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That was awesome.
Loved it.
cont. soon.

You absolutely must continue!!! Right now, lol. I love it. Very exciting and different and smart. This could be very very interesting. Cannot wait to see how their relationship builds from here.

It is a nice concept.. Do write more... It will be nice to see protective Rudra again...its been a long time since that avatar appeared on the show...😛

Totally love this! U must continue

Lovely intro ..
Would love to read more <3

This seems very interesting and if the CVs for RR had written the story your way, the show may not have been so dark, it would have been balanced I think...which could have garnered TRPs. 

Awesome 

Pls continue...can't wait to see our usual paro, damsel in distress and rudra, the knight in BSD uniform

simply superb
loved it
loving the story;