~Ashlok FF:Written in stars:2~ch 82-epilogue on pg115,117,118*complete - Page 54

Amazing update

Awesome Update Ash👏👏


Edited by Aashlokfan - 9 years ago

Thank you soo much for update Ash.
amazing and emotional update loved it as always👏
yeah tht dog incident was really horrible, aastha faced it at that time even i felt like cry over her misery
i loved Shloks reaction over this incident... 😛 but its too late naa
i loved aasthas taunt ... now she is really grown up women haan😃

,''why would I have bothered to tell a man who forgot i was even alive unless i was in bed with him?'' 😭😭😭

Amazingly written...
Tks fr updating Ash :)

What is Shlok going to do...can't wait to find out.

Awsome update as usual Ashley. .This is shlok,his anger and reaction all r natural. .I knew she suffered a lot but didn't he warned her . After weddings wen they talked he clearly told how he is. All his reactions are extreme she cheated him so he took revenge and sme1 hurted her nw he is going to punish him..Hope she understand that. .Now can't wait for next update and his reactIon..

Great update things are changing in Shloks head now he is starting to realise how much pain Astha went through, I like how Astha is telling Shlok the truth and being strong about it

Awesome update dear. Astha's outburst is justified for the way he had been treating her from the first day of their marriage. Shlok has to realise his own mistakes. I'm eagerly waiting for the next update. 😊

Doing a happy dance lol..I thank Astha's sleepiness if that ws wt promptd hr outburst! She nevr would taunt him knowingly😳 u knw hw to keep us ovr the edge😃 thanks fr updatng daily😳

Awesome update Ashley loved this straight forward n strong Astha who can answer back Ashlok in his face. I really loved her last reply n Shlok it's too late to undo something so just leave it n try to rectify your own misdeed. He is feeling guilty that's a very positive point waiting for next part.