~PrAja Drabble~ Jiya laage na

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Posted: 5 years ago
Hi everyone!!! I don't know what happened to me but as my exams are nearing I'm getting back to back ideas.LOL So just came up with anothe drabble. This one is basically the sequel of my previous drabble: The Final Walk Out - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4161818
Okay so I'm warning you people before ahead. Don't try to make head or tail of this.Wink


5 years...
She never knew when 5 years passed away... It was never less than 15 years to her...
He never knew how he had spent all these days...1825 days...43800 hours...without a single glimpse of her.

She sat there...beside that window...that window which had, all these days, witnessed her pain, her sorrow, which had often been wet with tears...

Mann tera jo rog hai
Mohe samajh na paaye

Wasn't it my decision to drift apart from you...to separate from you...to end it forever...
Than why does it hurts so much?
Then why do I still want to be with you?
Then why do I still get heartaches remembering every moment we spent together?

Paas hai jo sab chod ke
door ko paas bulaaye


I wish it wasn't that hard to be apart from you...
I wish the separation wasn't that much agonizing...

jiya laage na, tum bin mora
jiya laage na, tum bin mora...
jiya laage na, tum bin moraaa...


He went to that corner of his palace which he has been visiting late at nights...
To ease his pain...to hide his pain from everyone...
the balcony...that special balcony...
with the mala in his hand...yes that mala...Ajab's shivji waali mala...
Which was her only trace left with him...

Kya jaane kyun hai...
Kya jaane kaisi andekhi si dor...
.

I was the only reason for which she left...
I myself wanted her to leave...
Thne why I still want  to be with her...to be together
I should have been happy that we are not together anymore...
Wasn't it me who wanted to get her away from my life and I want to do so...
But why can't I detach myself from her...
Why I feel I'm connected with her...
What is that thing which still pulls me towards her...

Jo kheechti hai jo lechali hai
Ab yun mujhe teri ore


She looked at the dark night sky...
which was as dark as her fate...
I don't know what had I done so sinful that destiny chose be so cruel with me...
Would I always remain incomplete..
Maybe I'm among those stories which are destined to be incomplete...

Main anjaani hoon woh kahaani
Hogi na jo poori


I never knew that the distance between would get broader...
The hope of reunision in my heart had faded long back...
Because I know that bridging thi gap is not easy...
Even if we ever come across the distance would still be vast

Paas aaoge to paaoge
Phir bhi hai ik doori
Jiyaa lage na tum bin mora
Jiya lage na, tum bin mora
Jiya lagena...tum bin mora...

He went down the memory lane...that day flashed before his mind...
Misunderstandings...uncertainty...disbelief...
Why you did this? Why you broke me like this?
We were only a step away from unsion but then...
Those sudden accusation...
I never knew you were like this
I never knew that the girl I loved would have so many different shades...
I didn't trust you, I didn't believe you and still I don't...
But what I still believe is that you could never do this to me...
There's still something which is unknown...
Still some mystery which's left unsolved

Mann ab tak jo oojh na paaya
Tum woh paheli ho

I wan to know...I want to solve that mystery...
that misunderstanding...
Which partd uor ways...
Which separated me from you...
from my life...
I wanna know...

Koi na jaane kya wo rahas hai
Koi na jaane kya wo rahasya hai
Jiski saheli ho


A cold breez blew across her face messing her hair...
The breez was unusually cold...with cold emotions...and cold feelings...
I want to meet you...
I want to be with you...
The pain of separation is intolerable...
I cant pretend to be happy anymore...
I cant act to be normal just anymore...
I'm tired putting those fake smiles, every morning...

Main muskaaun, sabse chhupaaun
Vyaakul hoon din rain

These sleepless nights are getting impossible to get through...
I don't anymore remember the day when I last slept peacefully...
How could I?
You have siezed my heart's peace away from me...
Kab se na aayi naino mein nindiya
Mann mein na aaya chain

The pain is extreme...
It is unbearable...
Would that day ever come when we'll reunite
Will that day ever come when the two broken hearts will mend once again
Waiting for that day to come...
Waiting for our agony to end...
Waiting for those bright morning...
Waiting for those peaceful nights...
And till then...
Jiya laage na tum bin mora
Jiya laage na, tum bin mora
Jiya laage na, tum bin mora.
..

Thanks for your patience reading everybody! Do drop your valuable comments.Big smile

You can find more of my writing pieces on PrAja in my writing index!!!

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Edited by AsYa_Celana - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Celena!
I had to return!
   The pain brought me back!
      The intensity brought me back!
        The love brought me back!
          The tragedy brought me back!
            The song brought me back!
AWESOME... IS D WORD!
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesomeee lovelly too good dowrite more when pratap comes to know da truth his feelings his repentence
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Posted: 5 years ago
This is soo beautiful. I'm honestly at a loss of words right now. It touched me deeply. I must say that you've written it amazingly Clap Clap
The pain of being away from each other was depicted soo well. One could actually feel the agony of both souls.
Keep writing such soulful stories Smile You're an amazing writer Smile Big smile
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Posted: 5 years ago
awesome one Cellu loved this beautiful one Thumbs Up
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by Kaushitaki


Celena!
I had to return!
   The pain brought me back!
      The intensity brought me back!
        The love brought me back!
          The tragedy brought me back!
            The song brought me back!
AWESOME... IS D WORD!

Kaushi di!!!!
Thank you..
Thanks you so much!

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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by sweta2005


Awesomeee lovelly too good dowrite more when pratap comes to know da truth his feelings his repentence

Thanks Sweta di!
Actually my exams are from Monday, so probably my last writing before the leap...
But will still think about it...
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by -ChitraRocking-


awesome one Cellu loved this beautiful one Thumbs Up

Thanks you Chitra!!Embarrassed
Glad that you liked it!Big smile

Edited by AsYa_Celana - 5 years ago
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