RaYa new OS~Metro Station Last part on Page 11 - Page 10

Posted: 9 years ago
superb end
loved it very much
Posted: 9 years ago
๐Ÿ‘Superb...Mindblowing Love Love to the core...RAYA all the way...Pls come back with a New OS on RAYA like this...๐Ÿ‘
Thanks for the PM๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Alkona


๐Ÿ‘Superb...Mindblowing Love Love to the core...RAYA all the way...Pls come back with a New OS on RAYA like this...๐Ÿ‘
Thanks for the PM๐Ÿ˜Š

thank u so much and i started one new story on raya 

being together is enough

Posted: 9 years ago
Really sorry  aman.anjaan could no reply to ur pms ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” as i had my exams to finish๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”
But i readb all the parts of OS 
its awesome !!
I love the concept โค๏ธ
And thamks 4 pm
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by .pia_12.


<font color="#ff3399">Really sorryaman.anjaan could no reply to ur pms๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”asi had my exams to finish๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”</font>
<font color="#ff3399">But i readb all the parts of OS</font>
<font color="#ff3399">its awesome !!</font>
<font color="#ff3399">I love the concept โค๏ธ</font>
<font color="#ff3399">And thamks 4 pm</font>



its ok thank u so much for reading and commtng
Posted: 9 years ago
wow lovely  metro station 
 gotta read all updates. 

 wonderful aman. 

just  amazing 

Posted: 9 years ago

part 1
Peiya:'s narration of story was superb it was like so fresh like new love have found its way... 16 baras ka pyar hay too gud & awesome the way u penned it down enjoyed it a lot can't wait to read next moving for it...

Posted: 9 years ago

part 2
awww awesome so finally Priya found Ram's phone intend if him on station Lol... but who is Isha I guess future problem for RaYa but till now want to enjoy this time so Priya finally found her crush name is Ram & Ram finally got chance to talk with her gud...moving to read next...
Posted: 9 years ago
part 3
wowow Priya broke up with knew abt Ram have GF but she felt best to ignore him now... this is the only thing she can't do ever I know so finally Ram is back to her & at last they kissed awww this got me into RaYa land again awesome too gud to see,... moving for next...

Posted: 9 years ago
last part...
both side story were awesome so both loved each other but hesitant to tell other their heart's talk really cute I must say it was Gus to see awesome too Gus loved the ending also... enjoyed the whole OS a lot wished to read more but will do it in or Next OS so keep it up or writing will be always waiting for more...

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