Originally posted by: ...Jes...Celu.. βΊοΈ thank u for posting me bachcha! π€
ab kya bolun main? βΊοΈ back hug,kiss and all moments ..βΊοΈ
totally loved it..π€π€ keep writing Tum,Hum wil be wiating! β€οΈ
Originally posted by: poulomi12Nicely written, as always.π
Very well done, with lucid description of the surrounding.βΊοΈOne Small Mistake: The song contains Urdu words like Isq, Masoom, galti, dil, etc.π³
Originally posted by: Madhuras_RuleBLUSH!!BLUSH!!BLUSH!!!
OK now its over now I will not blush anymore (telling this to myself) but I can't stop π³ π³ π³
celi π€ͺ π€ͺ this was so...Romantic π³ π³ π³
hugs ahh...I am still drooling and the beat thing was the first KISSS... I stopped and read that part again to conform what I read was correct and yes it was she gave a peck on his lips yippee
Now, you write very well so promise me you will never describe your work with that word 'crap' and throw tomatoes on you OH please tamatar bohot mehenge he celi π π seriously I will never throw tomatoes or...all the vegetables you mentioned for such a awesome work by you .
Keep Writing
lots and lots of love
Madhura
Originally posted by: sweta2005awesomeee too good very nice part lovelyyy shotπ³
Originally posted by: NethravathiKaash aisa ho pata serial meinπππ
Originally posted by: jyotic74Celu liked it super awesome ..read it twice..in the AT for you I had updated the entire song one of my favourite. ...loved it ..
Keep writing
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