OS Mera pehla pyaar tu meri pehli ishq tu part 2 updated - Page 2

Posted: 9 years ago
Hello BALH fans, This is my first OS an Raya 
This OS is after the Raya separation 
PIHU Sammy  wedding after their meet in the office
When they went to Delhi for meeting starts
Priya heard the conversation between ram & PIHU
Ram goes behind Priya to stop her 
Ram holds Priya hand and stops her
Ram : Priya ruko meri bath suno PIHU abhi gusse mein gain suddenly he feels a soft touch on his lips Priya stopped ram by keeping her hand
Priya: mujhe patha hain PIHU gusse mein hain woh nafrat karti hain mujhe aapko kya lagaa mein pihu ki wajase wahan se aagayi aapko laga ki mein uski baaton se hurt hu while telling all these tears are continusly flowing in each other eyes ram tries to wipe them and asks
Ram: phir kyu aagayi tum wahan se ?
Priya: iss liye kyunki mujhe aapko dekhkar bura laga hum maa beti ke beech mein aap suffer ho rahe ho mein ab aur takleef mein nahi deksathi aapko Mumbai jathe hi mein resign kardungi yahan se door chali jaongi she tries to move ram holds her hand and says
Ram: kya mein bhi aasaktha hoon tumhare saath mein apne wife se bahuth pyaar kartha hoon uske bina jee nahi saktha pls jab ye sab ram baatha raha uske aankhon se aasu rukhne ka naam hi nahi liya he can't control himself and hugs her jisse priya KO bhi patha chala ki ram ka kya haal hain dheere se Priya bhi ram KO hug karthi hain USS hug aisa jaise ek doosre ke dukh KO ek doosre me sametliya dono kaafi der tak aise khade rahe after sometime looses her grip and moves back
Priya: Ram mera sir mein dard ho raha hain coffee peene chale ?
Ram wiping his tears tells : haan chalo 

Edited by joemahika - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice emotional convo...
Continue soon...
Posted: 9 years ago
nice OS waiting for the next update
Posted: 9 years ago
Very nyc os but short tha pls continue soon
Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice Os
Pihu couldn't effect Raya love they will always be together.
Keep writing
Posted: 9 years ago
heyy akkaa,,..!! nice title...
raya convo is very nice..
continue soon,,,
Posted: 9 years ago
  hmm  finally ... 


 power came..  

 first attempt.  tell me truth  ...  really this was the  first one u wrote.  

  this was  really Superb. 

I felt  I could not comment  soon .. but    better late  than  never. 

 MAM toda jaldi  update karo na.  please 
 






  for   writing  for us . 
 

Posted: 9 years ago
very nive but very small
please continue this
Posted: 9 years ago
very nice and interesting OS
pls continue soon

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