RaYa New Story : Complicated Luv Story Update Part 10 on Page 32

Posted: 2014-07-30T06:05:56Z
Part 1

Ram: What the hell ye Ladki apne aap ko samzti kya hai. main yaha 1 hour se uska wait kar raha hu or ye hai ki ab tak...and then ram looks in his right side the host of the party and media welcomes the spl guest of the party its none other than Ronit Roy..

Ram 1st ignores him but Then Ronit give him a hi ram like hand from mearly 50 meters Now ram has to meet him bcoz they are good friends from thier school to clg but not best frend.

Ronit : hi ram h r u ?? good to see u long time man...

Ram : hey hi i m f9 hmmm long time yar almost 1 year.

Ronit : Or Suna ram, Vikram kaisa hai and howz that pagli Neha ???

Ram : Vik-neha ne shadi kar li hai and dono thik hai khush hai.
Tu bata Kaha tha ek saal se koi ata pata nahi tera.

Ronit : hmmm main US chale gaya kuch kaam ke silsilye me. and sorry yar How can i forget this yar congooo man finally u r a Married man now.
Kab mila raha hai bhabhi se.

Ram : are teri bhabhi ka wait to main bhi kar rha hu pichle 1 hours se...
And then The lady in White saree looking like angel come down from the staircase going towards Her Hubby.

plz like and comments and let me know to continue or not.
This my 1st attemt to write a Story on RaYa plz bear me and sorry for mistakes bcoz i m posting it from my phone really complicated. plz
Edited by aman.anjaan - 2014-08-28T04:07:18Z
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Posted: 2014-07-30T06:19:03Z
First welcome to the forum buddy 
Congratulations starting a story on Raya 

Good start 

its very short and sweet ... 

So Ram is waiting for his wife Wink
Just waiting for Priyas entry  

Want long update from second part 

P.s:Try to pm when you update next Tongue
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Posted: 2014-07-30T06:22:39Z
mm nice start Clap
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Posted: 2014-07-30T07:14:58Z
wow its  godo to see u writing a story, within a short span of time.
looks interesting update soon
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Posted: 2014-07-30T07:26:54Z
Nice start... 
 plzzz update asap 

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Posted: 2014-07-30T07:37:46Z
good start
continue soon
nxt time plz pm me
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Posted: 2014-07-30T07:42:11Z
thanx to all
and i will update asap
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Posted: 2014-07-30T08:13:16Z
 nice start ...Clap
story is short n sweet,...
waiting for priya's entry...

next time pm me plsss...Smile

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