New FF ~~Itna karo na mujhe pyar~~ part9 on pg32(Page 25)

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Posted: 2014-12-01T22:22:00Z
Verrryyy sorry...ufff kitne din bad open kiya forum...update karne to ja rhi hu...hopefully mujhe padhne wale bhi mil jayen...lol
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Posted: 2014-12-01T22:27:59Z
hey rayans..again me late...hihi..ab excuse bhi khtm hain qki m bina excuse ke hi late kr ke aayi hu to kya bolu...hangovr ho gya h yar..typing nhi hoti...lol..khair shuru kiya h to age to badhana padega...I think na mere ideas khtm ho rhe hain..shayd isiliye atak ja rha h..hihi..anyways moving on update..hope u all like it..itna late krti hu ki public bhul hi jati h last kya padha..bhai abhi to story raya par hi h..flashback me chal rhi h..priya apni beeti hui jindgi ke bare me soch rhi h...raya ka love peak point pr h..award night h ram priya ka wait kr rha h..kuchh surprise plan kiya h pr priya abhi tak aayi nhi h...he is waiting for her outside. ..& worried too..now update...
part 6

RAM'S POV

I was waiting for her...as she has to come in a few minutes. ..but kahin kuchh ata pta nhi h...waise bhi ye neha ki bat pr mujhe jara kam hi yakeen hota h..pta nhi kya kehti hai kya krti h..god..priya theek to hogi na..kahin kuch..ufff..priya ke sath rh rh kar m bhi waise hi harkat kar rha hu...khamkha sochne me time wst kar rha hu..itni der me to jakr dekh bhi lunga..dekh hi leta hu...pr yar jaunga to kahin ulta seedha na sochne lage..sare log to yha aa gye hain wo akeli hogi ..ufff ajeeb musibat h ek call krke bta bhi nhi sakti h ye ladki..dekhta hu yhi ruk kar...

priya's POV

oh god pta nhi ye driver kahan rh gya...sab chale gye uske chakkr me main yhi rh gyi..neha ke sath hi chali jati to bhi..pta nhi dusre cottages me koi h ya nhi..vikram ko phone karti hu..pehle driver se hi puchh leti hu...
(when she calls driver doorbell ring)

oh lagta h aa hi gya... (phone cut krke door open krti h)..tum?...yha?

ufff..pehli bar mujhe itni uljhan hui..even m scared. .ek to akeli thi upr se samne ram..samjh hi nhi aa rha tha ane ko bolu ya jane ko...god ajeeb insan h..jb kuchh expect karo to kuchh karta nhi h..aur jo kr deta h wo to litrlly m expect hi nhi krti..pta nhi yhi kyun mila mujhe pyar karne ko...hadh h...kya karu?..kuchh bolega bhi nhi..khada hi rhega..muskura kyun rha h...hadh h

ram..bas..sochna band karo...kitna sochti ho?

I was sock..pta kaise chal jata h ise..huh..m...m..kya soch rhi hu?..m ..m to aram se hu...hw could u say..m kuchh soch rhi hu.?

ram..hehehe...m face reader hu pta nhi h tumhe.?..anyways. .theek to hona tum?

very funny..bilkul theek hu...mujhe kya hua.?

ram...to theek ho to party me kyun nhi aayi..I was waiting for u na

kya?

ram...mera mtlb h..tension ho rhi thi sb wha the tum yha akele..aur aa bhi nhi rhi thi to..

are driver hi nhi aya to kya karu?

ram...oh ok ok..to chalo mere sath hi...

nahi..actually driver aa jayega may b half hr me...to uske sath aa jaungi..

ram...are ajeeb ho..mere sath jane me kya problm h..

problm kuchh nhi h..but mujhe kuchh aur bhi kam h raste me..

ram..to m kara dunga

nahiii

ram...are chilla kyun rhi ho..bhaga ke nhi le ja rha hu...theek h..to m bhi wait krta hu tumhare sath

kya?...yha?

ram...han kuchh problm h kya.?

nhi to bilkul bhi nhi...andr aa jao..

ram..woow..I like it..u r offring me for stay..

obiously na darwaze pr khade rhne se to bttr hi hai na ki andr hi aa jao..wapas to tum jaoge nhi

ram..ja sakta hu..pr tumhe lekr...han agr tumhe mujhe andr rakhne me dar lag rha ho to alag bat h

excuse me..mujhe dar kyun lagega..andr aao tum pehle...ram ko bulakr m door band kr rhi thi then he said..

ram...agr jazbat kabu me nhi rhe to?

ufff..I was like..kahi  glti to nhi ki ise bulakar...

ji nhi..itni kamjor nhi hu..m apne pyar aur ehsas ki hadh janti hu

ram..pr main to behadh pyar karta hu..

hahaha..vry funny...coffee piyoge.?

ram...sure

wait le aati hu...bolkr aa to gyi kitchen me..pr deemag uski bato me hi atka h..janti to hu ki pyar karta h mujhse..m bhi krti hu..pr mere aur uske sochne aur react krne me bht fark h..pr agr sach me usne behad pyar jaisa kuchh dikha diya to?..handle to kar paungi na?..kahin uski bat sach ho gyi to..?..ufff ye driver bhi pta nhi kahan mar gya...oh god ladki kitna sochti h..duffr...coffee lekr ja wrna kitchen me hi aa jayega wo...abhi ye soch ke mudi hi ki sach me peeche hi khada tha..pta nhi heart attack hi kra dega...

are tum yha..m bas la hi rhi thi..

jane ko hui to hath pakad liya..I was like kya karu...but just hold myself & try to ignore. .but dil bht dhadk rha h..

ram..bat suno

sun to rahi hu...bolo

ram...itni dur se nahi..pas aa ke..

kyun?

ram...kyun mtlb?...u dnt believe on me..or u dnt want to b with me

nhi...aisa nahi...but

ram..oh may b u dnt love me...jane do phir bat karne ka koi mtlb hi nhi h...

itna bolkr ram kitchen se bahr chala..pr mere andr pta nhi kya badla..mujhe bilkul achha nhi laga uska aise jana..obviously m a girl..to m aise hi bat karungi na..pr ye to...ufff...I cnt handle it...pta nhi ek possessiveness si feel hui..kas ke gussa aya..mne coffee whi rakh di aur hall me ake hath pakad ke ram ko roke liya..m abhi bhi soch rhi thi koi aa jaye koi disturb kar de..qki ab ram se nhi mujhe khud se dar lag rha tha..but i m on the way..

ram...what?

I wanna talk to u..

ram..mujhse kuchh kaha?

kaha nhi h..kehna h

ram..to bolo

yha se nhi pas se...

ram...kyun?

ufff I just hate him..he know what I mean phir bhi irritate kar rha..pr ab kuchh nhi kr sakti ...ye krna h to karna h...pta nhi itni jiddi kaise ho gyi..ye pyar sach me bigad deta h insan ko..wo nhi aya to khud hi uske pas chali gyi..

bas bahot ho gya..tum jante ho ki m tumse kitna pyar karti hu phir bhi...how could u say that...

ram..oh cmmon..tumhe kabhi kaha mujhse ki tum mujhse pyar karti ho?

to tumne kaun sa kaha?

ram..m kehne wala tha ...surprise for u but tum aayi hi nhi..

kehne wale the na..kaha nhi na..bas..to mujhe glt nhi bol sakte...

ram..aye bekar ki behas mt karo..

karungi kya kar loge..?

ram..ok..u gone baby..

(ram jst touch her lips ) uff I was like bas ab ye ruke nhi..close my eyes & want him desperately. .usne jaise hi kiss kiya mera phone bj gya..ufff..itna ajeeb tha na..sirf abhi to touch hi kiya..aur ye phone band hi nhi ho rha h..jb soch rhi thi disturb ho to nhi hua..ab nhi chahiye disturbance to hota hi ja rha h hota hi ja rha h...grrr..he leave me for phone..dono ke liye itna awkward ho gya..kuchh hua bhi nhi aur upr se ajeeb bhi ho gya..smjh hi nhi aa rha tha kya kare ab

ram...phone...

han wo driver h...tum..m..dekhti hu..kya..

ram..nhi its ok..tum dekho m ja rha hu..but m waiting for u there...

yup..me 2 excited for ur surprise. .aati hu abhi

ufff..ram to chala gya pr mere dil deemag sabka chain le gya..socha nhi tha mne ki m kabhi aise react karungi kisi ki bat pr...aur wo touch..uff want to feel that deeply..but kuchh nhi hua..huh...ye phone...grrr..pta nhi technology bnayi kyun itni..ufff ..m bhi na..phone pr kyun chilla rhi hu..ajeeb ho gyi hu bilkul..are pehle uthau to...

author's POV

priya ne call receive kiya drivr ne 5 min me ane ko bola..she try to herself..& ready to go..udhar ram itni tezi me jakr car me baitha..aisa lag rha tha jaise koi suffocation ho rhi h use..ac on kiya khud ko relax kiya...but he really wants her now..& he definitely undrstand priya's feeling too..ab to bas use apne dil ki bat keh hi deni thi priya se..so wo full speed me drive krke priya se pehle on the spot pahoncha aur sab set karke wait karne laga..priya bhi puri bachaini se wha pahonchi..idhar udhar dekha koi dikha nhi..right now he only wants to see ram..anyhow..its like obsession for her..pehle kabhi aise feel nhi kiya kisi ke liye..she couldn't able to b far from him

suddenly there is soo many lights are lighten up for her. ..usne sar utha kr asman me dekha uski fvrt roshni wali crackles ne pure asman ko roshan kar diya tha..for her its like heavenly beautiful. .bliss for her eyes...ufff now she believes that fairytales hoti hain..pr har cheez jo ankho ko achhi lage wo achhi hi ho jaruri nhi h..jb ankhe khulti hain to sapne tut hi jate hain..unhe bachane ke liye hame ankhe band rakhni padti hain..pr ankhe band rakh ke jindgi nhi bitayi jati...sochte hi hue priya ne jhat se ankhe khol di...

...flashback end...

qki uske bad usne jo dekha wo use band ankho se bhi nhi dekhna ab..aur nahi uske bare me sochna h...ab wo sach ko dekhna aur mehsus krna chahti hai ..shayad ye sach sapne se behtar nikle..jb hum kuchh nhi kar pate to jo hum pate hain usse hi ummeed karte hain ki wo ek khubsurat sath bankar hamare sath rhe..jab tak pyar rhta hai..yade bhi khubsurat hoti hain...pyar chala jata h to khubsurati bhi le jata h sath...khair jindgi h...priya ne ankhe kholi to samne pati khada tha meethi si smile ke sath gudmorning wish kiya

priya reply karti isse pehle door bell baj gyi..wo sirf smile dekar chali gyi door open karne...door open kiya to samne ek banda khada tha..flowers aur morning wish lekr...he mentioned her...mrs priya ram kapoor...this is for u..from ur love..


to b continue...

Dekho itna type kiya phir bhi chhota hi h...huh
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Posted: 2014-12-02T03:42:44Z
Late and yes chota saa koi baat nahi...Kiss,disturbance
Confused Priya,haha LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
Pati Ram Mrs PriyaRAm KapoorClapClapClap  ,,,,,,,

Waiting for Nxt

Edited by aman.anjaan - 2014-12-02T03:55:30Z
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Posted: 2014-12-02T04:32:29Z
Awesome update!!!
Plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 2014-12-02T09:59:52Z
Veena is back finally SmileSmileSmile
Nice update ClapClapClap
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Posted: 2014-12-02T11:29:41Z
.he mentioned her...mrs priya ram kapoor...this is for u..from ur love.. ?????? yeh kaya hai ConfusedConfusedConfused confusion sceneTongue  ... kiss scene tuh complete karwa deti  adhe mein hi atka diyaLOLROFL  nice update Smile Edited by NAZIANISAR1 - 2014-12-02T11:30:10Z
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Posted: 2014-12-02T23:04:54Z
First to pm nehi mili 
 at least  wa me bhi bata do yaar 
 aftr update 
 and next .. firse confusion...  

 uuufff ye  Mrs.Priya Ram Kapoor.

then from ur love..   ufff 
sab pagal kar rehe ho ...


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Posted: 2014-12-03T02:07:59Z
its nice story !!! loving itEdited by SakshianSneh - 2014-12-03T02:10:19Z
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