So...I know that a lot of us have wanted to see PrAja in baarish. And i think the CV's are probably listening to us and giving a rain sequence. But...this...i wrote this quite a time back...thought of sharing this story with you all... Enjoy reading... :)
After times full of big hurdles and personal obstacles in
the lives of Pratap & Ajabdeh, the happiness had finally returned. The
battle with Marwar had finally settled, half because of Pratap's war strategies
and skills, half because of the unveiling of the truth that Mughals were the
root of this battle and Pratap's successful attempts of persuading Raja Maldev
in that very matter. It was peaceful and settled between the families of
Chittor and Bijolia also, all the misunderstandings had been cleared. Infact,
Rana Udai Singh and Kunwar Prratap Singh had even visited Bijolia after the
war. In that short stay, a lot had happened. It was an eye opener for a lot of
people, though some of them were still adamant in the face of the truth.
So it was a fine day, bright day and peaceful day in the
castle of Bijolia. Outside the four walls, it was a beautiful weather. Trees
were swaying in a cool breeze and all plants were blossoming. As Ajabdeh looked
outside from the window, she felt as if the nature was calling her. It seemed
to Ajabdeh, that even the nature was very happy about something. Her inner
instincts said the same, something good was about to happen. But she could not
sit to think about it and ignore the call of nature any longer. She left her
room and proceeded for the gardens. She reached the open ground floor, where
the roof was supported only by pillars and there was a clear vision of outside
and the breeze was flowing through freely. A big smile appeared on her face as
the breeze touched her skin...and her open hair were flowing freely. She walked
ahead leaving behind the roof, towards the open sky.
On the other hand, Pratap had planned to
surprise Ajabdeh and the Bijolia family by dropping in out of the blue. As she
stepped into the grounds, out of the castle, he stepped inside the castle from
the main entrance. Hansa bai and Rao
Mamrakh were pleased with this pleasant surprise by Pratap. They welcomed him
inside. Rao Mamrakh asked out of curiosity, "Kunwar Pratap, aap yahan? Koi
aavashyak kaam tha kya? Hame bula liya hota..."
"Arre nahi nahi Rao ji, ham to bas yunhi aap sab se milne aa gaye the." replied
Pratap with a smile. He was soon being asked general questions about his
welfare, his family, the battle, and other stuff. He kindly, truthfully
answered all questions like a gentleman.
The family of Bijolia was very close to him. And their daughter was even
closer, to his heart. He hadn't met her for so long. So finally, he raised a
question, "Hansa massij, Ajabdeh kahan hain? Kahi dikhai nahi de rahi..." Even
before he said this, his eyes started searching Ajabdeh. Hansa bai, first
smiled to herself at this question, then replied thoughtfully,
"Ajabdeh...errr...bhala Ajabdeh kahan ho sakti hain? Ham to bahut samay se
Kunwar Balwant ke saath the, hamne to Ajabdeh ko dekha hi nahi. Ham abhi dasi
ko bhejte hain unhe bulane ke liye." And she was about to summon a dasi but
Pratap stopped her, "Nahi, nahi, rehne dijiye. Ham swayam jaakar mil lete hain unse."
and Pratap left to find Ajabdeh.
Outside, Ajabdeh was enjoying the breeze a lot. It was so
fresh and relaxing. She looked around at the beautiful gardens. Then she looked
up at the sky. All of a sudden, a raindrop hit her cheek. It took Ajabdeh a couple
of moments to realize this. When she did, a big smile appeared on her face.
Yes, it had started to rain. A beautiful drizzly rain. She was overjoyed. "Baarish!!!"
she exclaimed, a wide grin of pleasure on her face. She started laughing and
playing and running in the rain. Soon, she was drenched wet.
While all this was happening, Pratap had looked at all the
possible spots of Ajabdeh's presence in the castle. When he didn't succeed, he
went outside to the cowsheds. Possibly, Ajabdeh was with Laxmi. He reached
there but was disappointed again to find that Ajabdeh wasn't even present
Aur kahan ho sakti hai Ajabdeh?' he thought to himself. He decided to ask
Laxmi, "Laxmi, aap jaanti hai ki Ajabdeh kahan hai? Poora mahal chaan chuke
ham, kahi nahi dikh rahi hain. Aapko pata hai?" But before Laxmi could answer,
a raindrop fell on Pratap's face too. He looked up at the skies. He said,
"Ohho, ab to varsha bhi aarambh ho gayai hai. Bhala Ajabdeh jaa kahan sakti
hain?" he murmured to himself. In a couple of moments, the rain took its full
form, a continuous drizzly rain. He thought, Hame mahal ke bheetar chale jaana
chahiye. Kya pata, hamari anupastithi me Ajabdeh mahal me vapas aa gayi ho?' he
turned to leave but he stopped all of a sudden. He heard a voice from behind. A
laughing voice full of joy and delight and glee. He slowly turned and stood there, transfixed,
looking in the direction of voice. He slowly muttered, "Ajabdeh?"
Okay ppl...thats it...for this part. there are possibly two or three parts of this story...will soon update...
please leave ur views on it n prediction n tell me what u feel about it n please hit the like button(if u like it)...there is some real deal ahead with PrAja in this story... :)
Btw...this story...the later part of this story...it is inspired by the song...'Aisi chale jab hawa...ishq hua hi hua...'...I'm pretty sure u all will get to see the ishq between PrAja....really soon.. ;)
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Very beautiful, thoda pehle update karna chahiye tha isse, u know possibly I won't be there after Tuesday so main next part toh nahin padh paungi, I mean I would bout I guess after 1 week of your update.Aru, this part is just awesome and so beautiful. Even I had a rainy OS in my mind, but guess some one is already there with it...Just loved it, the way you described the call of nature was really beautiful.Waiting eagerly for the next part, and if possible, please yaara, update the next part by Sunday or Monday...
this is just fantastic...as lovely as young love and aromatic as early cherry blossoms ! bahut tarif kar li, ab fatat update karo warna cowdung aur stale cheese ke sath compare kardoongi ! badboo se tik nehi paoge...lol !