angad shows his real chehra (fan-fiction)

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Posted: 2005-06-06T22:51:51Z

hi guys this a another fan fiction from usa girl and this one is different then other stories that i posted earlier. i hope u guys will like it

angad & kripa

kripa - angad tumne aapni maa se baat ki hamare bare main?

angad - abhi nahin

kripa - to kab karonge? jab puri duniya ko malum pad jayenga ki mein pregnant hoon tab baat karonge?

angad - kripa plz mujhe thoda time do mein jaldi mom se baat karonga

angad then leaves

kripa is sadhandCry

khanna's house

angad comes in

naina - angad tumhe aaj raat ko delhi jana hoga humare new show ke liye so plz get ready okay

angad - ok mom i'll pack my bags

angad goes to his room

outhouse

kripa calls at khanna's house

teddy picks up the phone

kripa - hello teddy kya mein angad se baat kar sakti hoon?

teddy - angad baba to apne bags pack kar rahe hain delhi jaane ke liye aapne show ke liye

kripa is sadhandCry and says okay

kripa - kyon naa mein usko ghar pe jaake milu usko aacha lage ga

kripa leaves to meet angad

khanna's house

angad's friend manan comes to khanna's house

manan - teddy angad kahan hai?

teddy - apne room main

manan goes to angad's room

angad's room

angad is packing his bags

manan - angad kahan jaane ke liye ready ho rahe ho?

angad - delhi aapne naye show ke liye. tum aa rahe ho na mere sath?

manan - nahin mein ek do din baad aaunga mujhe kuch kaam hai

kripa comes to khanna's house

angad is talking to manan

angad - aacha hai naa yaar mein delhi jaa rahan hoon is bahane mujhe kripa se to thoda chutkara milenga

manan - why r u saying this? kya tum kripa se pyar nahin karte?

angad starts laughing

kripa is about to knock the door when she hears angad saying ....

angad - pyaar aur kripa se pagal ho kya mein kripa se sirf nafarat karta hoon sirf nafarat samje

kripa is standing outside the door and she is shocked after hearing that

manan - to phir woh sab kya tha kripa ke sath ?

angad - mein sirf kripa se woh thappad ka badla lena chahta tha jo usne sab ke samne angad ko mara tha.

kripa is shocked and starts cryinghandCry

angad - mein ne kripa ko aise mod par lakar khada kar diya hai jahan usko paas sirf ek hi rasta hai aur woh hoon mein. us kripa par to mein ne aisa kala dhabba lagaya hai jisko sirf mein hi mita sakta hoon

manan - aisa kya kar diya hai tumne?

angad laughs - woh mere bache ki maa ban ne wali hai

manan is shocked

angad is laughing like a devil

kripa is all shattered

angad - lekin yaar kuch bhi kaho par kripa thi kamal ki ladki. meri zindagi mein kai ladkiya aai par kripa jaisi koi nahin thi. uske sath mera aacha time pass ho gaya

angad laughsLOL

kripa can't take it anymore she opens the door

angad and manan looks at the door and shocked to see kripa

kripa's face is all redAngry and stars at angad

kripa comes toward angad

angad is still shocked to see kripa there

kripa comes close to angad

they both are staring at each other

just then kripa gives a tight slap on angad's face

angad is shocked his face turns all red and angry

kripa - itnaa bada dhoka kyon kiya aisa tumne?

and she tries to slap angad again, but angad holds her hand and says with angry face

angad - bas kripa tumne jo pehle mujhe thappad mar kar jo galti ki thi uska anjam to tumne dekh hi liya hai.

kripa is confusedConfused

angad - nahin samaji? woh anjam jo tumhare kokh (wamb) mein pal raha hai

kripa shouts angaddddddddddd

kripa - meine tumhara kya bigada tha ki tumne mere saath aisa kiya?

angad - itani jaldi bhul gai woh thappad jo tumne mujhe mara tha? tum bhul sakti ho lekin mein kabhi nahin bhul sakta. tumne puri duniya ke samne mujhe thappad mara tha uska anjam to tumko bhugat nahi thaa. ab tumhe pata chale ga ki tumne mujhe thappad mar kar kitni badi galti ki thi.

kripa - mein kabhi soch bhi nahin sakti thi ki tum is hadh tak gir sakte ho. mein tumse nafarat karti hoon. kripa shouts i hate uuuuuuu

angad laughs - oh reall? agar itni hi nafarat karti ho to phir mere sath sone ke liye kyon taiyar ho gai thi? tab tumhare morals, tumhare sanskar kahan chale gaye thee? saaf saaf kyon nahin kehti ke tum bhi angad par mar miti thi

kripa shouts - angadddddddd bandh karo aapni bakwaas

angad - kyon? bura laga? are tumko to aapne aap ko khush naseeb manna chahiye ke angad ne tumhare saat itne din bitaye. ladkiya mar ti angad ke sath waqt bitane ke liye

kripa - isi baat ka to pachtava hai ke meine tum jaise insaan se pyar kiya. saram aati hai mujhe aapne aap par

angad laughs

angad - accha? and laughs

kripa - angad tumne yeh sab isi liye kiya naa kyon ki tum mujhe dukhi dekhna chahte ho? par tumhara yeh sapna kabhi nahi pura honga. mein tumhare bina khush reh sakti hoon aur ab dekhna tum mere liye kaise tadap te ho

angad -angad khanna ko ladkiyon ki koi kami nahin hai samji  ek gai to hazar aa jayengi

kripa - lekin ek din tumhe is kripa ki kami jarur hongi lekin tab tumhe yeh kripa kahin nahi milengi samje

angad gets mad and says get lost

kripa leaves

angad shouts - tumhare hone ya na hone se mujhe koi farak nahin padta. i hate u  i hate u

kripa rote hove chali jaati hai

naina listens all this conversation and smiles

to be continue

do replyBig smile

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Posted: 2005-06-06T23:25:56Z

wow....thats so good....plz continue...

~sweta~

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Posted: 2005-06-06T23:37:20Z
I loved it. It was wonderful. Plz continue. I wanna see angad in misery. Smile I still love him though Wink
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Posted: 2005-06-07T00:01:07Z
interesting...... plz continue
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Posted: 2005-06-07T00:18:23Z

 

Ur soooooo GOOd PLZ CONTINUE Big smile

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Posted: 2005-06-07T00:24:51Z

Cry

i cant bear my angad negative plez make his character good n kripas pregnency test should b done n it should turn negative plezzzzz

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Posted: 2005-06-07T00:35:46Z
So when is the next episode...do it soon please
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Posted: 2005-06-07T00:56:04Z

U HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!

U HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

U HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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