Software Symphony-Munirka Mutiny on 148 - Page 21

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Posted: 7 years ago
a great update nisha...i seriously like the hug...comforting, peace providing... im a sucker for these small romantic gesture... no matter how angry one is, a hug from ur partner just melts u down n i think that happen to II...
R&B is so wicked...ignoring her all these days n now showing up at her door step.. btwn how he knew that she is alone at her place... n vandu wat a time to call...

plz update soon..n is it possible to know wat was R&B feeling wen they were not on talking terms for few days..
Posted: 7 years ago

Was held up in a work emergency   since last night  and pined away for a Saturday all gone and not able to catch SS updates as they came Cry

But am all good and cheered up now, what with 4 splendid chapters that I read all in one go.  Each of them - brilliant.

The speechless wala scene- absolute classic!  I haven't heard many tamil songs in the past, but will listen to the ones in your update now after I'm done with my rant here.Smile The lyrics though that you penned down - beautiful.  I liked the take here, having edged a bit from the hot searing romance to  slight on the soulful side... not the dil  meeting dil types but the soulful passion types . superb.

And then the last update with her battling with him to talk to akka ...LOL... that line about in heaven you don't feel embarrassed...ROFL ROFL ...i know I have said this before but how the hell do you come up with these one of a kind  lines...

And that  lacoste lizard...LOL...shoot...I can't keep a  straight face at lacoste tees anymore after this

waiting for your next update to rock my sunday

Posted: 7 years ago
loved it..a emotional hug was needed..but ishita dnt give up so early..taunt yr devil...waiting for nxt update...pls fsat...pls
Posted: 7 years ago
Inteha ho gayi intezaar ki
Posted: 7 years ago
   Ayi na kuch Khabar SW SYMPHONY ki ...no new chapter.. update pls.. I m waiting eagerly.. al day logged in IF Cry Cry Deadpls tell the time when wil u update nisha Smile Edited by Jinvera - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago


MMS to iPad
Part 64

THIS will be the turning point in their relationship, SHE HAS A CHOICE NOWClap
THIS IS HER CHANCE TO COME CLEANClap
Is she angry because Akka was not supposed to know? What does she expect, Akka will never find out? How long does she expect this to go? Forever?
How long can she hide from Akka? HOW LONG can she pretend to tease him at second base? Angry
Will he want more? When? CryWill it come with a marriage attached? If not is she willing to go all the way?Big smile
She managed to hide everything from Akka today, but he is in her house in her bed... how much longer?Shocked
She leaned pon the wall and shut her eyes... and took a long slow breathCry

Did she expect him to tell Akka something cute and romantic... a declaration of love "I want to marry II"
"I cannot live without her?" "Every breath I take is for her"ShockedAngryCry
WHAT is she hiding?
She could ask him to LEAVE RIGHT NOW... and then... and then what?Cry
Picked up her phone from the basket and She walked over to his side of the bed...

"That was wrong she muttered" in restrained angerAngry.. he looked up from texting, and something passed between their eyes
His expression softened completelyEmbarrassed
"Akka could have figured out you know" she continued...Cry
Was she telling herself? Was she telling him?Shocked

She stepped back, he leaned forward and grabbed her hand, and pulled
"II"

She was quiet, he set jis phone down, pulled his other ear plug off... and pulled her closer

"I was kidding u know that" he muttered in his usual few words styleEmbarrassed

She could have said U BETTER LEAVE NOWBig smile

"U shud apologize" she said insteadBig smile

He held her waist and brought her down on the bed, to his other side...
Leaned over with his head on his palm anchored on a elbow...

"HOW DO U SAY IT in Tamil" he askedEmbarrassed
Her eyes grew big, like she couldnt believe he asked her that...Blushing
"Ummm...emmm... " she muttered through dry lips "Ummm ENNAI MANNIPAYA?"Embarrassed she said her favorite song from Vinnaithandi

He kept looking, as she hummed softly...Embarrassed
And then stopping "ENNAI" she coached
"Ennai" he said like he was a linguistEmbarrassed
Mannipaya she said..
Mannipaya" he repeated it verbatim

His eyes smiled.. and hers returned it... with a mischief, 
"OR u could say Kadan theethachu (ur loan is paid off)"Wink

II used the opportunity to get herself out of debt... atleast for now... ermmm.. until he Googles later..ROFL

He reapeated that...
His hand began getting frisky... "I cant" she didnt say it but shook her head

"I know, I heard" HE SAIDEmbarrassed

She shut her eyes tight...
AYYYO OFCOURSE HE HEARD WHY WONT HE... THATS HIS JOB, WHEN HE IS WITH ME HE LISTENS AND TORMENTS... TORMENTS RIGHT THEN OR LATER FOR LIFETIMES Rakshasan he is

"II I grew up with sisters" he said matter of factly "U HEAR about these things" he chuckledEmbarrassed
My sisters would hold me down for training, one tying my arms , one my legs as they would threaten me with loss of limbs if I EVER HURT A WOMAN
Especially when she had cramps" ROFLhe chuckled... first breaking out into laughter.. Sam was compassionate, but Manny...no sympathy!"
He made a mock terrified face 

SHES LIKE U?" II ASKED eyes wide open.. smilingEmbarrassed

He just stared, as if that was another little byte of understanding that just got decoded in their 10 Tera byte relationship
She knew who he was like now?Embarrassed

"Sam says the baby is like ME" he grinned
SHE IS SOOOCUTE" II gushedHeart
"U want to go see her? he asked softly
"Aaj?" she asked
He NODDED.. losing his words

She smiled shutting her eyes... floating... and soaring... their legs interlinked, his hers, his hers... his left arm around her waist...as she lay on her backSleepySleepy


.. AND IVE BEEN... U KNOW... AROUND with women.." he said leaning forward softly ... on her nose...

It felt like she someone pulled all her insides out all at once... she opened her eyes againCry
If there was despair he saw it fullyCry
He didnt defend himselfBig smile

WHAT DID U EXPECT DI? A 30 YEAR OLD VIRGIN? WHY DOES IT MATTER HOW LONG HE WAS "AROUND"Cry
HOW MANY HE WAS "AROUND" WITH... WHO WERE THEY...
HE IS JUST SO PERFECT, SOME ONE THREW AN ARROW AND PUNCTURED IT... she quickly held it down with both hands, 
as she looked for a Scotch tape in the kitchen drawer to seal it back...
But the hole started to leak fasterCry

HOW MANY WERE THERE? WHO DID HE LIKE THE MOST? WHO WAS THE PRETTIEST? WHEN DID HE BEGIN?Angry
IT WOULDNT HAVE HURT HER THIS MUCH TO HAVE BEEN FIRED...
WHAT DID HE DO WHEN THEY HAD THEIR CYCLES?
RAKSHASANEY she cursed breaking into tears inside...Cry


IS IT OK TO BE HIS 17TH OR 11TH OR 58TH? DOES HE TALK TO ALL OF THEM NOW?Cry
10 YEARS FROM NOW IF I SEE HIM SOMEPLACE WILL HE NOD 
WILL HE STILL HAVE THIS STUBBLE?CryEmbarrassed
HE WONT REMEMBER WHAT MAKING LOVE TO ME EVEN WAS LIKECry HE WONTCry HE WONTCry

BUT I ...WILL NEVER FORGET...BlushingEmbarrassedClap

THAT SECOND... THAT EXACT NANO SECOND... SHE DECIDED TO LIVE A LIE... she began lying to HERSELFBig smile

"Its OK, if we dont see each other after 6 weeks, its OK we dump each other in a year I WILL ALWAYS HAVE THIS YEAR
 in my jewerly box inside the Godrej, I will bring it out and savor it... forever"Embarrassed
His hand slid under her tee

"No clothing off remember" she asked huskilyBig smileEmbarrassed

Oops! I forgot he said, bringing it up to her plunging V
Tracing the edge with a index finger
"I have to warn you, it doesnt match AND its called CHOCOLATE CUPCAKE" giggling...she wore a tee shirt bra.. that gave more form usually
"I can make exceptions if it has sprinkles he said... letting his hand slide fully inside...
She opened her eyes in shock... hooked a finger into his watch strap to pull and his palm rotated gently, causing her to arch...
The loud moan was probably heard by neighbors, or even at Gurgaon

She reached for a kiss... passionate, hungry demanding, tough and clamorous... when they were done, his hand was still on her skin... but he was almost on her.
His hand had gone back to her silver nose ring to stroke it and then gone inside her tee
Her silver nose ring got a lot of attention...
They both lay gasping...
She shut her eyes... and and melted slowly like chocolate chips.
He stirred
"Ek ghanta please" she begged
"I need to ask u something?" he whispered

"MMm... ennada... please JUST AN HOUR..." she was sulking
"II" he muttered nuzzling
"ALRIGHT ONE MORE KISS AND THATS IT" she fumed
"I wanted to know if I could use ur iPAD, but THIS WORKS too" he said capturing her lips

She went from suspecting he would do an MMS on her to laying in bed with him, in HER bed, in HER house... and begging for a nap
 
She will now take the nap and he will go to You Tube to his venture capital company Argent Graines' channel to look at proposal videos from start ups about new product ideas and take notes.. for his nightly meeting with investor partners.




Edited by Nisha0604 - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
Again commenting before I've read the update. I don't have much to say since the last couple of updates anyway! I think your story is reaching to the point when lust slowly turns into love and like I said before that I don't understand it when it happens in literature, so I'm just sitting tight and concentrating hard. Hopefully, this time around, I'll be able to understand the transition as you you write it!
Posted: 7 years ago
Want 2 know what R&B fill about Ishita...pls update the nxt part pls...i know i m being selfish..bt its turning point na..so i want 2 know pls...

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