Praja love nver end (Ss) <3 (part 12 updated) +note on pg 27 - Page 2

Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome start ..update soon and welcome
Posted: 9 years ago
Hey, first of all amazing os, second just update it asap and third be my new buddy! 😊
Posted: 9 years ago
amazing story ...
please cont soon and do PM me when you update :)


- Anjori
Posted: 9 years ago
Praja love nver end <3
Part-2
In kumbalgarh d war is gng on..pratap is saved frm akbar's war due to ajab's shivji mala ..rao mamrakh reaches nd save us frm maldev..
Us-Roa mamrakhji aap yaha..(shocked nd happy)
Mm-ji ranaji humne aur humare parivar ne sdev mevar ki har sankat m raksha ki hai..humne aur humare parivar ne sdev humara dharm aur mirtha nibhayi hai toh aaj hum piche kse hat sakthe the
Us-kintu raoji humne toh aapke putri ka itna aapmaan kiya aap fir bhi..
Mm-ji ranaji phir bhi hum aapki shayata karna chate hai is dharm yudh m keval matrbhoomi ko bachne hetu aur dharm k vijay hetu hum aapki shayat karna chate hai..
(mm trying to hide his anger..bcoz he knw hw deeply his daughter luv pratap)
Us-thik hai raoji..
Rm-(us ki aur apni talwar k saath badthe hue) us chaye aaj koi bhi aapka saath de kintu vijay to humari hogi
Us-Rm dharm ki sadev jeet hui hai aur adharm ki har..isliye is dharm yudh m bhi dharm ki hi jeet hogi. aur adharmiyo ka naash
(us nd mm start's fighting nd defending themselves frm rm)
P-dajiraj bachiye..(marwar k ek saink ko piche se us par hamla kar the hue dekh pratap chilate hai..pratap ki chik sun Mm us ko bachathe hai )
Us-danywaad raoji..
Mm-ji
(nd they start's fighting nd defending each other frm rm nd marwar saink)
Mm-usji aap rao maldev ko sambaliye hum in marwar k sainkiko sambal the hai
Us-ji raoji
(mm fight wid marwar saink nd us goes to rm..)
Akb-pratap... phele ekbar toh tum bach gaye humse lekin aaj hum tumhe jinda nahi chodege..
P-dekhlenge..
(nd akbar nd pratap starts fighting wid each other)
(BG music koi na teri is maati p bhoomi p kadam bhi na rak sakhe...maharana khelaunga)
In Bijolia..hansabai try's to calm dwn ajab..
Hm-Shant..Shant ho jayeye ajab..ek lingji par barosa rakhiye v sab thik karenge..
A-(so worried) Kse Shaant ho jaye hum ma..wo durth mughal kuwar pratap par piche se war karne wale hai..aur aap khe rahi hain hum shaant ho jaye..
(In kumbalgarh mevar win's..but kuwar pratap nd us get's badly injured..mm somehow convice us nd pratap to cum to bijolia fort as they were badly injured in war..)
In bilojia,
Hm-raoji gaye hai na..aur dekhna ek lingji kuwar pratap aur mevar ko kuch nahi hone denge..dekhna mevar hi vijay ptaka (flag) ferayega
A-(praying to lord krishna) khanaji kare aapne jsa kha hai waisa hi ho (nd suddenly she's feel that nw everything is ok)
Bijolia jasus enty
J-khamagari maharanisa..ek khush kabar hai..kuwar pratap ne akbar ko hra diya hai aur rana us ne marwar ko hra diya hai hukum (mm)ki shayat se..
(Hm nd Ajab both together says kya nd ther's big smile on both face)
J-kintu..
Hm-kintu...(wid worried face)kya hua rukh kyu gaye..boliye..
J-kintu maharanisa kuwar pratap aur ranaji bohot ghayal ho gaye is yudh m aur raoji unke saath bijolia mahal padhar rahe hai
A-(in shocking voice) kya..(a tear fall frm her eye) yeh kya khe rahe hai aap..
(hm tells jasus to go)
J-khamagari ranisa(folds his hand nd leaves)
Hm-apne aapko sambaliye ajab..sab thik hai mevarne yudh m vijay prapt ki hai..
A-ma yeh sach hai is yudh m mevar ki vijay hui hai..kintu ranaji aur kuwarsa bohot ghayal hai..hum kse chinta na kare
Hm-shant ajab..ksiko kuch nahi hoga..khanaji p barosa rakhiye
(nd suddenly a sound cum's frm outside of mehal..maharaj rana us aur kuwar pratap k saath padhar rahe hai )
Hm-(wid aarthi thal )bohot bohot badhai nd does vijay thilak..
Mm-(call's dasi n says) athi sigrthase rajvedji ko bulaye..
(in sabse dur ajab ki aankhe kuwar pratap ko dhoond rahi thi but she can't see him nd us notice ajab searching for kuwar pratap ajab see's twrd's entrance nd notice dat sum one is walking 2rwd's mahal entrance..she notice him cumig closer..as he get's closer nd closer d view was cleard nd suddenly ajab has big smile on her face knwing dat O yes it's kuwar pratap..)
Mm-kuwar pratap aap thik toh hai..
P-ji raoji (answere's wid smile..as he was half cured seeing ajab infornt of him nd seeing big smile on ajab face wen he entered bijolia mahal)
Us-(calling pratap say's)kuwar pratap aap..(us notice the praja eyelock nd feel's guilty thinking as it's jst bcoz of him dat praja is not 2gether nd think of staying quiet for sum min)
(BG music Dard mere woh bhula hi gaya kuch
aisa asar huya,
Jeena mujhe phirse woh sikha raha
Hmm jaise baarish kar de tar, ya marham dard
par
Koi mujhko yun mila hai, jaise banjare ko ghar
Naye mausam ki sehar, ya sard mein dopahar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai, jaise banjare ko
ghar)
P-(breaking d eyelock first) feel's happy seeing
ajab care nd concern for him..he was loving this
ajab who was so worried for him..so he decides
to ignore nd spook her(jst to see ajab caring for
him)
A-still thinking nd worried( hey khanaji humare
kuwar pratap ko kitne gav (wound) aaye
hai..unhe kitni pidha ho rahi hogi nd suddenly
she has awkward feeling nd break's eyelock nd
cum's to sense..
Mm-ranaji ,kuwar pratap aaye padhariye
mahal m...
Us-ji raoji..(call's kuwar pratap)
(ajab pratap ko dekh k muskhaarti hai kintu
pratap unhe undekha kar dete hai aur aapne
dajiraj k saath mahal m pravesh kar the
hai..but pratap turn's back too see ajab nd
smiles)
A-(confused nd worried) abh inhe kya hua..
Precap-praja nok jok...ajab aaplying medicine
on pratap wound)
thnku frnds for lovely comments..means a lot..thank u so much..hope u ll enjoy reading 2nd pt πŸ₯±πŸ˜Š
Edited by hina931 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
πŸ‘πŸΌsuper duper like... amazing story πŸ‘ i hope iska 10% b CV's follow kr le tho boht badi baat ho jayegi.πŸ˜ƒ anywayz waiting 4 ur nxt update.Edited by Roshinikr - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
hayeee!!!!!πŸ‘πŸ˜³
its just too good ... awww my ajab πŸ˜³ bechari will be so confused ... and pratap πŸ˜³πŸ˜³
i'm eagerly waiting for next update ...
prAja nok jhok 
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome waiting. ..for the next
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome too good waiting for next asap
Posted: 9 years ago
nice,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ
update soon,,,,,,,,,,
Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it...plzzz update the next part soon...!

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