aman.. fantastic end to fantastic story. finally priya realised her feelings for ram. the kiss was the icing on the cake. but i have one complaint. priya blush again...ram takes her in his arms and place her on bed... and come top of her...takes duvet and rest u can imagine[B][/B] how can we imagin k rayav k bich me duvet me kya kya hua. aap to janate ho na k yaha IF pe hum sab kitne sharif bacche hai. agar aap bata dete detail me to hum agyani logo ko thoda gyan prapt hota. 😉 i was expecting thoda jyada...but... anyway do write more stories like this. and ha if u want to take break , we respect ur decision but pl bahot jyada time IF se door mat rehna. thanks for this beautiful story. keep writing more abt raya and do entertain us. thank u again.
Basically I am new to this forum. And also a madarasi.. so can't understand the poems you write.. continue ur writing.. my humble request s try to write in English
