OS: TUmNe Kabhi ITnA DaRd KabHi NaHi dIYa HaI MujHe!!

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Posted: 2014-09-19T22:05:35Z
hi guys 
this is my first os
It is in two parts, the story behind the title comes in the second part
                                                       
          TUmNe  ITnA DaRd KabHi NaHi dIYa HaI MujHe!!


Mihirs confession had thrown Ishita into a reverie of her own.
So thats why raman and mihir were hiding the story from her!! She wished she hadnt confronted Mihir with sanjana's truth... wished raman wasnt there...wished he hadnt heard his own wife trusting someone else than him and his family...
Shagun and poornima had left the venue but the bomb they blasted were still in effect. The iyers were again angry with Mihir for hiding the truth about shagun and Soumya chitti wasnt convinced with the proposal either..


Soumya: ''Ishu, Ishu kanna, ingapaare, tum kya soch rahi ho? ISHITA??''
Ishitha: ''uh...uh... ha chitti.. kya hua?''
Sou: ''Itna sab kuch hone ke baad tum yeh pooch rahi hu ki kya hua hey? Yeh shaadi kaisi ho sakta hai? Matlab mihir aur shagun ki bhai?! Aur yeh baat tumhe pata bhi nahi hai... ithellam nallaille... not good..
isiliye maine socha hai ki yeh shaadi ab nahi hogi...''

Mihika: ''But amma Mihir ki kya galathi hai? Amma yeh sab kya hai? Aap shagun ki galathi ki saza mihir aur mujhe kyu de rahi hu??''

Soumya: ''mihika tum itni selfish hu ki tum apni akka ke baare me nahi soch rahi ho? wo shagun ki bhai hey...tumhare akka ka saut ke bhai!!!''

Mihir walks slowly towards ishita and starts to explain it to her.
Mihir: ''Bhabhi im sorry ki maine aur bhai ne aapse yeh sab chupakar ra...''
Ish: ''Ek minute Mihir!! Koi zaroorat nahi hai tumhe.. koi zaroorat nahi hai tumhe mujhe explanation dene ki... Ek baat batao mihir, asal me mein tumhara kya lagti hein? Raman ka doosra biwi yani tumhara behen ki sauten... lekin tumne kabhi mujhe us nzar se nahi dekha, aur naahi kav=bhi mujhe aisi ehsaas hone diya aaj tak. Hamesha mere saath kada raha tumne, ek bhai bankar. Tum batao tumse naraaz kaise reh sakta hoon? 
Ek baat aur batau tujhe? aaj na tumhne mere nazar mein aur uche ho gaya hein. Jab tera behen raman se choda ta, to tumne uski saath nahi li jo tumhara zyaada apne the lekin uska saath diya tha aur usse apnaya tha jo sahi tha! aur is baat shahid koyi aur insaan nahi karpaathi''

Turning towards the family, Ishita said "Isiliye  mein mihir ke saath hamesha hoga, is shaadi keliye aur hamesha keliye''

Part 2 precap:
family agrees for wedding, Ishita and raman talk about their misunderstandings




Sorry guys my hindi is not that good. All kinds of reviews welcome Smile
Plss comment whether to continue or not.




Part 2

Mrs. iyer: "Par ishu, hum yeh sab kaise bardash karenge? Har bar woh aurat tumhara lyf mein aajatha hein!! aur ab is tarah ki ek nayi relatn!! woh bhi itna complicated??"

Ishu: "ammmaaa... meine bola na ki im ok with it? phir kya problem hein? already bohot drama ho chuki hein function mein!!
Ab no drama only dancing right amma Wink
Chalo chalo sab lok mere muh kya dekh rahi hu.. arey romi bhabhi keliye ek achi wali punjabi song play karo!!"

Soon everything was back to normal, and the dhamakedhar party came to an end. Ishita had apologised to Mihir for ruining his big day, but to her surprise her loving devar hugged her n cried. He said he was sorry for not informing her about it. 

Mihir: "Pata hein bhabhi ki aapki sabsi achi quality kya hein? ye ki aap bohot achi ho. lekin kabhi kabhi na itna acha banna bhi  sahi nahi hein...jaise ki aaj jo hua. mein maanta hu ki aap jo kiya woh aapki achayi thi. lekin uske wajah se ek insaan ko bohot chot pohuchi hogi... bhai ko...
mein usse achi tarah se jaanti hu, aur yeh bhi jaanthi hu ki uske manme aapke liye kitna jagah hein...
pichli baar bhi jab ek khaas insaan, jiske liye bhi mere bhai ka dil mein bohut zyaada jagah tha; tab woh usse chodkar gaya, woh toot chuki thi bhabhi"

With tears in his eyes,"iss baar usse tootne math de bhabhi"
She dint know what was more painful, the feeling of not having trusted her husband to a woman whom she had just met or what mihir had just said.
With tears brimming in her eyes she walked up to her room; the otherwise place of solace felt to her like hell today. 

He cudnt believe he was doing this. Not now atleast. 
Sitting on the couch and looking outside through the window was giving him comfort. 
Something that he was used to these days. Earlier he would just spend late hours at the office when he was upset!
But now, she has changed me!! But for what?
So that she can go on trusting others??!That some woman and I were in a rela..

Ishita: "Raman..Rama..I...I mean ...Raman im really sorry for what i thought about you and sanjana. I was hurt. I thought you were hiding about your relation from me..
Meine socha ki humne decide kiya ki hum sab share karenge aur jab hum aage badraha hein iss relation mein.. matlab... i mean... we... we are lyk friends now tho kyu chupa.."

Raman: "JUST SHUT UP ISHITAAA!!! CHup RAHo!!! PLSS!!!"
Holding her in his arms tightly," tumne kya socha? huh? ki tumse chupkar kuch karti hu ya phir karna chahti hu? agar meine shagun ke bhareme tumhe nahi bataya na tho usme tumhare bhala thi... mujhe bhi koi maza nahi aatha jab tumse kuch chupakar rakhti hu... 
Ishita; Iski pehle tumne bohut kuch khushiya diya hein mujhe... aur bohut saari cheeze bhi kar chuki hein jho mujhe hurt hua tha...
          Lekin Itna dard tumne kabhi nahi diya hein mujhe..."

    bgm: Kabhi kam na hogi yeh chahatein...
                        pal pal bade hein mohabattein...


     



So thats it folks i keep the patch up part to the gud writersLOL
All sorts of comments welcome Embarrassed


Edited by smrithyrajan402 - 2014-09-20T01:04:31Z
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Posted: 2014-09-19T22:10:06Z
nice start do continue n pm m if possible :)
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Posted: 2014-09-19T22:28:39Z
Great start 
Please continue soon
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Posted: 2014-09-19T22:40:09Z
thx guys Big smile
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Posted: 2014-09-19T23:33:25Z
waitng fr nxt updte...pm me if poss...
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Posted: 2014-09-20T01:25:29Z
nice update
hope there is another part
update soon
n Thanx for d pm
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Posted: 2014-09-20T03:23:22Z
Really nice loved the ending
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Posted: 2014-09-20T03:51:53Z
superb one yaar !!!
I loved it  !!!
And thanks alot for the pm dear !!
Means a lot !!
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