Posted: 9 years ago
Arnav doesn't  have a higher body temperature, does he?
Its just that when he and Khushi  touch, the chemistry is HOT.
Aren't I right?
AK ash talks with a french accent
You making fun of  french!😑 πŸ˜†
I'm loving this story.
Would love it if you could add a few more chapters.
3 are not enough ,  Chaitu. 
Posted: 9 years ago
For a moment I thought arnav was talking about female companions for earth's human and subsequently increasing their no through natural meansπŸ˜†. But then I remembered he said that natural means will be tedious and they need quality people and not quantity. Hehe...

Felt bad for him. First a robot was giving him unwanted company and then they were doing test on him like he was a laboratory rat. But I liked his confidence. He just wanted khushi err to talk with khushi only. And he is hotter too πŸ˜†.

Khushi is affected by arnav. It's no surprise. We are also his victims.

Ah! Humans on moon and humans on atlantis.. Would love to know more about them πŸ˜‰..
Posted: 9 years ago
oh chaituu, a totally different one
loving it
waiting for the next part
Posted: 9 years ago
Hey there!
I have never, ever read something like this.. And this is really good! Though it took a little time to fully comprehend the scenario, it was worth it and even more :)
Hats off! For trying something as such and excelling..
Waiting for the finale!
Posted: 9 years ago
It's simply amazing [:P] [:P]
Chaitali...
Ur user Id suits ur style of writing or vice versa..

Arnav chose only Khushi to be his helper..
He's such an effect on her [;)] [LOL] ..

Khushi's reaction to his touch made me smile...
She must return to Earth with him...

I loved this world... Cute robot La-1-ya n AK-ash...
OMG...

Pls continue it to at least more 4-5 parts.. [:^(] [:$]
Posted: 9 years ago
oh wow this is interesting...i loved it...Arnav from Earth and Khushi from Atlantis πŸ˜›
oh n loved the humanoids ..la and Ak-ash πŸ˜ƒ they r smart 
Edited by luvbug - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update Chaitu!!! Loved it!!!!
Posted: 9 years ago
Mine
*edited*

C!! What an update! Kudos lady! Amazingly penned down! I swear! I never expected something like this! The basic stuff between humans lost due to the tech savy world!! Love I mean! You actually don't expect anything else from this story! It was sheer perfection they way you showed her inner turmoil without adding to many emotions to it keeping in mind she's lived amongst Robots for better part of her life!


I'm not able to word out! I'll get back soon!

Cheers 
Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Omg! Khushi told arnav about her body reactions to himπŸ˜†.
That was awesome. Arnav cleared her confusions.
Khushi wanted human companions and she is going to get it in form of arnav and his love.
I'm glad to know human fight repeat their letterbox mistake for playing with mother earth.
Wish you add few more parts. Im eager to know the new lifestyle on earth.

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