New FF ~~Itna karo na mujhe pyar~~ part9 on pg32(Page 30)

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Posted: 2015-11-03T09:45:33Z
Originally posted by LovingRaYa


Part 7
After long u had updated Veena di
It was nice but can't understand their is two Priya one is wife of Ram and other is Priya who has married to Krishna 

Hihi..han der aye pr aa to gye
Are kahani aur jalebi ek jaisi hoti h..jitnaa uljhao ras me dubao utni hi mast hoti hTongue

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Posted: 2015-11-03T09:48:43Z
Originally posted by LovingRaYa


Part 8
Seems Krishna is hiding something with Priya but it's did not look like a compromising marriage as Priya always think about Krishna but love Ram.

Hihi..dekhte hain kya hota h...thank u soo much Smile
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Posted: 2015-11-03T09:50:03Z
hihi...again fast update...lagta h writer wali atma jaag gyi h meri...appreciation kamal ki cheez hoti h...its really awsm to know that people wait for u...m hamesha chahti hu ki log mujhe isliye nhi padhe qki m raya story likhti hu..balki m ye chahti hu ki log mujhe isliye padhe ki wo mujhe padhna chahte hain...m kya likh rhi hu kaise likh rhi hu...ye padhna chahte hain..its not like ki raya story h to padhna hi..it should b like ki raya nhi h to bhi kya..veena ne likha h to padhna hi h...hihi..i know its sounds mean..but cmmon hum kuchh bhi krte hain to yhi chahte hain ki wo hamari pehchan bne...i know raya ne hi motivate kiya mujhe writing ke liye..ab aur cheeze use different shades me initiate kr rhe hain..aur mujhe maza aa rha h ..aur jab aap apne kaam ko enjoy karte hain to usme aur progress krte hain..creativity badhti hai...thank u soo much all for making me so positive with ur response... here is next update hope u all like it too...

part 9

priya' s pov...

Krishna ke sath ja to rhi thi m...par usko mne bola nhi ki uske ghr jana h mujhe..so m vry sure ki wo mujhe mere ghr chhod ayega aur mujhe uske hi ghr jana h...khud ke ghr jaungi to free rhungi to bekar ki bate ghumti rhengi deemag me...jo ab nhi rkhna h deemag me mujhe...pr ise bolu kaise..?..kuchh samjhta bhi to nhi hai bina bole...ufff..ab to bolna hi padega...wrna ...

me...ek min Krishna

krishna...kya hua?...any prblm?

me...are wo cottage house chalna tha

krishna...kyu? tumhe tumhare ghr jana h na...

me..han but kuchh lena tha wha se..subah me jaldibazi me nikle to lena bhul gyi mai..

krishna ...oh ..ok..theek h whi chalte hain pehle..but kafi time ho gya hai to phir kahin aur jane me raat ho jayegi..to tum ghr phone karke bol do wrna pareshan honge sab..

me...nahi honge..abhi sure nahi thi ki jaa paungi ya nhi..so btaya nahi kisi ko...dnt wrry...pehle cottage house chalte hain phir wha sr dekhenge...

krishna...oh..theek h

ufff...kya yar main bhi na..khair...mujhe cottage house bhi jana hi h..wha bhi to ek paheli hai...pta nahi jindgi ko kya maza milta hai aram se chalne nhi ata..achha khasa krishna ka cottage house logo ki bheed se alag..shant...uske hisab se perfect..ye uske parents ne gift kiya tha use taki jab wo shaadi kre to wha se apni jindgi ki shuruat kre...krishna waise use bhi use kar leta tha kabhi kabhi..sukun aur shanti ke liye..pr working place se thoda dur hai isliye wha reh nhi pata h properly... shaadi ke baad wha gyi to mujhe bhi bht achha laga..sukun sa..atleast duniya jahan ki mushkilo se dur..bheed se dur..lekin jindgi ko wo bhi achha nahi lagta...pta nhi kahan se se wo banda bookey lekr aa gya..then wo priya ram kapoor...grrr...kahi  ram to nahi hai wha...kab se ye baat ghum rahi hai...ise sath lekar nahi jana kahin bhi...pehle isko khtm karna hai..dnt want him in my life anymore.. not even his name...bas bahot ho gya...

Krishna... lo ji aa gya...kahan khoyi ho?

me...ohhh..oh..sorry..aise hi kuchh nhi...

krishna..ek kam kro ye lo keys tum andr chalo...main restaurant se kuchh khane ko lata hu...bhukh lagi hai yar..

me..hihi..mujhe bhi...theek hai

thank god krishna khud hi chala gya..main pehle ye ram priya ka kissa jankr aati hu...

author... ye khasiyat hai is jagah ki..charo taraf kuchh unchai pr sabke cottage house hain & neeche bada sa shandar hotel..sari luxuries se bhara hua...ise hum bade logo ki luxurious duniya bol sakte hain..jahan apko sukun aur shanti bhi mil jaye..qki gnrlly ye dono cheeze eksath milna mushkil hota h..hihi...khair...priya jati hai uske samne wale cottage me...pata nhi..agr insaan ki jindgi se koi naam ya shaqs jud jata hai to insaan use hi har jagah expect karta hai..aur kabhi kabhi wo sach bhi ho jata hai..qki jaisa hum sabhi jante hain..jindgi ko aadat hai hamarr khilaf saazishe karne ki..priya door pr knock krti hai..whi lady aati hai bahar...

priya...hi..main wo...us din...apka flower mere pas aa gya tha ...remember?

mrs kapoor...oh han han..

priya...humlog abhi aaye..to mere husband restaurant gye hain kuchh khane ke liye lene..akele ghum rhi thi to socha apko sorry bol du

mrs kapoor...andr to aiye...sorry kyu..? 

priya...are wo aap us din aayi to mne kuchh react nhi kiya..isliye...actually us din hi hamari shaadi hui thi..to u know..naya ghr nayi jagah..to bas..deemag thoda ..u cn ..

mrs kapoor..are definitely i cn understand.. hota h ,no prblm..apko sorry bolne ki jarurat nhi h...

priya..aaplog yhi rhte hain..

mrs kapoor..nahi..husband ne bola is baar vocation yhi mnate hain so aa gye..kal chale jayenge..achha hua apse milna ho gya

priya..oh..

tabhi andr se awaz aati hai..priya krke dono hi ek sath react krti hain..

mrs kapoor..hahaha..mujhe bulaya..mere husband...ram

priya...hihi..sorry..nam same h to isliye...theek h aap dekhiye main chalti hu..enjoy ur vocations ..

priya uthi to jane ko pr use jo chahiye tha wo nahi mila..ram ko to dekha hi nahi..phir bhi relax hi thi qki atleast ye log yha rhte to nahi hain kam se kam..door pr akr priya ruki aur bye krne ko mudi..

mrs kapoor...priya..mere husband ram kapoor..

priya shock hokar dekh rhi thi...jaise pta nhi kaun sa namuna dekhne ko mil gya use ram kapoor ke nam par..ab use bas yha se jana tha..formal hi bye krke chali ayi apne cottage me..qki usko khud ko gaaliya deni thi...kuchh bhi sochti hai..jaise duniya me ek hi ram aur priya hain..hadh h...bechare krishna ko bhi itna tang kiya ...yha tak le ayi..wo apne ghr jata to achha time spend krta na..ab baithe ke khud ko ye sab suna rahi hai...pr priya ki ek khasiyat hai..agr wo gltiya karna janti hai to unhe accept krna aur sudharna bhi janti hai...to kuch na kuchh to kar hi legi..

Krishna's pov..

yar aaj to priya ko roke leta hu kal chali jayegi..lekin bolunga kya..kyu roka?...nahi nahi...kahin jyada na ho jaye...main kuchh nahi kahunga..jo wo kahe...m bhi pura stupid hi hu itni speed se car chala di ki sab kam time se ho gya...grrr..oh..cmmon krishna dnt b selfish...relax...tu to aise behv kr raha h jaise priya kahin bhagne wali hai..biwi h teri...puri jindgi hai tumlogo ke paas..cmmon aram se reh...relax...le sochte sochte pahonch bhi gya..ab sochna band kar..log bolte hain biwiya bht khtrnak hoti hain apka deemag padh leti hain..kahin priya ne bhi padh liya to...hihi...ye jyada ho gya..

priya..are wah kya baat h..fvrt food mila kya..? ..itni badi smile ke sath entry...

me...hehehe..are han...yha ki best dish h..chalo jaldi se kha lete hain phir nikalte hain..time se ho hi jayega...

priya...han m serve krti hu..aap fresh ho lijiye...

heyn..aap? ..ise kya hua yar..tum se aap par...pta nhi yar is ladki ko smjhna mushkil hai..ya sabhi ladkiyo ko samjhna mushkil hota hai..ya hum husband ban jate hain to hame hi samjhna mushkil hai..biwiya kuchh achha kre to reason dhundhne lagte hain..kyu achha kar rhi hain..hadh h..nikal gya hoga muh se aap...mujhe adat nhi h to ajeeb lag rha h..

dinner table pr...

priya...krishna m soch rahi thi..ki rat ho gayi h tum mujhe chhod ke phir apne ghr jaoge to puri rat ki journey ho jayegi tumhari..bht ghumna padega..

me...toh...?...dnt tell me ki tum khud se jane ka soch bhi rahi ho..wo bhi itni rat ko

priya...are nahi...m ye soch rahi thi...apne ghr jakr kya karungi...tumhare hi ghr chalti hu tumhe bhi easy ho jayega

me...sirf mere ease ke liye?

priya..nahi..actually ab wahi mera bhi ghr hai to sabke sath time spend karna chahiye na..sabke sath rahungi nahi to sbko janungi kaise..aur sab mujhe kaise janenge...isliye..

me...oh..gud..chalte hain phir direct whi..obviously tumhara ghr hai..jab jaise jitna chaho wha rh sakti ho... ( in thoughts) oh god aaj to apse kuchh bhi manga hota to shayad aap de dete..gadbad ho gyi..itna hi manga..hihi..sorry bhagwan ji..thoda mean ho rha hu..pr sach me bht khush hu...this is the best thing cn b happen...atleast priya sabke sath rahegi to bttr feel karegi..mujhe bhi time spend krne ko milega to samjh paunga use...qki abhi bahot formal rhti hai to kuchh samjh nhi pata hu m...i wish..ye one week hame ekdusre ko samjhne me help kare...janta to use saalo se hu phir bhi lagta hai nhi janta hu..pichhle 6 mahino se sath bhi hai tabhi to shaadi jaisa decision liya...phir bhi...bht kuchh h hamare beech..jo hokar bhi nhi hai.wo sab bnana sawarna h ..hopefully sab achha ho...

author...ye h jindgi ki khubsurati...jaruri nahi hai ki do tute hue rishte jude hain to wo apko bure ya glt experience hi de...jindgi har mod par mauka deti hain..bas use pehchanne aur execute krna hum par chhod deti hain..jab wo hamare man ki nahi karti to hum use bhala bura kehte hain..lekin sochte nahi ki jo hua hai usme bhi to kuch achha hoga hi..dekho..achhai thi na..do achhe logo ki achhai ko judna tha jud gye ab jindgi ko achha bnana inhi par h...aur ye dono koshis bhi kar rhe hain..basharte ki jindgi phir se turn twist na laye...hihi...anywys..krishna ke ghar pahonch kar dono bht khush the...har koi priya ko palko pr rakhe hue hai..waise bhi sab priya ko pehle se hi jante hain...priya ke hisab se Krishna high class hai..but koi show off nhi..na uske andr na uske ghrwalo ke..

as krishna is only son..to jyada koi h nhi iske ghr me..ma papa..& a cousin sister..paise to bht hain..pr they like to live simple life..qki krishna aisa hi h..use tamjham pasand nhi h..aur shayad isiliye wo priya se hamesha affectionate rhta hai..uski simplicity ka kayal...bht sari ladkiya dekhi hain usne..phir bhi priya ke aage use koi nhi dikhti...khair..maze se din kat rhe hain..shopping ...ghumna phirna...outing...masti..quality time hai ye dono ke liye...but yha break laga ek phone call se...they hv to go back ...meeting ek din pehle hi rakh di director ne...krishna ko to itna gussa aa rha tha..qki ek din pehle meeting hai..aur ek din pehle wha se jana padega..ek to waise hi sabke sath time ka pta hi nhi chalta usme bhi do din kam ho gye...

khair dnt hv choice..kisi ka bhi man nhi tha ki priya jaye...phir bhi...jana to tha hi...nikle dono wha se...rat me hostel pahonche krishna priya ko bahar hi drop krke jane laga...dono ne bht ajeeb sa feel kiya...aisa laga jaise koi unke beech aakr unhe alag kr rha h..phir bhi kuchh kaha nhi...bas smile kr rhe the ekdusre ko dekh kr...krishna chala gya priya wahi gate par khadi thi...

to b continue...

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Posted: 2015-11-04T11:22:34Z
If Krishna and Priya don't love each other so why they married and where is Ram who love Priya very much.
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Posted: 2015-11-10T01:23:26Z
finally tym milgaya padhne LOL
i agree...life gives us options n choices and we hv full authority on how to use n execute them
i am loving Krishna and PRiya Embarrassed
shaadi kyu ki yeh kab bataoge LOL
ram kahan gayab haiLOL...well nhi bhi aayega toh chalega Wink
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Posted: 2015-11-19T00:12:55Z
Nice update...
per pls ram ko b vapas lao story me..
next update kab milega..
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Posted: 2015-11-19T02:16:21Z
Veena di phir gayab hogaye aap
jis speed mai aap update kar rahe the mujhe laga tha ek week mai story khatam LOL
waiting for next update n answers to my questions
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Posted: 2016-04-20T00:10:36Z

Ohh Veena di kaha chale gaye yaar jaldi aa jao... yaarr...
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