"who r u" updated part 30&31 on pg43&44(completed) - Page 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Hi frnds , I am suma and this is my first os

This OS is totally different from the serial. Please don't complain.I hope you'll like it..

Not proof-Read please forgive if you find grammatical or spelling errors.

 

It is a fine morning

Raman in his sleep with a nightmare,he is kissing her lips so passionately and her entire face each and every bit of her.enjoying her body don't want to stop ever .she also responding with him same passionately .

Suddenly he wakeup from sleep with a jerk

"I am sorry, I never want to do with u,I am sorry ish...ishitha"

At a same time

Ishitha also in sleep with the same nightmare,she is trying to see him,but she can't find him

"koun?koun ho tum?","I want to see you once,you r one of the most impotant thing in my life,who r u?"

Suddenly wakeup from sleep with sweated face.

"kya hua mummy?why r u shouting?the same nightmare?".  her 7 years son aarav asking worriedly.

Ishitha:kuch nahi beta!don't worry

Aarav:koun tha mama vo?aapko itna pareshan karne waali?

Ishitha:vo vo ...aapka..   chodo uss bath ko,ab chalo nahi tho school bus miss ho jathi..

She cut him middle conversation and went to kitchen.

Prologue:

 

 Ishitha iyer:

A  single mother of aarav and a  children doctor and works as a volunteer in Make A Wish Foundation to fulfill the last wishes of the children who are going to die soon.

Raman:

Raman kumar bhalla young and One of the successful business man in India who is kind, calm and respects others, interested in charity programs and not interested in marriage .

Aarav:

Son of ishitha iyer and loves his mother and Ishu is also close to him. But always fights with his mother to know about his father and feels he deserves a father.

How is this frnds?

Continue soon..don't bash me,if u don't like it.

both positive and negative comments are accepted.😊

 part1---pg2

 part2---pg2

 part3---pg3

part4---pg4

part5---pg5

part6---pg6

part 7--pg7

part8---pg8

part9--pg9

part10---pg10

part11--pg12

part12--pg14

part13--pg15

part14---pg17

part 15---pg18

part16---pg20

part17---pg22

part18--pg24

part19---pg26

part20--pg27

part21 &22---pg30

part23 &24---pg32

part25--pg34

part26---pg35

part27---pg37

part28---pg40

part 29---pg41

part30&31--pg43&44

Edited by nagsuma - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
thats interesting...
pls cont and pm me if possible
Posted: 9 years ago
sounds interesting
do continue it
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice start👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..pls continue
Posted: 9 years ago

Hi frnds here is the part1.

Thank u all

Part1:

Ishitha living a normal life, no complaints, no hopes for next day. Always want to make her son happy without any bother, working in hospital, spending time with children at weekends in MAWF.

Days are passing peacefully. One day Ishitha enters her cabin in the hospital and checks the appointments which she have to attend.

Nurse: mam! Aapko Milne keliye mr.sharath ayi.he is waiting for you since 1 hour.

Mr .sharath is also a member of MAKE A WISH FOUNDATION and present he is chief of that foun.

Sharath:hello ishitha!how r u?

Ishtha:hello sharath!what a surprise!ur here? Any problem with children?

Sharath:no problem ishitha.i just want to meet u once.Btw how's ur champ?

Ishitha:ya he is also fine.

Sharath: actually I came here, to inform you I have to go out of station for some reasons by tomorrow. And  I have a meeting with one businessman day after tommrow.he was recently shift to delhi.after  many struggles I got an appointment with him.i want to discuss with him some issues about our MAWF .he was very interested in these activities and he sponsored for many charities. But I have to leave tomorrow .if you don't mind will u please attend that meeting instead of me. It is very useful to foundation. Please ishitha...

Ishitha: are kya sharath? Ithne request karne ki kya jaroorat?mai be foundation ka member  hu! this is my duty,I will attend him and explain him.u don't worry I will..

Sharath:thank u so much ishitha.i will inform him about this

Ishitha:Btw who is he?                                                                                                                       

Sharath: he is Mr.raman bhalla.CEO of PRS companies.

Ishitha:raman bhalla...!

Sharath:yes he is!did u know him?

Ishitha:no I don't know him,but I heard this name some where.

Sharath:may be! he is very famous.any way I am leaving now.if u want any further details just call me.bye ..

Ishtha:bye..

 

Evening:

It  is heavy raining in delhi .

A boy standing outside of a school with an umbrella waiting for some one.

And that same time raman's car stopped their because of heavy rain feels it is unsafe .

Raman watches all the side enjoying wheather.

That time at some distance he saw apoor old begger drenched in rain.he was full shaked with cold.raman saw him and want to help. He came to him with an umbrella.

But same time that boy gives his umberilla to him and went to near by atree.he became dry  within seconds because of heavy rain.

Raman  mesmerized with his helpingness,decides to meet him once.

Raman droves his car to that tree and stops the car

He came out with  umbrella and covering both of them.

That boy looks at him innocently

Raman:"are beta tum poora bheeg gayi!aur tum ne unko kyo tumhara chatri di?"

Boy:"uncle vo old hai na,mai tho strong and healthy!thodi der bheeg ne se kuch nahi hoga"

Waise meri mom ne thodi der me aajavungi.

Raman:(impressed with his smartness.)you are so sweet and u r strong yaar...smilingly

Boy:thank you uncle.

Raman:btw I will u drop u in ur home come on..

Boy:aap muje drop karoongi.aap koun?mom ne strangers se jane keliye mana kiya.

Raman:no problem.aab tak strangers.but we will be friends.

Raman:giving his hand to him "I am raman bhalla",u can call me "raman".and u?

 Boy:I am aarav.how can I call raman?you are elder than me!

Raman:ok.you can call me just"friend".

Both have hand shake deal.

Aarav: "aarav ,raman both are friends".

Aarav:phir bhi mai aapse nahi aa saktha,mom muje dhatoongi.

Raman:ek kam karoo,aap mom ko meri mobile se call karke  bath karo,aap mere saath aavongi!

Aarav:this is good

Aarav :calls ishitha"mamma ,mai aarav bol raha hoon"

Ishitha:aa beta!mai aaraha hoon,"I am on the way".

Aarav:mamma mai mera frnd ke sath aajao?it is already heavy raining na?

Ishitha:teeke beta!tum safely aajao "I am waiting for u in home".

Aarav:bye mom,I will come.

Aarav:friend !mom ne maan gaya..hum aap ke saath chaloongi.

Raman .aarav in the car.

Aarav:waise aap ne hame kidnap nahi kiya thana?aap janthe nahi?mai karate me black belt hoon!i can save my self..

Raman:accha!ithne strong boy ko hum akele kaise kidnap kar sakthi hoon..

Both are enjoying their conversations..

Aarav gives directions to his home and finally he reached home.

Aarav:friend tum bhi andhar aajao na,thodi dher baad chali javungi!

Raman:no beta not this time,phir kabhi!

Aarav:teeke ,aagli baar jaroor aana,aur mom se bhi milna chahiye!

Raman:sure,I will come bye beta!

Aarav:bye friend.

Ishitha watches aarav coming from a car dropped some on

Ishitha:aarav beta!tum teek hoo?poora bheeg gayi!aur vo car me koun ?

Aarav:ha ma mai teek hoon,mai ne kaha na mera friend ke saath aa javungi.

Ishitha feels some friends parents in the car with him.and take him to home to change clothes.

On the way raman thinks about aarav and his cute smilesand their funny talkings.

He feels very glad to meet him.

 

Thank you frnds next part will be soon...

Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is too Good. I love their interaction.
Posted: 9 years ago
wowww!! brilliant. loved it completely! would love to read how ishra meets!
Posted: 9 years ago

Hi frnds here is the part2.

English or hindi are  not my first languages so please excuse me if any grammatical or spelling errors.

Part2:

Next day morning

Raman wakes up with fresh thoughts first time, after so many years he slept a peaceful sleep yesterday, there is no nightmares of ishtha and no apologies and no guilty. Today she is out of his mind.

Raman thinks about aarav,when he thinks about aarav,a small smile places on his face.

Raman: this boy is something special to me.i participated in many organizations and charities,but nothing changed in my past life. But today I felt  better with one meeting ,I have to meet him once. may be he is my medicine.

Withthat he calls his PA to know details about that school which he saw aarav waited.

After some time his PA informed him about school,it is one of his sponsorships list.

Raman feels happy to meet aarav,and says "I want to visit that school once,inform them"

PA: ok sir.i will inform them.

Raman:aarav!surprise for u,I am coming to meet u my dear friend...


in school:

Raman very excited to meet aarav.

Principal announces students that one of our school board members visits our school today.

So students please behave yourselves and respect him.

All students are in play ground.

Raman enters in to school  meets  principal and other teachers and some time discussed about school.

Raman:"I want to meet students".

Principal:sir!it's Saturday, students have no classes .they all are in playground

Raman: this  is very good. They need some break for busy studies and participate in other activities.

Raman walks to playground. Children all are playing different games

Raman remembers his school days.

But his eyes  searching for aarav.

At a distance raman see aarav playing cricket with his friends.

Aarav is doing batting with full  concentration,all balls are went to boundaries.

Raman walks to aarav to meet him.aarav hits a ball and finally raman catches that ball unknowingly

All are shocked and at a time they said "out" with loud voice.

Raman came to sences and drops the ball.

Students:aarav!'you are out' today,

Thank you uncle,aarav was a tough guy, no one can out him.

Aarav: angrily drops the bat and walkout from the there looks at Raman.

Raman: immediately went to aarav and holds his hand "aarav,I am sorry,I don't know how is was happened suddenly"?

Aarav:not speaks a single word with same expression at him.

Raman: holding his ears with puppy face"I am really very very sorry".

Aarav:laughs loudly "no need friend,I am just acting,it is part of game,I don't mind"

Raman:"dramebazz,muje laga tum sach me muj se naaraj hoon"!

Btw you are playing very well but not better than me.

Aarav:accha!i am team leader here..just one ball missed,nai tho I am the best.

Raman:then why don'y we play a game in opposite teams.proove your talent

Raman and aarva plays a game with two teams and finally aarav wins the game.

Raman:(st ) aaj haarne me bhi ithna maja aayi,kya hua raman tumko?

Raman all over enjoys the game just like he is a school student.

Aarav:dekha?mai ne kahana! i am the best.

Raman:teeke ji!hum mann gayi tum best hoo!

Aarav:Btw tum yaha kaise?

Raman:I want to go school once again,you are only friend to me here,so I joined in your school.

Aarav:accha ji!both are smiled with a hi-fi.

Meanwhile principal arrives there and announces that he is the guest.

Principal:sir !you know aarav!he is the one of the best student in all activities.

Raman:feels proud at his friend and smiles.

Hole day raman spends with aarav and enjoys his children days once again..

Finally raman leaves the school with new happiness which he recently found..

On the way

Raman(st):aarav se mai ne sirf 2 din se jantha hoon! lekin muje kyo aisa lag raha hai ki maine unse phehle se bhi jantha hoon!

why his smile always very familiar to my heart.who is to me..?

aarav came back to home with happy mood.ishtha observes this .

ishitha:what's happened to my baccha?aaj ithna jush lag rahi hai?

Aarav:kuch nahi mamma.aaj mai ne mere friend ke ssath bahuth enjoy kiya.

Ishitha:kounsa frnd?

Aarav:vahi,jo kal muje drop kiya,principal ne kaha vo mera school ka board member bhi hai,vo aaj mera school aaya.vunhone mere sath bahut kela.you know ma?vo bahut accha hai..

I like him very much.

Ishitha:vo tumhara friend kab bangaya?

Aarav:kal,unhone muje drop kiya,hum dono friends bangaya.

Ishitha feels very strange."dho din me ithna acchi friends bangaya?"..

 

Precap:ishra meet

Thank you frnds  next part will be soon

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