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abha

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Posted: 9 years ago

This one was awesome... u dont reply me once...I have commented many times...I know u r writing many parts...
But still I will comment...I am into your story.
Cant wait for next part di.Edited by abha2701 - 9 years ago

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columbia

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chaliye hum nikal

Nisha you and Kanna will be happy to note

I shall be

Washing dishes

Driving mom to her friends place

Driving sis to pick up stuff for her hostel

And actually leaving bhaiy and bhabhi alone

😆

Toodles all

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Ashu25

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Posted: 9 years ago

I shall htink of it..and post stuff...u go..and get back soon...m waitinggg

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columbia

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nisha

The thing that has touched me the most in the update is the

Conversation between the father and the son

It has come at a main juncture in his life

R&B is now ready - to take on - to move on

It's like that curve you take at the end of a road which has no where else to go except that turn

Details of the conversation were not needed

For a reason

Because all it needed to tell us was the reveal it makes

He now knows

He now realises

Hai koi, jo yeh mujhse keh gaya
Yeh kahan tu reh gaya
Zindagi toh hai jaise karvaan
Tu hai tanha kab yahan
Sabhi toh hai, sabhi toh hai yahaan

Thanks for this tale

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Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 9 years ago

Is he gonna get possessive when what's his name comes? Jealous may be? *Can't wait!* Edited by Wings-of-Fire - 9 years ago

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Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 9 years ago

edited.
Edited by Wings-of-Fire - 9 years ago

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Nisha0604

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Posted: 9 years ago

UNBELIEVABLE...

You girls are extremely cute and enetertaining

HOW can I get them married

Hindi movie to hai nahi yeh

Blackmail etc se to shaadi karegi nahi bandi

Then it will become an another Ekta serial

Good Grief!

Dont even wanna go there, considering C's new rules for this topic

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Nisha0604

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Payal-

I'm gushing over his use of Google translate...and her being quick to switch from Ivaroda to Ivanoda! Such apnapan! ☺️

SHE is getting to HIM! SHE is getting under HIS skin!! ☺️
Poor Rakshasan. (NOT) Probably didn't see it coming. Serves him right. 🤣

PS: Loved the father-son bit. So much. Looking forward to more of their interactions.

THE BEST PART OF ANY LOVE STORY DONT U THINK? Payal?

I mean after they declare it to each other. when the family agrees/disagrees/ the wedding happens... or they part ways... it loses 90% of its zing

The initial phase is what makes our insides fly up to our mouths😳

LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR COMMENTS

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Nisha0604

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ashu9
OMG...he is in love...he is Rakshasan dii...he is so ungentlemanly...he shd be chivalrous...😭😭😭..but I imagine my man this way!!!!!!!!!!! OMG..do u delve into my mind write stuff 😆😆😆...I love R&B more now...thank uuu

THANK GOD Ashu!

U love un chivalrous men!

I WISH ONE ON YOU

Chivalry and equal rights for women are over rated in a love story😈

Yep!

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Nisha0604

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire
Man!!!!!!!!!!

☺️

THANK YOU!

I am glad thats all u could come up with

Must'a been good

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