New FF ~~Itna karo na mujhe pyar~~ part9 on pg32(Page 15)

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Posted: 2014-09-28T06:18:20Z
Originally posted by jodude


di update ASAP

De rhi hu baba de rhi hu
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Posted: 2014-09-28T06:20:41Z
Originally posted by NAZIANISAR1


nice update ...Tongue
ram n inki extra excited gf ...koolLOL 
hero ne haath pakda greattt ... advancement LOL
continue soon boss Smile

Hahaha...thank u
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Posted: 2014-09-28T06:21:43Z
Originally posted by sandhyasn


story kaafi interesting hai but u stopped at the wrong time
I like POV descriptions
please continue soon and thanks for PM


Hehehe..thank u so much
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Posted: 2014-09-28T06:22:51Z
Originally posted by aanchaltulshan


In few days Raya was very much comfortable with each other but seems destiny has some other plans Ram has girlfriend but still he is thinking about Priya and same is happening with her. But now wat happened between them she didn't like him calling her Jaan. Continue soon and thank you for the pm...

Hehehe..thank u soo much..
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Posted: 2014-09-28T06:23:51Z
Originally posted by veena23


Originally posted by jodude


di update ASAP

De rhi hu baba de rhi hu
woowww...waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 2014-09-28T06:24:45Z
Originally posted by MittalKanu


Nice story
Continue soon

Thank u sooo much
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Posted: 2014-09-28T06:28:25Z
Hello...sab ram priya me hi atke hain...ufff..achha koi bat nhi...hum bhi thoda thoda atkenge pr grnty to kuchh ki nhi h..lol..anyways..story chal rhi h apni speed se...puri shooting me inlogo ko ek sal laga..is that one year is enough to b in love..or to make new relations ..jbki kuchh kuchh rishte already hain...khair..feelings to aa gayi hain...beech me..jo logo ko bhi aur rishto ko bhi disturb kar rhe hain..premier ki party to successful rhi ab ram priya ka rishta jo ki actually me rishta nhi h pr kuchh to h uski trf dhyan jata h...moving on update..hope u all like it...

part 3...

sarika's POV

itni shandar premier party hui pr meri nazare to bas mere hero pr hi thi..mujhe to kuchh pta hi nhi chal rha tha kya h kaun h.kaun aya kaun gya..meri to full to intension krishna pr thi...I only want him yar...pta nhi ye ladka dekhta kyun nhi h mujhe...ufff ab mujhe hi kuchh krna hoga ise to m nhi jane de sakti...I really love him & wnt him desprtly..but ye priya...uff pta nhi iska kya chakkr h..aur ye krishna ke bhi deemag ka kuchh pta nhi chalta ki wo priya ko pasand karta h ya nhi..pta lagati hu...pr priya to kahin dikhi nhi kafi der..chali to nhi gyi..krishna se hi directly puchh leti hu..kam se kam clear to ho hi jayega...

m krishna ko dhundhne lagti hu pr wo bhi nhi mila ab to meri heartbeat jane kahan ja rhi thi..I was so scared agr dono sath me hue to..agr unke beech kuchh hua to..agr krishna priya ko propose kar rha ho to...goooddd...help me pls I want krishna...I love him sooo much...plsss..where r u damn...sochte hue m bahar nikal gyi aur meri nazar priya pr padi..someone cought her by hand. ..I was like...o god pls krishna na ho pls pls..then she turn to him...ufff..he is ram..& he drage her to him & kiss..bas iske bad mujhe kuchh dekhna hi nhi tha..I was like ab bas krishna mil jaye...m ud rhi thi..itni speed me thi ki samne se krishna aa bhi gya aur mujhe dikha bhi nhi takra bhi gyi usse..

krishna...sarika...r u ok..kahan bhag ke ja rhi ho theek to ho

me..yup..I love u

krishna...what?

me..do u?

krishna ...excuse me.?

me...ufff..1 min..

krishna..sans le lo pehle..phir bolo mujhe kuchh samjh nhi aa rha h

me..ok fine..I m ok now..ye bolo..did u like someone or u hv girlfrnd or u hv date..or something. ?

krishna...exactly not...but why r u asking all this...

me..aise hi..achha priya kaisi lagti h tumhe?

krishna...she is very nice girl...why?

me...aur main?

krishna..are...u r also very nice

me..aur mujhme aur priya me best kaun h?

krishna...ye kya ajeeb sawal h yar..dono hi apni jagah sahi ho..

me...achha mtlb there is nothing special for priya?

krishna. ..yup

me..ok then m directly puchh leti hu..I love u soo much..would we make a pair as couple?..will u date with me?

krishna..I exactly dnt know what to say..as I dnt hv any grlfrnd..we would b...but I dnt know how muvh gud boyfrnd I am cn b...to ?

me...I know u would b very gud bf..as u r very gud person yar...

krishna...pr m tumse pyar to nhi karta hu

me...koi bat nahi m to krti hu na tum bhi kar logo..just only with me..I really love u..really want u...

krishna..ok fine..as u wish...

oh my god wo din meri jindgi ka sabse khubsurat din tha..jb m krishna ki baho me bahe dal ke andr gyi...god evryone look like..haww..ye ise kaise mil gya..?..& I feel like queen...eee...

krishna's POV

ajeeb ladki h ye sarika..itna sabkuchh aakr keh gyi mujhe...aur pta nhi kyun priya ke bare me bola...khair..priya to bas meri dost jaisi hi h..pr m soch rha tha mne han kyun ki sarika ke liye..may b as I am a man I also need someone whi know me who understand me who definitely love me..may b she is the one..thodi si bad excitement ki dukan h aur kuchh burai to nhi h usme...han priya jitni achhi nhi h..pr usse kya hota h..sab ek jaise thode hi hote hain...aur waise bhi itni khush thi wo ki use dekh kr m bhi khush ho gya..aisa nhi h ki ye I love u pehli bar suna h..pr ispr react aj hi kiya mne...are cmon hr kisi ko thodi react kr sakta hu...

khair hum andr gye..sab aise dekh rhe the jaise hum kisi zoo ke anokhe janwar hain...god...upar se mera kamina do st...waise to ladkiyo ke peechhe hi milta h pr is waqt jarur aayega mere pas..qki uske to pet me deemag me sab jagah khujli ho rhi hogi..mujhe to uski surat dekh kr hi samjh aa rha h ki kya puchhne wala h wo...lo aa bhi gya

vikram mera best buddy..hamare unit ka sabse romantic insan...aur iski wanna b girlfrnd neha...jo ki priya ki best frnd h..uske hote hue bhi ye sala hr teesri ladki se frndship krne ko ready rhta h...bapre hr din inka kuchh na kuchh issue rhta h..m aur priya aajtk jitne bhi normal hue honge na indono ki hi wajah se...otherwise we r very professional. ..khair...aa gya ab dekhna uske sawal..

vikram...sale kamine...mujhe btaya nhi?...ladki bhi pta li?..aur to aur sabke samne hath me hath dal ke aa rha h?

me..ek min...sarika hum abhi aate hain aur tu chal jra waha

m vikram ko side me lekr gya qki sbke samne to usse bat krna mtlb love story se pehle hi breakup..."kya h be...kahin bhi shuru ho jata h" 
vikram...m shuru hua hu ya tu...ladki tu pta ke laya h


krishna...mne nhi ptaya h usne mujhe pta liya to kya karu..pr aise kyun behv kr rha h..khud ki gf h phir bhi...m nhi kr sakta kya kisi se pyar?

vikram...wo bat nhi h mere yar pr bolna chahiye na..tu thehra achha bachha to aise tujhe dekh kar chakkr to ayega hi na..

krishna...vry funny...waise she is very gud girl..mne kuchh glt to nhi kiya na..

vikram..are cmon its fair enough yar if she loves u..tu to waise bhi kisi se pyar nhi krta..

krishna...han pr usse bhi to nhi karta...

vikram...kar lega...I know...tera dil bht achha h tu kisi ka dil nhi todega...relax...chal enjoy krte hain tera confession day

krishna...oye kahe ka confession day..we r only bf gf..

vikram...han han theek h yhi celebrate kar lete hain...


priya's POV

pta nhi hum bate karte hue ja to rhe the pr achanak se ram ne mujhe jan kaha to mujhse handle nhi hua...bura laga...shayad isliye bcz I really hv feeling for him..& may b he is not..phir kyun aise bolta h..its hurt na..pr use to sari duniya mazak hi lagti h...to mbe bhi gusse me keh diya ki uski jan to wo ja rhi h mera to koi rishta bhi nhi h usse...& I moved...pr wo bhi peeche mera nam lekr aa rha tha...m nhi ruk rhi thi to usne hath pakad liya...I was like how could I face him..if my eyes r not able to hide my tears. ..then...agr mera pyar dikh gya use toh?..m to abhi khud kuchh nhi smjh pa rhi hu use kya samjhaungi...hum hain ek sal se sath...but we r actor bht logo ke sath kam krte hain..kitne sare pal jeete hain pr iske sath har pal sach kyun lagta h...pls god...mera hath chhod de...meri ankho me na dekhe...kaise roku ise...pls help me..god...

ram...ek min ruko...

ab m kuchh nhi kr sakti..I hv to face it..I turned to him. .."kya h?"

ram...I agree hamara koi rishta nhi..so I want a relationship with you. .would u?

I was like pagal ho gya h kya?..kuchh bhi bol rha h..girlfriend h iski aur mujhko bolta h relationship ke liye khud ko samjhta kya h..I was mad on him..aur chillane lagi ki samjh ke kya rakha h usne mujhe..hoga kahin ka hero..mere liye ek simple sa insan hi h..himmat kaise hui aise bat karne ki...m chilla rhi hu aur wo muskura rha h...then he put his fingr on my lips. ..

ram...o my god kitna bolti ho yar tum mujhe to pta hi nhi tha...itna chillane wali koi bat nhi h...its vry simple ..m bol rha hu dosti karte date karte hain..if u like only then..m ye nhi bol rha hu ki chalo mere sath night stay kro...gazab hoti ho tumlog bhi yar...we r actor..sath kam krte hain..dosti to kar hi sakte hain..agr tumhe gf bnne me problm h to hum sirf dost hi rhte hain..isme itna hyper hone ki kya bat h..


god m bhi na sach me puri stupid hu...m khud bhi to yhi chahti hu phir kyun chilla rhi hu..sahi to keh rha h dosti krne me kya problm h...ufff..relax priya aram se bat kar..

I m sorry yar..actually I m not that easy girl. .to aise hi bas...Of course hum dosti kr sakte hain...date bhi...but I am vry scared with all these things. ..dnt know m nibha paungi ya nhi...mujhe rishto se khelna bilkul pasand nhi h is mamle me bht sensitive hu to...u know na..mtlb...kaise samjhau?

ram...ok ok..relax..kuchh nhi hoga..evrything will fine..we cn manage

but tumhari girlfriend. .?

ram..relax..this was closed & u know that..u jst relax...

kehte se hi wo mere pas aaya & he kiss me..I was shivering. ..I dnt believe ek bar me ye kiss kr rha h to age kya karega...but he ia vry gentle..he kiss me on cheek..so bcz of it I hv smile on my face..m na sach me duffr hu..then he told me ki hum wapas chalte hain party me thodi der bad ghar jayenge..he want to celebrate our frndship. .so I hv to...

andr gye to wha alag hi hungama h krishna aur sarika ka..upar se ram ne mera hath pakad rakha tha..ab to meri wanna b neha..wo to mujhe bilkul nhi chhodne wali h...she come to me..first she tell me evrything about krishna & sarika..jo ki usko vikran ne btaya..jo ki iska wanna b type ka hi bf h aur krishna ka best buddy..inke hr din tamam issue hote hai  jinki wajah se hi kai bar hum mile aur bat karte hain..khair vikram me to phir bhi patience h neha me to bilkul nhi to wo khinch ke le gyi mujhe ek trf aur shuru ho gyi..itne sawal karti hain na ki uska muh band krne ke liye sabkuchh btana hi padhta h...tabhi shant hoti h..waise wo nhi bhi puchhe to bhi mujhse btaye bina rha thodi jayega...jan h meri...pr chunki wo puchhti h isiliye m bhi bhav khati hu..nhi puchhti to m khud btati..

author's POV...

finally they all are set with thier love...they hv 6 months holiday...aftr that..award functions r in row..so they want sped thier freedom together for making thier love strong & beautiful. .hopefully they live their best in these 6 months...

to b continue...
Edited by veena23 - 2014-09-28T06:26:03Z
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Posted: 2014-09-28T06:36:07Z
superb update...
sarika's charctr is just like neha...LOL talkative...nice charctr
awww ram n priya kiss...Embarrassed

ye kya vikram ram ka nahi krishna ka dost...hmm different..

6 months..? uske baad stry ek twist legi na..?Confused

continuee soon...Tongue
Edited by jodude - 2014-09-28T07:20:01Z
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