~PrAja Drabble~ Jiya laage na - Page 2 | Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap

Ohhh

@Ohhh

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome fiction celu 👏

Reply

Quote

CallmeCel

@CallmeCel

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Kaushitaki
Celena!
All d best for ur xams !
I kno U'll rock!
God's with U!
U r a born winnner!
Remember 3 idiots ka first scene!
If u won while u were born... U can win ever after!
God bless u!

Kaushi di!!
Thanks for your wishes.
You know every time there's a confidence in me,
but this time I feel as if it's not going to be good.
I really needed someone's wishes.
And after what u said,
feeling a little better.

Reply

Quote

CallmeCel

@CallmeCel

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

This content was originally posted by: -JaanVi-
Awesome fiction celu 👏

Thanks Jaanvi!😳

Reply

Quote

Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

IF-Stunnerz

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

This content was originally posted by: AsYa_Celana

Thanks you Chitra!!😳
Glad that you liked it!😃

welcome dear 😃😳

Reply

Quote

Aashna

@_aashi_

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Celu it's too good... U have expressed thier emotions so well👏👍🏼!! I don't have words now.. The only word would be AMAZING!!

1

Reply

Quote

Harshil Patel

@harshil_radhi28

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

outstanding

superb story

LOVE❤️

RADHI😊

Reply

Quote

noname

@nonname

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

The pain is extreme...
It is unbearable...
Would that day ever come when we'll reunite
Will that day ever come when the two broken hearts will mend once again
Waiting for that day to come...

________________________

^^^^^^^^^

amaaziingg !!

👏👏👍🏼

Edited by Anshul_CR7 - 9 years ago

Reply

Quote

kaku17

@kaku17

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

What an outstanding piece of writing...u r simply amazing...the pain seemed so real...😭

a request though...can u plz write another part to show pratap's repentance...I so wish that to happen...pratap to bend down unconditionally on her feet...I am so mad with him 😡...feel like thrashing the life out of him...grrr...😡

1

Reply

Quote

P.D.S

@P.D.S

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

You took me into another world with your writing. Loved how you used the song. Beautiful! ⭐️👏

Reply

Quote

Aru

@Aru_A

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Haye re Celu...

i was so waiting for this...

a musical OS from u...

coz as i hv said before, u r amazing in marrying stories with songs...

this one touched my heart like the last one...

it was so beautiful...

like really...

all of that thought process...

and the corresponding lyrics...

sss...

i cud hv almost cried...

it was so...

the last i remember, the piya o re piya one...in that too, Ajab was by the window...

sss...Ceu...beautiful...

and haan...i'm suffering from the same disease...rapid ideas and a strong urge to write in exam days... :P

1

Reply

Quote