MG SS:Salaam e Ishq#2 *|| Part 57 @ Page 141 ||* 27-Sep-2020 - Page 15

Posted: 9 years ago
loved it
y cant he give a break to his insecurities n tell her 
he is suffering n making her to
cnt he see even whn he had rejected her she stills stand by him
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
Plsss update soon
Posted: 9 years ago
nice part
maan drooling geet who came in white
he got angry knowing they doesnt have seat
geet went to make the reservation clear for them
the little boy loves her so much he went behind her 2 save from witch
maan taunting him
n the boy felt humilated before the girls
lolz..
geet making him understand
n maan hearing it..
how will he make geet smile

Posted: 9 years ago
Hey
Loved it...
Waiting...
Update soon ...
Posted: 9 years ago
emotional update...
both maaneet are suffering...
really want them to talk with eachother...
Posted: 8 years ago
nice part. Both Maan and Geet are suffering. Hope they find some way out of this mess their life has become.Loved Prem's cute talk.
Posted: 8 years ago

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hopefully u all r fine ..
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sorry for my late lateefi but ill be irregular till late june ..🤢

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Posted: 8 years ago

MG SS : Salaam e Ishq



PART 14


Aniee dadi n geet were now sitted at the table with prem when the band announced the next song ...n it just felt so apt for maan ...


Madnooo
Mashukoo
Hai Dil Ko Teri Aarzoo
Par Mein Tujhe Na Pa Sakun 

Hai Dil Ko Teri Justju
Par Mein Tujhe Na Pa Sakun

Maan stood thr looking at geet and aniee trying to make prem smile but were failing ...her postered smile stabbed his heart ...indeed he was the dark night while she is the bright sunshine to illuminate everyone's life n he can't make her life fell into the darkness of his fate ...

Main Hoon Shab Tu Subah
Dono Jud Ke Juda

Main Hoon Lab Tu Dua
Dono Jud Ke Juda

Madnoo
Mashukoo
Dilbaro
Madnoo Re

Next set of lyrics made him realized how f**ked up his life is going to be ...just how much he wants her n still he can't have her ..

Hai Dil Ko Teri Aarzoo
Par Mein Tujhe Na Pa Sakun 

Every fiber of his being wanted to make her smile wholeheartedly but he just don't know how to ...when he is the reason of her all sorrow how can he become the reason of her happiness ...


Hai Dil Ko Teri Justju
Par Mein Tujhe Na Pa Sakun

Main Hoon Shab Tu Subah
Dono Jud Ke Juda
Main Hoon Lab Tu Dua
Dono Jud Ke Juda

Madnoo
Mashukoo
Dilbaro
Madnoo Re


Kai Khawaab Dil Tujhko Le Kar Sajaye
Per Khauf Yeh Bhi Kahin Per Sataye
Gar Yeh Bhi Tutee To Phir Hoga Kya Re
Mujhe Raas Aati Hai Khushiyan Kahan Re

Maan looked away from them both ..that picture would stay with him but he can't hold on to this hope any more ...n walked away .. not wanting to weave any more dream of thr future together with prem like he used to do in that one year ..every time seeing her with his family he use to have that tinge of hope to have her as his family some day but it all died seeing her almost dead in his arms ...every wish died that very moment when he felt her cold n un moving in his arms ...

Kyun Dil Ko Dukhana Bewajah Madno Re
Kyun Dil Ko Dukhana Bewajah
Phir Aansu Bahana Ek Dafa
Phir Aansu Bahana Ek Dafa

Main Hoon Shab Tu Subah
Dono Jud Ke Juda
Main Hoon Lab Tu Dua
Dono Jud Ke Juda

Madnoo
Mashukoo
Dilbaro
Madnoo Re


Maan went away to place a special order for thr dinner ..while geet moved away feeling dejected with prem's constant low mood ..he was really very hurt with maan scolding him like that ..may be coz maan usually don't scold his little champ at all ...but when he does it is like this ..over the board n hurting for prem ...being an emotionally sensitive person prem do gets really affected with maan being upset with him ...geet sighed n looked at him from  far when she felt dadi maa beside her ..

Prem buhat udaas hai ..maan sir ko itna sakti se use daantna nahi chahiye tha ...bacha hi tu hai .. bache tu aisa sab kar hi dete hain ...

Bachoon ka bachpana kabhi kabhi baron ki jaan nikaal deta hai geet ...maan ke liye prem kya hai yeh tu aap bhi jaanti hain ..

Janti hoon dadi maa ...5 saal se dekhti aayi hoon ...bas rishte ka naam alag hai pr prem aurr maan sir baap-bete hi hain ..magar prem bacha hai ..wohh kaise jaan payega k kab maan sir sach mien ghussa hain aur kab unka ghussa sirf unka dard hai ...uss bichare ko tu poori life yeh hi sochte sochte guzar jayegi .. wohh bhi maan sir ko kabhi samajh nahi paayega ..

Ya shayad wohh samajhta hai geet ...😕

Geet looked at her stunned ...can he ...does he ..?? but how can he ...the confusion on her face was so evident it made dadi maa smile ...

Geet bte hum sab ke dil-o-dimaag ka ek hissa hota hai ..jo hum se bhi chuppa huta hai ...kuch batien jo humara dil jaanta hai ..samajhta hai par dimag ...dimag accept nahi karta ..sahi galat ...han ..naa iss sab mien phas kar apni zindagi guzaarte rehte hain ..kayi faisle lete hain jin ki koi reasoning nahi huti magar bas sahi hute hain ...aur wohh iss hi liye k humare dil ke kisi koone se awaaz aati hai k han yeh theek hai ...sub-conscious ..(geet didn't knew where she was going with this n kept staring at her lost ..trying to process her words while dadi maa looked away at prem who was sitting thr with frowning face).. shayad prem bhi kahin na kahin samajhta hai maan ki nature ko ..unki fiqar ..unke reactions ko tab hi tu aaj tak maan ki har baat bina kisi argument ke manta aaya hai ..har kisi se ..yahan tak ke hum se bhi argue kar lega par maan ki baat ..kabhi nahi taalta ...kyun k uss bache k dil mien bhi kahin na kahin koi na koi reason tu hai ...maan ka galat bematlab ka ghussa bhi bardasht kar leta hai ..kyun ke kahin na kahin dil jaanta hai k sahi hai ... Trust ...(she sighed n turned to geet).. trust buhat baari cheez hai geet aur jab kisi par trust huta hai na tu uski har baat sahi hoti hai .. 

Geet (lost looking into oblivion murmured) : phir chahe who galat bhi kyun na ho ..

Dadi maa (smiled hearing her) : han ..kabhi kabhi agar wohh insaan galat hu tab bhi ..kyun ... aap bhi tu maan ki kitni galat baatien she leti hain ..maan leti hain na ...(geet looked at dadi maa bit taken by surprise how it turned to this but the way she was staring at her it made her awkward as if she would see her emotion through her eyes).. kyun k trust hai ..( n she looked down not being able to look at her n her hairs dropped as a veil b/w them) ...aap bharosa karti hain maan par ...

Geet (a tear slipped from her eyes unaware to dadi maa) : par mien aaj tak nahi jaan payi k mien kyun un par itna trust karti hoon ...y ...

geet sighed to get a hold of herself n quickly wiped her tears not wanting dadi maa questioning her n looked at her with a smile ...a fake smile ..she was about to say something when dadi maa held her hand .. 

Dadi maa : geet maan par se apna yeh trust kabhi kam mat kariyega bte ...please

Geet looked straight in her eyes with her hazel duo... Savitri Khurana had a strange plea in her eyes as if she was desperate hear her positive answer ...geet took a deep breath trying hard to control her tears n held her hand firmly ...n answered her with a radiant smile ...


Tu Hi To Har Bandha Hai 
LAmhoo Ki In Zanjeeron Main
Tu Hi To Har Dum Raha Hai
Khawabo Ki Har Tabeeron Mein 
Tu Hi To Har Din Dikha Hai 
Dundhli Ya Ujali Tasveeron Mein 

Teri Hi To Hai Khushoo
Mujhe Mein Haan Madno Re
Teri Hi To Hai Khushoo
Mujhe Mein Haan 

Abb Tu Hi To Harsu Har Jagah
Abb Tu Hi To Harsu Har Jagah


{{Beh Chus Shab Che Subah, 
Meelith Doshvay Juda
Beh Chus Lab Che Dua, 
Meelith Doshvay Juda...
Madno...}} 


Madnoo
Mashukoo
Dilbaro
Madnoo Re


Dadi maa that's something out of my hand ...mien chahoon tab bhi iss baat par mera bas hi nahi chalta ...na pehle chala hai ...aur na abb chalta hai ...mien karti hoon trust maan sir pe ..n come to think of it ..u r right ..sach mien humare dil ka ek koona hai jis ko hum bhi own karne se inkaar kar dete hain ...mere case mien shayad wohh maan sir par mera bharoosa hai ...iss hi liye tu who kuch bhi karen mien unse ghussa nahi reh paati ..kitna bhi daant len mujhe boora nahi lagta ...bematlab saza den tub hi lagta hai ke shayad koi galti hui hi hugi ...pata nahi kab ..pata nahi kaise par han mien karti hoon trust unn par dadi maa ...(geet didn't knew when her eyes watered but surprisingly her smile broadened) ..tu abb who kitna bhi sado ban jayen ..ya kitna bhi akro types hujayen ..mere liye kuch nahi badlega ...wohh wahi rahenge ..mere sadi akro ...//

DUSHT DANAV ...

Geet giggled n pointed her finger at the person standing to her left ...correct
N turned to dadi maa ...

Dusht danav ...///

N then it dawned upon her ...n she clutched her mouth in shock n terror ...while dadi maa tried to hold her laughter seeing maan's icy glare n geet's horror stricken face ...n she thought wisely to move away while maan stepped towards her n stood infront of geet ...



So mien dusht danav hoon ...right Ms. Handa




Han ..nahi ...mera matlab wohh ..sir ...galati se ..han galti se nikal gaya ...

Waise apne bare mien kya khayaal hai aapka Ms. Handa ..aap khud kisi disaster queen se kam hain ..jahan jaati hain kuch na kuch garbar tu hoti hi hai ...aisa lagta hai problems aapke paas nahi ..aap problems ke paas puhanchti hain ...

Haw ...maan sir aap aisa keh bhi kaise sakte hain ...

Kyun bolne ka licence kya sirf aapko mila hai Ms. Handa ...waise aapko licence ki bhi kya zarorat aap tu ek baar choro hujayen tu rokna hi namumkin hai ..

geet was literally shocked hearing it all ..n quiet offended too just what the hell does he think of himself ...man she was pissed that would be an understatement but maan was enjoying himself seeing the pale face going red with anger n her almond eyes going even more big with shock ...he was having a hard time controlling his smile but he wanted n desperately wanted to make her normal ...he could do this much atleast ..n thr she was with her comeback ...



wohh kya hai na sir ..aapki tarha mere bolne par tax nahi lagta ...tab hi tu aap bolne mien bhi itni kanjoosi karte hain ...kam se kam mien kuch baat tu kar leti hoon ..aap se baat karna choro ho na koi tou aisa lage ga ke kooi apne aap se baat kar rha hai ...kyun aap tu ek shabd se ziada kuch bolenge nahi ...aur who ek shabd bhi kya hunge ...ya tu huga "hmmm" ...ya phir "nahi" aur galti se agar kabhiii mood acha hua tu mou se nikalega .."Han" warna uske liye bhi sadiyoon wait karte raheyi ..

Geettt...


Arre han mien tu yeh bhool hi gayi ...yeh bhi tu aapke favorites ki list mien aata hai ...mujhe dantna jo aapki hobby hai ..

Geet stop it ..

Kyun sachai sunni nahi jaa rahi aap se ..

Ms. Handa agar aap bhool gayi hain tu mien aapko yaad dila dun k aap apne boss se baat kar rahi hain ..

Nahi maan sir ..mien zindagi mien kabhi nahi bhool sakti ke aap Sirf mere Boss hain ...magar aap bhool jaate hain k mienaapki employee sirf office mien hoon ..yahan mien geet hoon ..sirf geet ..aur agar aapko mujhe dantne ka itna hi shook hai mere office aane tak ka wait kar lijeye ..jab aajaongi tab jitna suna na hu suna lijeyega ...

 Jab aaogi matlab ..tum kal office nahi aarahi ...???

Did she heard the panic in his voice or she imagined it ..geet stopped n stare at his face ..his eyes were searching hers she couldn't relate to anything n be4 she could understand or believe what she heard his face was back to that expressionless stoned way ...she sighed n her heart begged him to let her know what is it going on in his heart ...how is she suppose to understand his pacing heart beat with that stonned expression n concealed eyes ..what is she suppose to believe ..maan could see her eyes watering ..he didn't wanted this conversation to end with hurting her ...n he said what came to his mind ...

Abb mujhe nihaarna band karo n answer me ...😳 ðŸ˜†

Shit ...!! He instantly cursed his mind ..where the hell has the mind-to-mouth filter gone ...damn him .. but then his heart did the summersault seeing the red hue n that slight blushing smile liting her face .. n suddenly thr was a peace spreading across his entire being ...he waited to see that smile since she left the dance floor in that party ...maan left a contended sigh while geet was too embarrassed to look at him getting caught like that by him ...n left the place without any more words ...without even turnring back ..wish she have had ..she would have caught him smiling wholeheartedly ...


Haan Tera Saaaya To Mein Hoon 
Par Sang Tere Na Reh Sakhun 
Haan Iss Safar Mein To Mein Hoon
Par Sang Tere Na Ruk Sakun

Main Hoon Shab Tu Subah
Dono Jud Ke Juda
Main Hoon Lab Tu Dua
Dono Jud Ke Juda

Madnoo
Mashukoo
Dilbaro
Madnoo Re

Mahiya Ve
Mahiya Ve
Mahiya Ve

*****^^^^*****

pheww its done ...
i hope its good enough to atleast make u smile ..😊

the song is from hindi movie Lamha one of my all time favorites ...

please let me how it went ..waiting
for ur reviews n likes ðŸ˜ƒðŸ˜³ðŸ˜³

PRECAP :-
hum tum ek car mien band hoon aur police aajaye ...😉
ride back home ..aniee ka ek aur plan ...😆

Posted: 8 years ago
yupiii me 1st yahoo 😊

Superb update
aww our Jr Khurana still upset with his chachoo , geet n anni trymake him happy but no use no worry maan will
patofying him soon...
comes to geet n dadimaa convention I think its much need n that's work on geet...oh I love the way she said
no matter what she always keep her trust on maan ... i think maan would let go of the past and not think that being with him geet life would be on stack plss someone knock some brain on him...
omg maaneet banter was supper hilarious ...Edited by brandgurti - 8 years ago


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