New FF naa koi hai zindagi mein tumhare bina NOTE on pg 39

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Posted: 2014-10-19T03:21:46Z
     NAA KOI HAI ZINDAGI MEIN TUMHARE BINA

Ye aisi kahaani hai jo dolog kisi aur se pyar karthe hai wo unse nahi kisi aur se shaadi ki
Characters ke naam ram and Priya
Priya ram se shaadi karne ke liye issliye mangayi kyunki wo apni galthi ko sudarna chahthi thi jo wo kiya hi nahi
Ram Priya se shaadi karne ke liye issliye mangaye kyunki wo apni family ko khush dekhna chahtha
Shaadi hogayi neha vikram ram Priya milkar ek apna company start karthe hai
Ek din ram ko patha chalega priya ki wajahse hi ram apna pyar se door hua
Ussidin ram case win hojayega raaton raaton unki saari industries wapas miljaathe
Dadi: ye sab mere ram ki mehnath ki nathija
Naani: ye sab meri Priya ki shaadi se karne ka result hai
Dadi naani jagada shuru
Priya: dadi naani ki taraf se mein maafi maangrahi hu pls ye sab Mr.kapoor ki mehnath hai wo mein jaanthi hoon
Naani: what is this Priya
Priya: bas naani ye kya lekhe argue kar rahi hai aap ye sab Mr.kapoor ki wajahse hua aapko patha nahi wo kithna mehnath kiya inn sab ke liye aur esidath aap dadi se kabhi aise baath math kijiye pls
Naani: but priya 
Priya: mr.kapoor ye aap jo mujhse maanga hai wo aapko deyrahi hoon aaj se aapko iss rishte se azaad Mr.kapoor ek baath kehna chahthi hoon aaj kyunki patha nahi aagey mauka milega nahi wo ye she is crying "I I I love you" priya hugs ram tightly and runs from there giving some papers to ram
Ram: priya I love you
Edited by joemahika - 2015-01-20T08:28:12Z
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Posted: 2014-10-19T03:28:06Z
Wow neethu ..nice start 
but short tha .. next time want long update 

so both are in love with each other 

cont soon 
Edited by luvsakshi - 2014-10-19T03:29:25Z
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Posted: 2014-10-19T03:44:20Z
nice start...
short one...
next time plss long update...LOL
continue soon
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Posted: 2014-10-19T03:48:45Z
Very nice beginning of the story
Raya being love and confessed also
pls continue soon with long update
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Posted: 2014-10-19T04:01:08Z
Ye toh trailer hai
Picture abhi shuru nahi hua
Its just basic concept of my story
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Posted: 2014-10-19T04:03:16Z
Originally posted by joemahika


Ye toh trailer hai
Picture abhi shuru nahi hua
Its just basic concept of my story


achha baba trailer tho masth hai 

ab update bhi dedo 

waiting eagerly 

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Posted: 2014-10-19T04:12:13Z
Part 1
(Priya sharma : accountant in xyz company, priya kaam hai accepting tenders from other companies and she is the financial incharge in that company

Ram kapoor : IT engineer in BBC company, he is the head of the region,company supplies PC s for outer countries he deals with spare suppliers and he wants best for his company but hidden thing is basically kapoor industries ko kisine dhoke se khabja kiya hai aur court pe case ki hearing ho rahi hai ram family financial support ke liye job kar raha hai upar )

Zindagi mein koi acchi din bure din nahi hothe, hothe hain toh bas din aur raath
Aisi hi ek din ek subah 
Apartment ke neeche subah ki jocking karke ek bhai apni behen se masti karthey hue aa pahuncha

Priya : bhai am first showing thumb to his brother running towards lift

Siddhartha: priyu stop this is cheating there am searching u and ur here now stop answer me "kahan gayi thi tum" holding her by shoulders

Priya stammers " main..main... Wahi thi bas kisi friend ka call aaya tha toh baath kar rahhaii"

Siddharth: ithni subah dost ye dost girl ya boy asks her teasingly

Priya irritatingly says : stop it bhai u know me na, oh lift aagayi chale bhai maa wait kar rahi hogi

Sharma family

Sudhir sharma : head of the family kuch health issues ki wajhase wo kaam chodna pada aur saari responsibility bade bete aur beti liya hai

Shipra sharma: wife of sudhir sharma aur 3 kids ki mother thoda loud hai

Siddhartha sharma : sharma ki bade bete behen se bahuth pyar karthey hai 

Rishab sharma : second son jo bahuth jovial and thoda childish attitude 

Dono bhai mein ek common baath hai wo behen se pyar

Priya sharma : ghar mein choti hain phir bhi responsible ambitious hai jo zindagi mein kuch Karna chahthi hai

Ye teen bhai behen ek dusre bhai behen kam dosth jyada hai

Jab siddharth aur priya ghar pahunche hall mein koi so rahatha wo kaun hai siddharth aur priya samjhgaye

Siddharth : meine isko subah uttha ke gaya tha, priyu ye gadha abhi tak soraha hai 

Priya: bhai isko kaise utthana mujhe patha hai,priya dining table se water mug uttakar poora paani jo soraha hai unpe girathi hai 

Jo insaan soraha tha wo chillakar uttha hai gabrahuye 

Siddhartha: get up rishu,sid and priya both are laughing

Rishabh jumps from the sofa when he open his eyes he saw that priya had water mug in her hand 

rishabh gusse mein 

Rishu: priyu aaj chodungi nahi tumhe ruk mein aatha hoo priya starts running goes to kitchen and hides behind shipra who is preparing breakfast shipra shouts them

Shipra : subah subah kya hai ye priyu ye kya hai joging se aakar fresh up bhi nahi hua ladayi shuru office nahi jaana hai kya aur tu rishu jaake pehle brush Karo 

Priya and rishabh acche bachon ki tarah wahan se chale jaathe hai

Hall mein sudhir and Siddharth kuch discuss kar rahe the inn dono ke dekthe he chup hojathe hai

Priya : good morning papa 

Sudhir: good morning priyu 

Priya : kya baath hai papa kuch tensed lag rahi ho

Sudhir : kuch nahi wo siddharth beech mein hi baath badal deytha hai

Sid:priyu go fresh up ho jao office ke liye late horahe hum 

All desperse from hall for their daily chores

Jahan sharma house mein sab kuch normal ya ye kaho ki sab khush hain wahan kapoor house mein sab tense mein hai and ghar ka bada beta sabse jyada tensed hai lekin ghar mein kisiko patha nahi wo ithni tense kyun hai sirf unki doston ko patha hai kya hua

Iss kahani mein kapoor mansion nahi kapoors ek apartment mein rehthe hain aaj kapoors ki property case ki hearing hai jo ki har baar ki tarah case kuch progress nahi hua judge next hearing ke liye date diya wo final hearing but iss baar ram ki tension aur badgayi kyunki jis company ye job karthe they wahan pe ram ko job se nikal diya ye kehke ki ye ek cheater company ke saath cheat kiya ye baath wo ghar par bataya nahi 

In his bedroom 

Ram apna sar jhuka kar kuch soch raha tha kisise baath nahi ki kisise kuch kaha bhi nahi

Vikram and neha both are married, best frnds to ram from their college days,both vikram & neha enter in to the room

Vikram: ram maa bahuth chintha kar rahi hai tumhare liye ram 

Neha feeling helpless for ram condition she wants to change his mood,

Neha: oye subah se shaam hogayi tum abhi bhi ussi baath se feel horahi ho and jao jaakar sabse kaho aaj kya hua

Ram kuch nahi kaha bas sirf apna sar hilarahatha jaise usko kisise kuch bathana nahi

Agar kuch confusion ho toh pls comment karke bathayiga pls
Sorry if any mistakes happened pls do like and comment
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Posted: 2014-10-19T04:16:12Z
hey that was quick update yaar .. loved it 
Lovely priya family .. loved siddhhratha and rishi characters 

Ohh Ram s  property in court and they are staying in apartment .. 

intresting 
and He lost job too 

waiting for furthur 
cont soon 

Edited by luvsakshi - 2014-10-19T04:19:51Z
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