GOTW: Make a Story

Posted: 9 years ago
GOTW: Make a Story
 So u all might be able to guess what this is about. I've seen such posts many times, n we even play this sometimes in class.
So we'll write a story ie the first person will start it n the next will continue it n this will go on. The story can be anything, it's not necessary it should be connected to Fanaah.
Let's see where this story ends up till next Sunday ๐Ÿ˜›
N yes, I want 100% participation! No excuses of "I'm not good at writing" n all ๐Ÿ˜ก got it?
Now start off!
Posted: 9 years ago
Vivaan is working in This XYZ Hospital from last 3 months as senior doctor,conducting research of his own existence sideways...1 month back He got shock of his life to see a girl exactly like Dhara as an intern..She was Dr.Avni...But He don't melts..He act indifferent to her,rude to her...Afterall,She is just a look-alike and not his Dhara...Dhara left him to suffer this dark life alone years ago and Now all He have is this darkness to give to this world...It was going on like that with his coldness and She don't exists attitude When He recieved another shock...๐Ÿ˜†An Intern joining just a week back..A total look-alike of Preet..-Preet...-His Preet Madam?!Who Just used and betrayed him to get Anshuman!But How the Hell is this possible?!Is She really a look-alike of Preet or...๐Ÿ˜†Pls continue๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿคฃ
Posted: 9 years ago
Vivan couldn't believe his eyes to see Preet and Dhara. He thought are they really Preet & Dhara? Then he searched about Dhara(Avni) and got to know that she's not his Dhara. She is just 22 years old. She can't be Dhara. He was disheartened because he got some hopes of getting back to his love.
One day, then he searched about Preet and found out that her name was Preet. He was shocked! He was confused about how could she survive she and Anshuman had died then how is she still alive. But if she was actually Preet why didn't she react after seeing Vivan. Then he decided to follow her. Then, once Preet came out of the hospital to get back home, he followed her. He saw her getting into a car which was driven by some guy. He tried to look properly and saw it was Anshuman!


CONTINUE!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 9 years ago
Vivaan was more angry now. The persons who are the reason of the life of a dead as a vampire , are together ! All of sudden all the emtions and flashes running in his mind. The way Preet used him! The way Anshuman turned him into a Vampire. He started hating the both of them and was now more agressive. He wanted revenge from these two and there was little hope brewing in his mind if he could get back his life..his humanly form..


*twisted it like๐Ÿ˜†* continue please๐ŸคฃEdited by Vampire-queen - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Vivan was furious and decided to confront her.
Next day, Preet came to the hospital. Vivan entered her cabin.
Vivan: Kaisi hai aap, Preet madam?
Preet: Dr. Vivan, aap mere senior hai. Aap mujhse aise kyu baat kar rahe hai?
Vivan wondered how can she react so normally.
Vivan: Kal aapko lene kaun aya tha?
Preet: My husband. Kyu? Aap ye sab kyu puch rahe ho?
Vivan left from her cabin.

At home
Preet: Sarthak, aaj Dr. Vivan aye the mere cabin mei aur bohot ajeeb ajeeb se sawal puchne lage.
She told him the whole story.
Sarthak: Ajeeb aadmi hai! Tum unnse durr hi rehna.

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๐Ÿ˜† Mujhe khud bhi nehi pata maine kya likkha hai.
CONTINUE... Edited by Winds.of.Heaven - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Then Preet went inside another room to do some work.
Anshuman picked the phone and dialed a number.
Tring Tring...
Lady: Hello??
Ansh: Namaste aunty, mai avni ka friend bol rha hu.. Avni hai kya??
Lady: Yaa 1 min..
Avni: Hello!!
Ansh: Hello DHARA main anshuman bol rha hu.
Avni: haan bolo anshuman.
Ansh: Vivan ko preet par shak ho gya. Ab hume jaldi hi apna plan implement karna padega.. Its time for revenge. Humara Vivaan se 1000 saal pehle ka badla pura karna hoga.๐Ÿ˜†
Avni: Haan.. im ready... vivaan ko preet, dhara aur anshuman ke sath kiye dhoke ka fal zarur milega 

๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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pls continue :P
Edited by ria54321 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
next day avni join the hospital as a chid specialist 
avni finished her duty and searched every where to find vivaan so they can execute their plan 
Avni : yai vivaan ki bachi kahaa gayi 
Just then she saw a nurse passing and stops her 
Avni : app janti hai Dr. vivaan kahaa miley ga 
nurse : wo ek seminar kai liye gayaa hai kal wo ajaa e gaa 
Avni : thank u 
avni then calls anshuman 
avni : anshuman wo vivaan seminar kai liye gayaa hai wo kal aa e gaa humaraa plan ka pehlaa hisaa aaj nehi hosak taa humey kal kaa intzaar karnaa padey gaa 
anshuman : humarey pas samey hi toh nehi hai 

please countinue i hope its nice ๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by mairaa28 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Next day vivaan returns. He is very disturbed. While he is moving in the corridor preet calls his name.
Preet: vivan sir!
vivan:(composing himself): yes preet mada..? i mean dr preet??
Preet: sir, u wanted to meet my husband na? He is joining dis hospital.. You can meet him.
vivan: what? what is his name?
Preet: Dr sarthak.
Viv: ok send him to my cabin.



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Posted: 9 years ago
Sarthak knocks and then enters with Vivan's permission. He was shocked! He got flashbacks with him.
Sarthak: Hello, sir. I am Dr. Sarthak. Joined the hospital for my research.
Vivan: Oh hi. Nice to meet you, Aa...i mean Sarthak. Kis pe research kar rahe ho?

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Posted: 9 years ago
Sarthak: sir vo to aapko bhot jaldi pta chal hi jaega ( he gives an evil smile)
Vivan: excuse me!๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Sarthk: sir i mean i am not allowed to reveal it now.. You will know in coming days!
Vivan:ok.. 
He is going to leave.. When vivan stops him
Viv: suno.. ( hesistating a bit) tum kisi... Kisi anshuman ko jaante ho??
Sar:Nhi to.. Kyu??
( thinking: naam yaad rakhna.. Ye naam tumhe hamesha ke liye barbaad kar dega..jo tumne preet k sath kiya.. Main uske liye tumhe kabhi maaf nhi karuga)

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