I'll Love You Longer Than Forever - AR FF (Update Pg 144) - Page 125

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Posted: 6 years ago
wonderful part
wow most awaited basket ball match amazing
both teams were wow
ar moments during match lovely
awe i am expecting that you will make armaan win but that's ok
omg cliffy end kiya 
armaan's proposal excited for it
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next 
continue soon

Posted: 6 years ago
Prags...
Love U Yaar...
Last Two Update Aaj tak Ke Best Thay.. I mean Best Updatest Mai Thay..
I know yai mai har Update ke baad Likhti hoon..
But wat To do Yaar.. Urs Every Update previous Wale se best Hota hai..

Achcha Pehle Last Update ke baare mai..
Jab Update start Huwaa..
I was like Haaaw Yai kya Huwa yai Kaha ja rahe hai.. Dinner Ka kya huwaa..
Wo Khatam Ho gaya kya..
Yai dono akeele Dinner ke liye ja rahe hai kya.. LOL
but thank God Jaldi Hi smjh aagaya.. Kya huwa..
Dn jab dono wapass aaye.. & Muski & Rahul Ki as usual Fight.. Wo Padh ke DMG yaad aagaya..
Kuch cheezein kabhi nahi badal skti..

& Prank Game Start Ho gaya..
Yai Ridhima Buhat shaitaan Ho gayi hai Bichaare mere Ammy Ko Mirchi Khila di..
Aur Uske Baad prank war Ki kisne sab se ziyada Prank Kheele Hai..

Kuch Pranks Padh ke Ewww wali feeling aagayi.. Tongue

finally dinner Ho gaya..
Aur Interns Ko Aese seniors Ko deekh ke shock lag gaya special Su & Sid Ko..

& Uske Baad Dr. Kreeti ne Basketball match ka Bola.. I was Like Yuppiiieee .. Finally Ab Kisi FF mai Mai Ammy Ko winning side mai deekhungi..(Ruk Iske aage ki kahani Nxt update Relate cmnt mai dungi)

fir Team Decide..
Aur Sid Ka Ridhima Ki side ka Bolna Mujhe laga Ab To Armaan Isko fod dega..
But Shanky Ne sambhaal liyaa

ab Nxt Update..
To Rahul Ko commentator Banna diyaa.. Aur Wo Kankhajura Ridhima Ko Openly Support kar raha tha.. Huh

aur Aur BichaarE Mere Ammy Ko Hara diya Tune Prags.. Yai Achcha Nahi Kiyaa..
Koi B Usko jeetne nahi detaa.. :( :'(

Aur Yai sab mnz Old Gang Ridhima Ko support kar rahi thi..
Mere Armaan Ko kisi ne Support nahi kiya To kya Khaakh Jeetta..

Aur Match tie Ho gaya..
Mujhe laga Shayad ab Jeetegaa..
But nahi Tumhare Dimaag mai to Koi aur Hi kahani chal rahi thi..

Aur One on One Mai Yuvi ko shock de daala GANG ne.. LOL

yuppiiieee Finally Yuvi ko pata chala aur Nxt Update mai sab ko pata chalega..

Dono cheater Cock hai AR..
BasketBall kheel rahe hai ya Romance aur Seduce game..
& Finally wahi Huwa Jis ka Mujhe darr tha Armaan Dream Land Mai chala gaya aur Yelo fir se Haar Gaya Yaha B.

Yai Su & New Gang Ko shock laga Bet Ke baare mai sun ke.. LOL Tongue
bada Possesive Ho rahe hai na Armaan Ko leke Ruk Next update tak wait kar.. Saare Dream Tut ke bikhar jaane hai Su ke..

OMG ... Yai last mai Tha Kyaa.
ARMAAN MALIK ne Propose kiya RIDHIMA ko wo B sab Ke saamne... Aur Ridhima Ka reaction Meri Tarah Late aaya.. .. Hehehehehehe
chalo Der aaye Durust aaye..
Finally Propose ...
Is Last Scene Ki wajah se Maaf Kiya Tujhee..
Propose sab Ke saamne Hoga I hope Buhat Khoobsurat hoga..


& Abhi Mujhe Nxt Update chahiye.. Wo B EID gift.. Ab Nxt Update ke Liye Blackmail kar Hi skti hoon..
Hai na Prags..

Abhi mujhe aur Likhe Ka Mann karing.. Par mai thakk gayii Yaar..
Mai Rozza Hoon.. Isi liye abhii bas..

Nxt update jaldi de..
I am Super xcited For Nxt update..

& Haan thank God Su & Sid wala Plan cancel kiya tune..

Ab Update de..
Love U..
Tataaa
Posted: 6 years ago
The update was seriously amazing !!! It so reminded me of all those basketball games they used to have and the girls vs boys thing . loved it :) And did Armaan just propose ?? *squeals* Cant wait for the next part !! ps: Your story is just perfect ..it's all that I wanted to happen in DMG after that shootout . And your writing style is amazing ..I can almost imagine all the characters doing what you write . pss: Armaan-Riddhima <3 <3 *sighs*
Posted: 6 years ago
super duper best part till now this was awesome part love it how sweet of armaan lost match for riddhima's smile that is a true love & rahul riddhima bounding are awesome & I hate that su good to see anjali reply & I always thought whenever armaan propose riddhima in most romantic way but this is a unique style of propose of our armaan & looking forward for armaan's ki julami ;-) please update soon it become so interesting :-)
Posted: 6 years ago
awsumm part...
loved it..
Posted: 6 years ago
awww
this is such an awesome parttt
loved eettt
Posted: 6 years ago
Hey prags 
Awesome mahn 
I knw i knw pichle kuch parts par comment nahi Kiya Maine 
Kya karun busy thi yaar 
U too knw na mai kitni busy thi 
But jab bhi time mila i read the parts 
Chal coming to this part 
Awesome 
Full game was rocking especially AR ka ek dusre ko looks 
Sach mein yaar ye ff resembles dmg matlab dmg ka season 2 Lagta hai 
Everything u write abt AR yaad dilati hai dmg ki 
Ridzi toh jeet gayi 
Armaan uska 1 hafte tak ghulam banega 
Mera poor ammy 
But really loved the way how he just proposed her 
Yayyy
Shaadi is on the way 
I am sooo excited aaj Kal mujhe pata nahi kyun Shaadiya excites me alottt 
Hihihihihi 
Phir Chahe real life mein ho ya reel waale life mein 
Anyways 
Part toh awesome tha 
Ekdum phaadu 
Ab next part ka eagerly waiting 
Jaldi update kar 
Love u 
Posted: 6 years ago
How sweet armaan wants to loose game for riddhima nice part basketball game me hamesha ki tarah riddhima jeet gaya waiting for next part

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