"UPDATE"RAYA SS : Back In Time Part 12 on Page 23 *05-02-15*

Posted: 2014-12-25T05:59:07Z

Hello I m starting a New SS (based on one novel)

Here is Small Part


The day I found out that Ram Kapoor  killed himself, I didn't know what to think.

  I stared up at Mrs. Mehra, our French teacher, with a blank look on my face, not really believing what I'd just heard.

 "Fir Se bol Kya hua (Said again what happen)?" one of the girls sitting beside me said in a light voice...

  Mrs. Mehra sighed heavily as she took off her glasses and polished them with hanky. "Ram Kapoor committed suicide yesterday evening."

  I swallowed hard as I slouched backwards in my seat, feeling the color draining from my face. That's what I thought Mrs Mehra had said. Normally the woman was so lost in her own little world and babbling things in French that I thought I could've passed off what she'd said as another bit of nonsense.

  But I knew that this time that wasn't exactly the case.

The more I thought about what she'd said, the more I realized that it sort of did make sense.

   When I'd first walked into the college Half hour Ago ago, I couldn't help but feel like

Kuch galat hua ya Hone wala hai (something had gone wrong or going to wrong), like there was this massive cloud of depression hovering over the place. I'd even seen bits of the staff clustered together in the way, their heads together as they talked quickly and quietly in furious whisperings.

  At first I'd just assumed that maybe there was a Fight or Police case or MMS scandal in the college or something. But did All this really cause looks of sorrow and horror to be on teachers' faces?

 "Who's Ram Kapoor ?" another girl from the back of the classroom shouted,

  Mrs. Mehra's tired looking eyes sparked with anger as she glared at the offender in the back of the room. "A very important member of this student body, and I do suggest you refrain from speaking like that again."

 The entire class stunned

Mrs. Mehra never talked like that.

  I listened only half heartedly to what our teacher said next, explaining how psychologists from town offices would be coming to school every day for the next two weeks to help people cope with what they were feeling. She kept talking about how it wasn't good that we should bottle up our emotions and how we should remember Ram with glad, happy memories instead of what he'd done.

  Well, I had enough trouble sharing my emotions, and I wasn't about to change that anytime soon.

  When the first period bell rang, I leapt up out of my chair, grabbed my things, and bolted from the room before anyone else had even realized it was time to leave.

  I really didn't know why I was feeling like a complete and utter mess. It wasn't like I'd been best friends with Ram Kapoor or anything.

 He was tall and had dark, unmanageable hair, along with a pale, sharply defined face that would have looked highly aristocratic on anybody else. Actually, Ram was a pretty damn handsome guy, which made it all the more confusing as to why he was such an antisocial outcast.

  Maybe it was because he just didn't like anybody. Or maybe it was because everyone else just didn't like him.


Edited by aman.anjaan - 2015-02-05T05:44:00Z
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Posted: 2014-12-25T06:12:37Z
Seem to be very interesting
In intro you have given shock
Pls do continue and thank you for the pm
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Posted: 2014-12-25T06:53:44Z
Its an interesting start..SmileSmileSmile
But plz dont make it tragedy endTongue
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Posted: 2014-12-25T06:55:49Z
I dnt kno wt to say abt d story cz ram dead is kind of a shock to me bt den i would like to kno wts d concept of d story...
So do continue...
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Posted: 2014-12-25T07:48:37Z
Look very interesting eagarly waiting to next part.continue soon an thank u for pm
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Posted: 2014-12-25T08:37:26Z
Plzzz continue ASAP !!!!
Thanks 4 pm!!!
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Posted: 2014-12-25T08:38:13Z
intersting. ram ko kyu maar diya? aur wo b pehle hi part me. not fair. but i think the mystery will unfold in ur coming updates. pl continue ur other story also. thanks for pm.
Madhuri Dixit and Sakshi Tanwar....FOREVER FAVOURITES
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Posted: 2014-12-25T08:46:02Z
Nice n interesting pls continue soon
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