RAYA FF -Sirf Meri Ho *THREAD-8 Updated PART- 85 on Page-136(Page 22)

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Posted: 2014-07-05T09:12:57Z
Originally posted by BALHLOVER


Originally posted by luvsakshi


Originally posted by BALHLOVER


Originally posted by luvsakshi


Originally posted by BALHLOVER


Cry
Cry
 is bache ko mat tadpayo 


Aapp our Bache LOL ye koun bola Tongue
But frankly when Giri read the comment she was like 
This girl will feel surprised and  very good after reading the coming update and the upcoming one also 

 haawww u dont think i am ...lil kiddo.. 
 Wink

 the miost innocent soul of universe.. 
 okieee..now going to write ..aftr Cnight of my ff.. 
 now see..how innocent i am LOL


Kiddo is okay but not lil kiddo defiantely LOL

and NOt at all innocent soul of universe LOL

Really 
Im eagerly waiting for your ff cnight LOL

Thanks atleast you are trying to meet them soon LOL

 he he i was going to write ..and at the end .. now watching UP 

LOL
 me lil kiddo .. u dont know
Wink

Anyone tell me, who is lil kiddo here LOLWinkWink

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Posted: 2014-07-05T09:19:00Z
Originally posted by rosinagoor


Originally posted by luvsakshi


Originally posted by rosinagoor


Cute & Nice Preview Wink
Continue soon Day Dreaming



Awww why did you read 
you told you wont read Confused  

will update by tonight 
Thank you 


Arre i feels upset re
so i read Preview
Sorry Wink

Hey thats okay Tongue
Why sorry ... I just aasked 
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Posted: 2014-07-05T09:20:33Z


Writer's Note :

Hey dear pyari readers ,Err I have to give this note as everybody wondering how I'm getting Idea's ..Lolz Neel got  almost 13 pms regarding this .

Few Idea's were completely Giving by readers ,Ok actually I cant speak up their names here but I asked their permission Can I tell to the other readers .So they said yes .. Asusual Neel will always support me when I'm writing or stopped in few scenes .

Like that Few Married readers are sharing few ideas as they want to see RAYA in that scenes .. Thank you so much for them that they equally enjoyed the scenes .I think I did justice to  what they told ideas ,Its really hard to write someone Ideas .. but I tried ..Its splendid to your reviews .

In the last update the Aggresive part and Bite parts suggested by ReadersLOL .I have written in my way .. Those scenes I implemented here .. I m glad you liked

Okay stopping my bakwas here ..Enjoy this part .. waiting eagerly for your comments .

And one imp thing - Neel already given a good preview you may feel It's short update but its not my fault  as the update contains 3,400 words as the previous updates LOL why i pointed means Neel herself commented .


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Nuts : Then you could have return the same favour to her na..

Ram : wickedly looking at Priya

If I get chance now I'm ready to return this favour . Priya immediately wrapped her saree around her waist .

Srinikha chuckled seeing this ..

Nuts: Now!! she would be grown up na bhai..how you will..

Srinikha Dragged nuts with her leaving them alone .

Priya was rooted to the spot thinking how naughty he is turning day by day..

She dipped her soft palms in the oil and slowly started massaging his shoulders ,then she made circular motions and came down along the entire length of his back .

"Hmmm your touch is so soothing Priya " he spoke a lil huskily

She blushed hearing it .

What you are trying to  prove  she almost whispered  in his ear .

"Don't you know what I'm speaking "

Mr. Kapoor you almost gave me heart attack by spilling the matter.

"Isn't it true "

Whats true Mr.Kapoor ..Priya baffled

That you have aggressively marked on my stomach , he pulled her by her wrist ,she leaned on him almost touching his bare back with her bossom.

Mr. Kapoor leave my hand she pleaded gazing at her surroundings .

If I won't ...Ram smiled and winked at her

Please "everybody is watching us "

So will you allow me to return your gift today ...

Haww Mr. Kapoor ,how you are trying to take advantage of my situation, she whispered again struggling to make her hand free from him

 Whatever you feel .. say YES My dear wify than I will leave your hand ..He smiled ..

As Priya feared anyone can observe them she said "Okay okay Now please leave my hand "

He enjoyed when her lacy fingers were working on his strong muscles, shoulder blades and his back .. Ohh the feeling was awesome for him. And he was loving to get all this from his wife

Priya was lil uncomfortable at starting but seeing all other couples enjoying she felt eased out and enjoyed massaging his hubby ..

Then the men headed towards a big pool type area there they all have showered. Those were fun filled family moments .. They enjoyed it so much .

Priya looked at him with a smile , seeing his happiness she too smiled .

After the bath ,Ram came towards Priya, she immediately handed him a towel and  with another towel she started drying his head .

She felt something strange as she didn't hear any sound .. she felt pin drop silence around them so she looked up and found all gazing at her and Ram

She observed for a min why they were staring at them, the other men were holding the towels and drying their hair themselves ..

Blood rushed to her cheeks .. she immediately withdrew her hands from him ,

Ram: Arey Priya dry it , why did you stop, he immediately pulled her by hugging her waist ..

All burst out into laughter ..

Than Ram realized they were not alone biting his tongue he came from there pulling Priya along with him as both can't stand their teasing .

Both reached their room , Ram sat on the bed  blushing away to glory

Priya sat with him blushing like a new bride ...

She closed her eyes murmured something inaudible to him .

Ram: What now ???

Priya : Nothing , she slowly got up from her position and started drying his hair.

Ram: Snaked her waist "Hmm you smell so good Priya " I love it .. he kissed her on her bare part which was visible to Ram .

Priya: Let me dry  your hair Mr. Kapoor ,kithna pareshan kar rahe ho aap..

Ram: Sighing .. dug his head more into her stomach caressed it with his face .

Priya paused her action feeling his caresses, her hands slowly snaked his head .

Ram : Kissed her navel .. With his teeth he nibbled the navel area marking red there.

Priya: Moaned high calling his name

Ram: Do you remember why you marked on my stomach?

Priya: Turned into beetroot colour by now .. she opened her eyes ,taking off the towel from his head ..

Didn't you Remember when you marked on  [ she blushed ]

Ram "I marked  here , caressing her left mound with his right hand and you know it's hidden place , no one can see it ..he winked at her.

Priya: Hawww Ram you are turning naughty day by day.

Even I have marked on stomach as you have to know the pain , It's also a hidden place , I didn't know you have this type of ritual na .

And what are you speaking with them Srinikha di was laughing like anything ,she must have understood your meaning .

Ram: No way .. I lied neatly and covered that.

Priya: Smiled .. You are such a Golu and your sister bhi Thank god Natsaha didn't get other wise don't know how badly she could have pulled my leg .

Ram : Hugged her more kissing all the while on her stomach ..

Ram pulled her more near, Priya fell on him by the impact , Ram made sure she was comfortable in his arms and he gently gave a bite on her shoulder , she moaned Rammm.

He caressed her cheeks they talked for some time ,teasing each other they enjoyed their morning banter until Rani knocked their for breakfast . 

Priya got up quickly settling her saree neatly she opened the door .

Rani : Priya di ,if your romance is over ,you and jiju come for dinner .

Priya rooted to the ground with that ,giggling Rani went from there.Both got ready reached dining table, all the while Priya downcast her eyes. Srinikha offered seat for Priya beside her , Ram too sat with her .

Srinikha served very lil amount to Priya [as how much she was capable to eat ] whispered see I made Ram's work easy . Priya gaped at her .

Srinikha :Giving a warm smile ..I have seen yesterday itself what Ram was doing , so now start your food .

Priya :Flaggerbasted a moment but smiled warmly at her ,mimed "thank you "

Ram : Observed them and smiled happily .

The super  wind passed through the KM windows ..Rishab fluttered open his eyes with a sudden throbbing headache ..

He slowly walked to the main door just than The workers came , Rishab explained them what they have to do and he warned them "Don't touch anything in the room :

By than he walked off to the garden .. He heard the guards were discussing something .

He walked back there

Guard -1: Arey bhai  Yesterday Night few of the guys threw stones and bottles calling some names ...

Guard -2 : Who were they ?

Guard -1: Must be drunken .. when  me and some other guards went with torches and guns ..they escaped from there .

Seeing Rishab,  the guards said what happened yesterday night .

Rishab's doubts now cleared that he really needs to talk with his friends and deal the matter in easy way , he doesn't want to create problems for Sowmya by making it a big issue ..

Mid afternoon almost every one was sleeping ,Srinikha , Priya and Rani  were arranging the jewelry boxes . Reema [ the lil girl ] playing there and making all stuff hell with her tiny hands .

Srinikha : Uffooo gudiyaaa,.. ye kya hai ..Rani just take her outside for sometime ,me and Priya will do the rest of the work .

Soon she went out with Reema, while going Reema made faces to the both ladies .

They smiled at the kiddo .. Srinikha asked Priya to arrange them , The shelf of  the locker was a lil bit  high . So she has to  stand on a chair and has to arrange .

While Priya was arranging the boxes Srinikha was passing and telling her how to keep .

Srinikha: Waise priya , did Ram return you the bite .

Priya: Immediately covered her  stomach area with her pallu ."what di , what bite ,I'm not able to understand what you... "

Srinikha : Smiling heartily ,Priya You don't know how to lie ,so why you are trying .

Priya: [determently ]No di , I really not understand but she was nervous 

Srinikha : Common don't be spoil sport I heard  the morning story wala bite .

Priya: Oh that .. Its his childhood friend  did. before Priya could talk further Srinikha spoke.

Srinikha: Priya please don't try to prove when I have found his favour here ,  sliding her pallu aside pointed the love bite of Ram on her navel area.

Priya cheeks turned into brilliant pink shade and her head to toe covered with the crimson red , she was speechless as she doesn't have any choice left other than surrendering to Srinikha's teasing .

Srinikha: How he will leave you ,when you are equally teamed up with him

Priya: whispered"  di wo " ,while her looks downcast the floor ..

Srinikha: Keeping her hand on Priya's neck , before coming out of room try to cover his love bites ,she dragged her blouse a bit near to her neck, Priya settled her blouse covering his mark.

Priya: Now flushed to the core ,she  doesn't know what she should do ,she tried to go away from there ...

Srinikha :Stopped her , "Ram isn't there in your room   "

Priya: Looked at her ,her cheeks coloured up brilliant pink shade already

Where he went ..

Srinikha: Haaa  he is getting back pain it seems, so he went out for refreshing himself .

Priya: Back pain[with haw expression]  ...why?? He didn't tell me.

Srinikha  wickedly smiled as her tricks were correctly playing.

Where he will tell Priyaaa "Raat bhar uski biwi ne use sone nahi diya tho, obviously he will get back pain na"

Priya: She gaped at her .."  Diii .". You are really "aisa kuch nahi hua, Infact he hasn't allowed me to sleep ...

Srinikha: Ye hui na baath ..are wah how you are blushing

Priya: Bit her tongue , di It's not like what you thinking , I meant  Riddi slept with us , In that small bed ..before her lines.

Srinikha: You people didn't get proper meet up hai na ,she winked at priya

Now Priya face turned into a red tomato that could blast anytime .

Srinikha: Smiled at her blushing and discomfort. Toh can I hear some sweet romantic stories of you please.

Priya: Disbelievingly lifted her head ,seeing Srinikha di smiling "Gawwdd di aap kitne pareshan kare rahe hai ,Ram is better than you "

Srinikha : Yeah yeah Ram is better than me because he will give pleasure to you na

Priya: Now she flushed more ,Now Its hard to take all these teasing "Di I will leave now "

Srinikha: Arey sit na ,Lets Ram's back pain be relieved na

Priya; Pdiii ..she couldn't say anything else, she rushed out from there ,she didn't see who was coming she hit someone hard ,when two strong arms held her securely ,her heartbeat became normal she held him for support .

She said "sorry Mr.Kapoor woh maine nahi dekha"

By that time Srinikha joined "I know you two can't live without each other but this tight hugs are not allowed in home "

Both broke apart , Ram smiled broadly , Priya was blushing like anything by now .

Ram: Bhabhi , Why you called ??

Srinikha: Just like that , may be you haven't seen your wife this much blushing

Ram: Gazed at her ,Indeed she was blushing ,her cheeks turned up into a bright pink shade .

Ram: Immediately understood she might have teased Priya , he hugged from side toh you are teasing my wife ha .

Now Priya gazed at him trying to free from his hug .

Srinikha: Raheno do Priya , waise you two "Bade Achhae Lagte Hain "

Srinikha handed a set to Ram asked her to adore Priya with it .It was simple and elegant one .

Srinikha made Priya sit on the bed Ram adorned her with the simple set .

Priya: Di Why ... Ram sshed her

Srinikha : You are looking beautiful Priya, waise from first you are beautiful but now I think you two need to go to your room .

Thaki my devar can tel you how beautiful you are ..

Ram: Astonished with the comment .. he couldn't say any except smiling slightly .

Priya closed her eyes with embarrassment . God please help me... she prayed to god .

Luckily someone called Srinikha . she  went telling 10 mins ..

Priya: Ufff she was relieved a bit.

Ram: Caressing her hair , Kya hua?

Priya : You don't know how di was teasing me,  I told you don't do on expose parts, but you will do exactly that others can pin point of your craziness.

Ram : Ab kya hua ..

Priya: Showing where he gave love bite on her, di has seen it

Ram: Then you should cover up like this na,dragging her blouse near to her neck .

Priya: Mr.Kapoor aap bhi na 

Meanwhile Srinikha came with some snacks, so what's up guys , come out from your romantic mood and tell me about your love story .

Both smiled at her . There is no love story Bhabhi aap tang mat kar na Priya ko [Priya hit her hand on her head ]

Srinikha:hayee hayeee  KIthna caring hai Ram, I just went for 10 mins in this gap Priya has told what happening from past 1 hour .. Greatt

Ram :bit his tongue .. Please bhabhi ... He got up from the bed walked near to window ...

Srinikha was talking something about the marriage and rituals ..Suddenly Ram's eyes fell on a beautiful fruitful Mango tree .

Ram: Bhabhi is it eatable Mango tree not that pickle wala..

Srinikha : ha its tooo sweet wala bhi like your love

Priya: Reallly ..Is there Mango tree? She was excited like a kid and briskly walked past him . She saw from the window .

It's a very lovely tree , OMG there are fruits also ...

Mr. Kapoor I want them please please get one for me na please , she tugged his arm

Srinikha: Laughed at her childishness and excitement . Priya do you like mangoes?

Priya: Turning to her yes very much di ..From long back I have a wish

Ram: Continuing her words , she so want to eat freshly just plucking up from tree.

Srinikha: Haye haye what a magical bond you have . Priya wait for a min and she abruptly went and came with in few mins with mangoes in a plate .

Priya: Oh my god di you already have these .

Srinikha: Neatly cutting into pieces .Ha today itself the gardener has plucked all the mangoes otherwise these kids are plucking and throwing them she smiled sweetly giving her pieces .

Priya enjoyed the  delicious sweetness of mangoes listening to their family talk she enjoyed her noon .

Evening there is Mehendi ceremony going one all were enjoying to the fullest .

Priya was claded in a cream colour saree ,she opened her hair ,made curls at the end , she adorned her forehead  & maang with sindhoor , she was wearing her bangles Ram joined with her wearing cream colour kurtha with maroon studded stones at his collar .Both were equally complementing each other .

She adjusted his kurtha ,properly brushed his hair neatly while he snaked his hands on her waist slowly giving tentative circles .

Mr. Kapoor please I have to leave for mehendi function don't start which you can't end in mins .

Ram smiled hearing it . Suddenly they felt someone tugging them, Reema claded in a beautiful blue gaghra wearing almost all the jewelry ,she is looking choo pretty .

Oh my ...swetty Reema is looking so sweet lifting her in her hands kissing her on her cheeks .

Reema smiled broadly ,Badeee dadi is calling you ... She spoke in her cuty voice .Ram laughed loud and took her in his arms , squeezed her a lil kissed her cheeks ..You are looking like a small aloo parantha I want to eat you up ,

Reema: Ewww wiping her cheeks .. Aunty he will eat me take me she stretched her hands to Priya.

Priya smiled heartily seeing the kid's astonishment when he said he will eat up .she took her in her hands .all the three gotdown from the stairs

All the people looked at the threesome they were looking divine to them , They were glistering in cream colour and the lil diva was dazzling in blue colour and the three look like a family. Krishnaji, Sudhira& Shipra wiped a lone tear from their eyes as their heart tugged for the unborn twins of Raya.

Soon the mehendi ceremony started . Priya was sitting with the brides , she was looking at them with awww .They were looking so cute and very very Identical to her.and she was bowled with their cuteness . After sometime she asked their mother

Aunty "How you will remember who is honey and who is bunny "

The twin brides laughed at her question .

Honey : Bhabhi even we will surprise  how she will recognize us .Few times we will make her confuse but still she will recognize us .

Bunny : Ha when she said correctly also ,we used to pull her leg ,as I'm Honey she is bunny both giggled at their naughtiness .

Aunty : Ma hu na priya ,I can recognize ..

Priya smiled at the answer she gazed at the twins , keep kalatikka for them .

Srinikha dragged Priya with her , she applied mehendi in her hands.

Priya: Di how beautifully you are making the design, where did you learn?

Srinikha: Thank you ,Its My hobby but after entering this family every month some or other function will be there so I used to try on ..By now I became perfect.

Priya: Smiled perfect nahi di ,you became professional mehendi designer telling this she side hugged her .

Srinikha completed with in 30 mins.  Priya's both hands were  filled with very graceful design.

Priya: Looked the design she blushed profusely "Diii " What is this

Srinikha: Wickedly smiled at her ,when your love has no bounds then why can't I show in my designs ..Priya blushed again

Srinikha: Whispered in her ear ,Priya if you are blushing this much How My devar is managing you I don't understand ..

Priya: Matlab

Srinikha:" At nights" she wickedly smiled and winked at her

Priya: Please diii

Ram came with the food plate , Oh my god bhabhi what are you doing to Priya ,she is blushing from head to toe .

Mr. Kapooor... Priya glared at him .

Srinikha went from there leaving them alone

Ram: show me your hands ,Karthik came in time ..Di show the design please

Nuts came there showing her hands Karthik went with her to show to their son .

Common Priya why you are not showing ,she blushed again .

You are killing me with your blush baby ...Ram whispered in her ear

Priya :I will show later please ..

Ram didn't pester her any more ,he fed her  ,they both ate talking about the marriage and mostly Priya talked about twins with him

Suppressing his dying emotions he fed her and he too had his dinner .

 

 

Edited by luvsakshi - 2014-07-05T09:15:57Z
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Posted: 2014-07-05T09:20:41Z
Hiii Neel whats up??? UPDATE YAAR
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Posted: 2014-07-05T09:20:59Z
TongueIts an awesome update I know as preview was superb..just will e back wid full comment

 
Writer garu thanks for all those readers who give you suggestions.

OMG
OMG
OMG 
What an update.. 

Full of love.. 
From first to last Priya was blushing and how much teasing re..no one can stand really.. 

Srinikha was..deyyvudaaa...

Ram ka tho he is too naughty..and coz of his naughty nature Priya is like normal like pehle jaisa..am so happy for them.

Coming to update..
The beginning was last part's ending and felt my lips grinning with the lines again... 

And Ram na bahuth besharam hogaya hai...how he was utilising the situtation...Lage raho Ram.. 

And the massage ke baad woh Priya drying up his air was aweee...

Both were blushing..seriously they forgot surroundings totally..

And room main romance was fresh after bath was so good...

Rani and Srinikha everyone enjoying teasing these love birds..
ThankGod Srinikha served sufficient for Priya..

Ab yeh Rishab friends ko na..

Reema...LOL

Srinikha now got a lucky chance..how much she teased baap re..Priya bechari... Ram bhi cant help her. But it was really so god and oh my how she was teasing..
Backache..sone nahi diya...Oh my Oh my... 

And in room too she didnt leave..

And mangoes..yeh kya hai..but I know why and from where mango part came..

And the couple were looking great re..really RaYa the most beautiful couple on earth... 

Hmm Reema ko unke saath dekhkar hmm..

And Mehendi function mein bhi Srinikha did some thing thats why Priya is sooo shy..

Loved the part too much when Ram fed her as she has mehendi...and gulping his pain...

Ufff..why you wanna kill with such splendid updates..
Cant talk re...its really priceless and am a proud reader and fan of this Sirf Meri Ho...

Thank you sooo much for the update.. 

Thanks for pm

Edited by armanz - 2014-07-05T10:41:41Z
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Posted: 2014-07-05T09:21:52Z
Originally posted by armanz


Hiii Neel whats up??? UPDATE YAAR


Ha Viji ,
She is going to update Tongue
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Posted: 2014-07-05T09:22:05Z
Lol This madam was too much
Itns teasing koi karta hain
loved RaYa romance
Priya must be in all shades of Red
Priya is blessed to have such perfect Husband and bful family I wish every girl is lucky as priya in all
Edited by iLuvRamKapoor - 2014-07-06T01:18:04Z
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Posted: 2014-07-05T09:23:52Z
Originally posted by luvsakshi


Originally posted by rosinagoor


Originally posted by luvsakshi


Originally posted by rosinagoor


Cute & Nice Preview Wink
Continue soon Day Dreaming



Awww why did you read 
you told you wont read Confused  

will update by tonight 
Thank you 


Arre i feels upset re
so i read Preview
Sorry Wink

Hey thats okay Tongue
Why sorry ... I just aasked 

Actually i read After i finished my fasting re
so no problemTongue
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