Software Symphony-Munirka Mutiny on 148 - Page 139

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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by kg1404


Beautifully summarized ode to Software symph... And Nisha. Couldn't agree with you more .
This is in reply to Neha's post.


And Nisha, 100 is just a #. Kudos to you for carrying your readers along in this journey(probably, the only thing you will miss when and not if , you write something that you intend to publish.

As to the story now, I am sure you would hv caught a few of ulaga nayagan's films. Bk in school and that seems ages ago, we used to hv these arguments over K and R movies, to a point of discovering this murderous streak in ourselves and there was one team ,myself included , who couldn't agree with k's smugness on his effect over gals, which has pathetically come across in a few of his films(god, I'm hoping I am not creating a war zone here!!!), however brilliant his films were. Not to compare, but as I post this, there are a few similarities, your hero is also an avid reader, understatedly brilliant , seemingly uneducated uphill now, and also too smug on his effects. BTW, k has a honorary dr deg conferred on him. I did not hv to google to find this but II should hv googled on her man and she needn't have missed that damn Gartner top of the thirty( or did she , is there a twist in the tale??). Well my point here is , the seemingly infallible R&B is not infallible anymore to me. Thank you for that. That touch of realism adds more bite to software symph.
Congrats on a job well done, Nisha


KG

KH & RK camps warring is legendary illeLOL
Ayyo about KH I have a friend that says "Avan pirichu menjiduvan" "Avan paathale pregnant aayiduva heroine" "ONE look from the guy the woman will find herself pregnant"Dead

U have only come across in a FEW films? Ayyo all his films the love making scenes are super erotic and explicit like he doesnt care the camera is around...

Sorry KH fans...

She didnt miss the Gartner Top 30, she only wandered a minute to the wrong room...
It was a fair game and she lost...

She Googled Raman Bhalla... various times, Ive said that in the first 4 or 5 parts, no Linked in Profile no references... so SHE DID HER JOB WELLClap
Paiyyan daan tala marava irukkan
He seems to be operating in stealth modeWink


Posted: 7 years ago
None of them is taking the next step! It'd have been fine if II didn't have a deadline named Sree.

II, just pick one! If it's R&B, then let Sree go. If you can't muster the guts to present R&B to appa, then let him go. Just move forward!

R&B, you need to think about what this is. II is being pursued by a suitor and she doesn't have all the time in the world to fool around!
Posted: 7 years ago
I have the biggest smile on my face Big smile
Words I don't have Day Dreaming
Posted: 7 years ago
Nisha, I missed that .I stepped on to your train when you SW Sy was, I think, 15 Pages old. Let me go bk and reread the first few.Edited by kg1404 - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
Lasya Iyer 
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When they heard the kids outside was when Sam returned, and Amma called that Sree was not stopping by... she panicked
Akka couldnt make it so they moved Sree to the following weekendClap... her text from Sree said "Hope we can talk next weekend" and a SMILEYEmbarrassedBig smile
Sam fed her, more like force fed her... and R&B looked on like he didnt even know her
"Arent u siupposed to say "She has to go home?" she askedCry
"Do you?" he asked...Embarrassed
Oh! Who am I talking to... Nevermind... Hmmpppfff" she gruntedAngry
The food was delicious and II was ravenous, not a bite left on her plate... three days of starvation and pining for Rakshasan...Embarrassed

 Tanmay talked about his work asked her about 30 under 30, wonder who told him? she thought
CANT BE RAKSHASAN, HE DOESNT TALK... HE DOESNT TALK WHEN THERE IS A NEED TO WHY WOULD HE PASS ON RANDOM INFO ABOUT U?LOL
"It was a fair game, I guess they felt like rewarding self employed women" II saidClapCry
"Kyon?"
"See of the final 30, there were over 14 that were self employed" she did a mental math again
"Ya 15 self employed, and 11 from PRODUCT companies, I didnt see many winners from IT, may be the IT boom is over" she giggled

R&B just ATE... watching her chat with Tanmay
"Dont u want to work for someone else at some point? Tanmay asked cheering her up
She got that... she smiled... "Ummm... pata nahi shaayad.. Bangalore? Amma Appa, u know my parents.."Embarrassed
"I know Amma Appa" Tanmay said indulgently...Big smile
"Oh! I mean I speak a lot of Tamil... its hard to hold back" II said sheepishlyBig smile
R&B looked at her
DONTTT DONTTT DONT U DARE LOOK AT ME... U DESERVE EVERY GAALI I GIVE U, RAKSHASAN...Embarrassed
"R&B doesnt talk any Punjabi" Tanmay poked funLOL

R&B chuckled shook his head
HE NEVER HAD ANYTHING TO SAY
UNLESS HE WAS TEARING HER UP IN A CONF ROOM OR TORMENTING HER IN BEDBlushing
"He refused to... Dadi would teach us all, ziddi jo hai" Sam saidEmbarrassed
"He speaks a lil, but doesnt care" Tanmay saidBig smile
"Do u want your kids to learn?" II askedEmbarrassed
"Why not?" Sam smiled...
"U shud talk to them... I was talking with Lasya in Tamil... I will end up teaching her" Ii gushedLOL

"THAT WOULD BE NIIICE, u shud teach her to sing, I will promise to let her hair grow long, and ...pierce her nose on the right side, she can be my Lasya Iyer" Sam had a faraway lookClapEmbarrassedBig smile

II was a glorious pink on the comment... something about that comment made her heart aflutterBlushing

II didnt wear her nose ring today, and she had many scars  to prove as punishment for the crime...Embarrassed

She looked at her plate turning red...
"I like wearing nose rings" she muttered
Tanmay was talking to R&B... he turned a lil to meet her gaze...
THE LOVE OF NOSE RINGS THAT WOULD BE THE TAG LINE FOR THEIR... ERMMM... L... STORY... STORY... YAEmbarrassed

Sam did not notice that as she spoke to Nandan for a min... she was under the impression that there was indeed nothing now... between the two
 Tanmay ne mujhe daant diya saying the sindoor smudged because both walked into 
each other not because he kissed her upstairs that evening in the yellow Bengal cotton... he scolded me for letting my imagination run wild
She told Akka, they should wait and watch... and that she was unable to get any cues, and Tanmay scolded her for making up storiesCry

Akka called "Are u bringing him home? Its 9:49 kanna he has school tomorrow"
"Sorry ka, he just refused to leave" II pleaded
"Oh I know, its not you, are u eating kanna?" Akka asked
"Ya, as soon as I am done?" II promised," I have to work too, I have a 10 with Baldev"
"No worries just wanted to know if I shud send Bala. He doesnt sleep until 11 after a long weekend, hes terrible, phone kudu Sam kitta let me thank her"

She handed the phone...
Tanmay: So sorry we got distracted, so u are keen on working for a product company? Tangible product?Big smile
II: Oh ya, Delhi doesnt have much choices, my parents... dont want me to move to Blore, Bay Area is OK but not Bangalore" she giggledEmbarrassed

Found R&B's eyes ON HER... ON HER... FULL AND PIERCING...Nuke
Tanmay: Arent half the Iyer boys in the Bay Area?Angry
II: More like 90%... (hugely uncomfortable)
He turned to R&B "Only Punjabis go to Eu, Iyers only go to the States it looks like"

R&B didnt respond, didnt shrug, his eyes drilling holes in her..
"I go to Cupertino for my BPO, all I see is Desis" Tanmay guffawed
Sam wandered with a fork, talking with Akka
"Iyer men are educated and smart so why not, more power to them, I mean they dont stop until they get their Ph Ds" Tanmay said casuallyEmbarrassed

R&B just ate... chewing slowly...
II turned crimson... "Some do, u are right" she croaked...
The help brought desserts...
"Do u need a ride?' Tanmay asked
"I dont... I will" she stopped not telling him she would take an auto with a 9 year old after 10 PM on a wintry night
The Shanti Niketan Rd being the quietest and most dangerousCry

"Do u have ur car?" he asked
"Umm.. i will be fine" she said
"R&B chhod dega" Tanmay declared confidentlyClap

Sam returned... II didnt say much... R&B? NOTHING...

The first thing Shravu said when he sat in the car

"Will u teach me how to drive this car?"Angry
"U dont like animals any more" Ii asked irritatedCry

SOMETHING had happened in the dining table... THEY BOTH ACKNOWLDGED IT... BUT BOTH UNWILLING TO ADDRESS IT...
Tanmay's question had awakened feelings of "What the hell are we two trying to do here?"
That was the most dangerous, slippery slope... she had a suitor at home... or ermmm.. in Munirka... a block from Akka's house in Natesan Mama's probably getting ready to go to bed
His girlfriend, "open relationship partner"? Wherever she was... probably shrugged and turned away when he told her he was  making out every time he saw his Iyer biz partner?

"sure bud... how about we meet for the first lesson next Sat?" R&B offered
she looked at him shocked
"NO! WHY? NO! Vendaam... No... I dont think so" II ranted
"I want to, I want to, I want to Chithi" Shravu screamed
R&B didnt respond...  he hadnt said a word to her since the time they sat down to eat
"I wont sit by you because u signal the help to pile my plate"
"The rain check was used up, we can start a new one" he muttered 
He had kissed her MORE than 4 times in the evening today, the two rasmalais and two gulabjamuns from that Thursday was LOOONG EXHAUSTED
Rakshasan...
"I'll pay as I go" (NO RAIN CHECK) she whispered
He half smiled

Shravu, played his  DS, instead of dropping HER first he turned right towards Vasant Vihar... and Malai Mandir...
It was 10: 20 ish...
He walked with her up the stairs... Akka knew she was baby sitting... but NOT the fact that she was getting a ride home from HIM

They knocked and waited the tube light in the living room was on, and they heard people talking...

akka opened mid way in conversationBig smile
And was startled to see R&B II and ShravuShocked

In the living room sat Natesan Mama Mami, Sree and Akka's in laws and BalaROFLShockedNuke

Coming up... Munirka Mutiny




Posted: 7 years ago
THANK YOU TO EVERYONE THAT CONGRATULATED ME
I LOVE LOVE LOVE WRITING THIS TALE
You guys may be right... I MIGHT have the fastest story on IF
I will fully accept that honor...

I believe OBSESSIONS should be fiery passionate, racy and intense.
This story is EXACTLY it...
Its an obsession


When I love something I love it FULLY
When I let go I let go FULLY

What use is half a book, or 7 pages of a book or having to wait two months for the next two pages?
Obsessions wither away and die

Youve GOT to feed obsessions to sustain it

Its like passion... u dont feed it... it shrivels up and dies
Big smile



Posted: 7 years ago
Wowww! I love weekends like I have never before.
All that comes with it ...the EPI-MARATHON from Nisha
and this KAHANI MEIN TWIST. Tongue

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