RaYa : OS : kulfi love

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Posted: 2014-11-28T22:30:50Z
Note: just getting some abnormal thoughts out of my mind ,
all those thursday nights guesses about Monday episodes of
#BALH seriously loveling this relief wali feeling after penning
down
                         Indtroduction
Remember Priya getting talli for the very first time , Epi 57,
58 .This was the first epi of #Balh that i had watched
complete in one (n first epi that i have downloaded )that to
at the epic time of 10:30 ; coincidentally eating Kulfi <3 and
get On of becoming die heart fan of brilliance act of superbly
talented #SakshiTanwar Mam ... I can go on writting this So
kinda Stopping now.. ;)
::: I am taking the part when Ram drags Priya into the Car n
RaYa wave goodnight bye to Sharma Family To the
intermission RaYa were finaly back in Purple Room ::::
When Braced Up the Plot .. Do proceed
Kulfi Love
Ram quickly raced the car towards the main Lane , imagining
how would he tolerate his Loud Mother in Law, suddenly their
was a cute distraction n he turned towards the voice with a
fake but heartwarming smile :)
P : Misterrr Kapoor ...
R: Kya Hai ???
P: Aap ne muje meri ma se bath kun nhi karne di ?
R: vo... tum pata bhi hai tum kis haal m ho.
P: (making faces) Kisss hal m hu Matlab ???? Bilkul thik thak
toh hu , aapse zada Acchi lag rahi hu n energetic bhi vo bhi
Binaaa kisi tablets ke ...
R : okay !! (Ram remembered neha's advice to say yes ,
chahe priya kuch bhi kahe, ) tum obliviously mujh se jaada
acchi lag rahi ho , toh batao agar hum dono unn se bath
karte toh unne lagta na ki unki beti unki damaad se acchi lag
rahi hai !!! N tumhe pata hai na ki m kaun hu ??...
P: han ... The Ram Kapoor ...
hehe matlab ki aap mujhse darte hain ??
R: obviously !! Har pati ko apni patni se dar lagta hai , isme
kaun si badi baat h , m koi alag khet ki muli, toh hu nhi na ..
(before Ram could realise what was he saying he had
completed the sentence in One go , then realization strucked
him bt he was quite sure he was afraid of his hitler biwi)
P: Aap shaayad bhul rahe hai ki hum dono toh ''Har kisi'' wali
category m aate hi nhi hai na...
Their was a silence n Ram was just starering at his drunken
wife n Priya was busy watching the streetlights kissed
Roads ...
Suddenly she screamed
P: Mr kapoor break laga...e...y...e
Ram without watching applied break
They had reached a crossing & their was a car from front, just
escaped a horrible accident... Ram was breathing hard ,
priya opened her eyes witnessing the dramatic scene , both
cars were safe , she took a breath of relief !!
There were horns honking from behind , Ram raced the car...
n murmerd a slight Thank You ... but the person beside
seems least interested ...
P: Aapne kabhi notice kiya hai ki road raat ko kitni payari
lagti hai ...
R: ab kya tumhe Road se bhi Pyaar hogaya ( feeling happy
with his wife's innocent talks n the fact that she isnt in
senses so they can talk freely )
P: han ! Hogaya bt ek problem hai
R: Acccha !!!! n kya hai vo problem ??
P: meri saadi toh already Aap se ho raki hai na...
Both of had a light laughter .. They were passing through
Marina Drive
And Priya as Quick she was in changing topic , Quickly
poulted
P : Mr Kapoor todhi der yaaha ruke
R: No !!!!!
P: Plzzz na
R: yaar muje accha nhi lagti ye jagah
P: bas todhi der
R: muje nind aarahi hai priya !! Kal bahut kaam hai
P : okay , thik hai
R: what ????? Tum maan gayi
P: Aap bahut ajeb hai , ek toh itna bura gaana gate hai , phir
meri baat bhi nhi maante n agar m maan jau toh chillate
hai ... Aap ka chillane ke bina khana hazam nhi hota kya
R : n tumhara khanna taano ke bina hazam nhi hota hai na ...
P: saach karva hota !! Isme m kya karu agar logo ko free ki
advice taane lagte hain ( Ram again gave a freak smile) BTW
aapne kulfi kun nhi khai ??
R: aaree khai toh thi tumhare samne ...
P: Oh arreee han , toh vo joh thi na natasha ! Usne kun nhi
khai ??
R: uska gala karab tha PRIYA
P: uska gala karab tha toh usne kulfi nhi kayi , Mera bhi gala
karab hai kya
R : nhi toh !
P: toh maine kulfi kun nhi kayi ????
R: ( banged his head with his left hand ) Abhi toh kaayi
tumne... ( realized that sacchi m priya ne kulfi nhi khai )
P: maine nhi kayi m toh aap ke liye nikal rahi thi ... sab
kuch aap ki vajah se hota hai mr Kapoor ..
( Ram quickly texted sm1 to order kulfi from the nearest 5
Star hotel from Kapoor Mansion )
R : Okay , fine sorry !!! Tumhare liya kulfi ghar pAr manga di
hai.
P: this is not fair aap nr toh vahan enjoy karke khai n m ghar
pe table chair par beth kar khau ..
R : yaar priya hum kal vapas vaha jayenge okay
P: huh
ram sensed no life saver is left Turned On the CD player ...
that played ...
Hum Tum kitne pas hai kitne dur hai chand sitare ...
Priya was enjoying this music treat ! Ram stopped the car
and took kulfi packet from a attendant and drove back to the
beach side , stepped out of car with priya to have kulfi ...
priya had a look of '' How come U be doing This ! .. Ram had
a instinct that she might have got her senses ... took her
hands in his hands...
R: priya !! I want to thank you for getting my life back in my
life , Vikram is not just my friend , he is someone i could rely
my life on ; And U recently save both of Ours life from that
could be accident.. ( priya got tears in her eyes n then started
smilling )M tumhe seriouly thanks kah raha hu n tum has rahi
ho ... ( then she stared crying ) arrre arree !! Ab ro kun rahi
ho
P: kulfi pigal gayi Mr Kapoor !!!!! Aap itne insensitive kaise ho
satke hai ,,, bachari kulfi ...
R: tumne sunna maine abhi-abhi tum se kya kha ??
P: han aap mere liye 2-2 kulfi laaye hain n vo aapke lecture k
chakar m pigal gai !
R: My God !!
P: Aap bagwan ko kun bich m larahe hai , ab hum beach par
aaye hai gumte hai na ( priya left his hand , as soon as she
took on step tripped and got unbalanced, Ram caught hold of
her ...
R : hum kahi nhi jaa rahe hai , chalo gaadi mai , abhi aur issi waqut
P: kun jau m
R: kun ki m kah raha hu

P: aap ye achanak se school Principal ke tarah kun behave
kar rahe hai , Monster !!
Ram raced the car after making Sure Priya had her seatbealt
kept !
R: Monster ! Great going Mrs Kapoor , Dinasour aur tablet
kapoor se man bhar gaya .
P: (slight laughter) m ye kufi kha sakti hu ...
R: tummhaare liye hi li hai Madam
P: ThankYou !...
... ek request hai ...
R: ab kya hai meri Ma !
P: vo gaana chala do ...
R: ye lo ( he pushed the button )
Again the environment had the Soulfull song ...
Priya was licking her kulfi n enjoying it . Finaly car stopped at
kapoor Mansion.
R: kaisi hai
P: kya ?
R: Kulfi
P: han bahut acchi hai aapko kaisi lagi
R : muje bhi badi acchi lagi .
N the song played Aur Tum
RaYa laughed in Unison ...
-------x----------x---------x----------x------------x
Puri Ramayan Priya ko kulfi khilane ke liye hi likhi thi ;This
was my first Try ... do give reviews :-) :-) Another one from same pen : lemonade magic http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4390462


On twitter : twitter.com/itsSnehEdited by SakshianSneh - 2015-07-31T23:13:47Z
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Posted: 2014-11-28T23:00:01Z
heyyy hiii... first of all welcome to IF dudeee...


im jyothi...Smile,,wts ur name..?


coming to story...
very nice start...good title..
cuteee updatee...
continue soon...
next time pm me when u updatee...Smile

Edited by jodude - 2014-11-28T23:00:48Z
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Posted: 2014-11-28T23:11:04Z
Awesome OS !!
Do write more!!
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Posted: 2014-11-28T23:14:15Z
very very cute update. good going. do write more. kaash yaar balh me aisa hota. Wink
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Madhuri Dixit and Sakshi Tanwar....FOREVER FAVOURITES
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Posted: 2014-11-28T23:40:43Z

very nice update continue soon

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Posted: 2014-11-29T00:21:42Z
Hey sneha awesome n lovely os plsss do write more cos Hume bhi Raya bade acche lagte hai
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Posted: 2014-11-29T01:02:45Z
very nice update. good going. do write more. Wink
next tym pls pm me
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Posted: 2014-11-29T01:40:03Z
Nice and cute update...pls continue...
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