving the language already😳 and guess have already learnt a few tamil phrases which I am going to use in convo with tamil friends..all thanks to you!

Waiting eagerly for the next update...you definitely know how to keep us on edges and be gone cases in anticipation on whats happening next...😉

Oh BTW couple of questions:

Why is R&B always on the phone texting? Is he inspired from someone we know😉 (You know who I am talking about right?)

And whats with his ear buds on? Why do I get this feeling that he just has them on all the time to just avoid talking to someone or pretend he is in own world..but fully aware of wahts happening around him! he may not be actually listeninig to anything for all we know!)😆 You know what, I do that all the time!!!😛 When I am not in a mood to talk to anyone or just dont feel like listening to people talking around me, I have the ear buds on but I am not listening to anything on my phone or ipod or system..🤣 Thats my way of just telling people I am busy and dont distrub me...!😆

Edited by Nisha0604 - 9 years ago

I don't know anything about him - II's thoughts - that was v insightful where II for a moment doubted her judgement I think, a poignant moment, where the realisation of a possible deeper bond beyond the physical attraction they have.  Just one line but it did have a lot of depth. Well written as all your other updates. 

This content was originally posted by: SunshineBliss

I don't know anything about him - II's thoughts - that was v insightful where II for a moment doubted her judgement I think, a poignant moment, where the realisation of a possible deeper bond beyond the physical attraction they have.  Just one line but it did have a lot of depth. Well written as all your other updates.