SANDHIR FF - me and mr kidnapper..chap 8 updated 15/8/14

New ff - me and mr kidnapper

Hi guys..I know I am already writing another ff but I wanted to start one more.. So this ff will be a funny + mature+ dark ..and here is the prologue pls do tell how it is..bad comments are also welcomed..

PROLOGUE

sanyukta aggarwal was sitting at the airport waiting for her flight to get ready and just fly to India ..she was extremely excited as she will meet her parents after months..
Sanyu- oh god .. Flight ko bhi aa hi delay hona tha..and just then her eyes struck to a figure..
Sanyu- oh man!! he is so handsome..hotness toh khut khut ke bhari hai..oh yeh toh mere pass hi aa raha hai..he just sad beside me..oh god I am dead..
Man- hi and passed a million dollar smile..
Sanyu- hi..I am sanyukta...
Man- nice to meet you..I am randhir..
Sanyu- oh god his name is sounding like music..yaar he is so irresistible..!!
Sanyu - so where are you going??
Randhir- Delhi..
Sanyu - oh same here...he is taking out something from his pocket.. Oh it's a chewing gum..oh god he offered me..eeks he is such a gentleman..
Randhir- you Wanna take one..???
Sanyu- yaa sure..thanks..oh god how can I say no to such a man..

After some time..

Sanyu- ouch my head is spinning..where the hell am I ???
This room seems nice but this is not not my room for sure..

Pls guys do tell whether I should continue or not..
Loads of love
JanaviEdited by Randhir.janavi - 9 years ago

Index
Chap 1 on pg 4
Chap 2 on pg7

Chap 3 on pg 10
Chap 4 on pg 12
Chap 5 on pg14Edited by Randhir.janavi - 9 years ago

nice concept yar...plz update soon..

nice concept dear

Interesting plot dear... Pls update soon...

Interesting plot... Do pm me... N update soon... :D

nyc prologue...

Hey! Janavi

Amazing concept ...update soon nd pm me😊

Nice concept it seems interesting so plzzz update soon