I'll Love You Longer Than Forever - AR FF (Update Pg 144) - Page 98

Originally posted by: mahima00

yahan kyun band kiya???? i wanted more... so much more.. next part ASAP!
and thanks for not introducing the love drama between sid su and AR. vo bakaar ka drama hi hota... lets just let AR live in peace- together!! 

Originally posted by: nilusoni

wonderful part

wow most awaited basket ball match amazing

both teams were wow

ar moments during match lovely

awe i am expecting that you will make armaan win but that's ok

omg cliffy end kiya 

armaan's proposal excited for it

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next 

continue soon

Originally posted by: Mpakeez

Prags...
Love U Yaar...
Last Two Update Aaj tak Ke Best Thay.. I mean Best Updatest Mai Thay..
I know yai mai har Update ke baad Likhti hoon..
But wat To do Yaar.. Urs Every Update previous Wale se best Hota hai..

Achcha Pehle Last Update ke baare mai..
Jab Update start Huwaa..
I was like Haaaw Yai kya Huwa yai Kaha ja rahe hai.. Dinner Ka kya huwaa..
Wo Khatam Ho gaya kya..
Yai dono akeele Dinner ke liye ja rahe hai kya.. 😆
but thank God Jaldi Hi smjh aagaya.. Kya huwa..
Dn jab dono wapass aaye.. & Muski & Rahul Ki as usual Fight.. Wo Padh ke DMG yaad aagaya..
Kuch cheezein kabhi nahi badal skti..

& Prank Game Start Ho gaya..
Yai Ridhima Buhat shaitaan Ho gayi hai Bichaare mere Ammy Ko Mirchi Khila di..
Aur Uske Baad prank war Ki kisne sab se ziyada Prank Kheele Hai..

Kuch Pranks Padh ke Ewww wali feeling aagayi.. 😛

finally dinner Ho gaya..
Aur Interns Ko Aese seniors Ko deekh ke shock lag gaya special Su & Sid Ko..

& Uske Baad Dr. Kreeti ne Basketball match ka Bola.. I was Like Yuppiiieee .. Finally Ab Kisi FF mai Mai Ammy Ko winning side mai deekhungi..(Ruk Iske aage ki kahani Nxt update Relate cmnt mai dungi)

fir Team Decide..
Aur Sid Ka Ridhima Ki side ka Bolna Mujhe laga Ab To Armaan Isko fod dega..
But Shanky Ne sambhaal liyaa

ab Nxt Update..
To Rahul Ko commentator Banna diyaa.. Aur Wo Kankhajura Ridhima Ko Openly Support kar raha tha.. Huh

aur Aur BichaarE Mere Ammy Ko Hara diya Tune Prags.. Yai Achcha Nahi Kiyaa..
Koi B Usko jeetne nahi detaa.. :( :'(

Aur Yai sab mnz Old Gang Ridhima Ko support kar rahi thi..
Mere Armaan Ko kisi ne Support nahi kiya To kya Khaakh Jeetta..

Aur Match tie Ho gaya..
Mujhe laga Shayad ab Jeetegaa..
But nahi Tumhare Dimaag mai to Koi aur Hi kahani chal rahi thi..

Aur One on One Mai Yuvi ko shock de daala GANG ne.. LOL

yuppiiieee Finally Yuvi ko pata chala aur Nxt Update mai sab ko pata chalega..

Dono cheater Cock hai AR..
BasketBall kheel rahe hai ya Romance aur Seduce game..
& Finally wahi Huwa Jis ka Mujhe darr tha Armaan Dream Land Mai chala gaya aur Yelo fir se Haar Gaya Yaha B.

Yai Su & New Gang Ko shock laga Bet Ke baare mai sun ke.. 😆 😛
bada Possesive Ho rahe hai na Armaan Ko leke Ruk Next update tak wait kar.. Saare Dream Tut ke bikhar jaane hai Su ke..

OMG ... Yai last mai Tha Kyaa.
ARMAAN MALIK ne Propose kiya RIDHIMA ko wo B sab Ke saamne... Aur Ridhima Ka reaction Meri Tarah Late aaya.. .. Hehehehehehe
chalo Der aaye Durust aaye..
Finally Propose ...
Is Last Scene Ki wajah se Maaf Kiya Tujhee..
Propose sab Ke saamne Hoga I hope Buhat Khoobsurat hoga..


& Abhi Mujhe Nxt Update chahiye.. Wo B EID gift.. Ab Nxt Update ke Liye Blackmail kar Hi skti hoon..
Hai na Prags..

Abhi mujhe aur Likhe Ka Mann karing.. Par mai thakk gayii Yaar..
Mai Rozza Hoon.. Isi liye abhii bas..

Nxt update jaldi de..
I am Super xcited For Nxt update..

& Haan thank God Su & Sid wala Plan cancel kiya tune..

Ab Update de..
Love U..
Tataaa

Originally posted by: tinkerred10

The update was seriously amazing !!! It so reminded me of all those basketball games they used to have and the girls vs boys thing . loved it :) And did Armaan just propose ?? *squeals* Cant wait for the next part !! ps: Your story is just perfect ..it's all that I wanted to happen in DMG after that shootout . And your writing style is amazing ..I can almost imagine all the characters doing what you write . pss: Armaan-Riddhima <3 <3 *sighs*

Originally posted by: shreya03

super duper best part till now this was awesome part love it how sweet of armaan lost match for riddhima's smile that is a true love & rahul riddhima bounding are awesome & I hate that su good to see anjali reply & I always thought whenever armaan propose riddhima in most romantic way but this is a unique style of propose of our armaan & looking forward for armaan's ki julami ;-) please update soon it become so interesting :-)

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

awsumm part...
loved it..

Originally posted by: teenorchid

awww

this is such an awesome parttt

loved eettt

Originally posted by: SGROVER_WINGET

Hey prags 

Awesome mahn 

I knw i knw pichle kuch parts par comment nahi Kiya Maine 

Kya karun busy thi yaar 

U too knw na mai kitni busy thi 

But jab bhi time mila i read the parts 

Chal coming to this part 

Awesome 

Full game was rocking especially AR ka ek dusre ko looks 

Sach mein yaar ye ff resembles dmg matlab dmg ka season 2 Lagta hai 

Everything u write abt AR yaad dilati hai dmg ki 

Ridzi toh jeet gayi 

Armaan uska 1 hafte tak ghulam banega 

Mera poor ammy 

But really loved the way how he just proposed her 

Yayyy

Shaadi is on the way 

I am sooo excited aaj Kal mujhe pata nahi kyun Shaadiya excites me alottt 

Hihihihihi 

Phir Chahe real life mein ho ya reel waale life mein 

Anyways 

Part toh awesome tha 

Ekdum phaadu 

Ab next part ka eagerly waiting 

Jaldi update kar 

Love u 

Originally posted by: chaitrika12

How sweet armaan wants to loose game for riddhima nice part basketball game me hamesha ki tarah riddhima jeet gaya waiting for next part

Thanks so much, Chaitrika!

Originally posted by: kritika201

Wow!!!!

Awsm awsm!!!

Loved it <3