MG OS - Timetable Love???? Pt 2 on pg-10 by valli30..plz read

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Posted: 2014-06-06T03:30:51Z




Hello friends ...I am here again with another OS...this is strictly an OS...unlike my other story...I always loved Talli geet in GHSP...it is one of my fav episodes...and DD nailed it...so I wanted to write something on talli geet for many days...so here is my idea...hope u will enjoy...plz tell me how it is...

 

 

 

 

  

Geet and pinky are cousins and came for the birthday party of their common friend pari...

 

Geet - pinky aaj kuch bhi hojaye main yeh karke rahungi. ...she started cribbing...as all her friends are making fun of her ...

 

Pinky mocked at her sipping her drink...

 

Geet - Tum dekhti jao...she said again aaj kuch bhi karke uss khadus Khurana ko batadungi ki main uss se shaadi Nahi karungi...

 

She cribbed for some more time...see now all these are making fun of me because of him...mujhe shaadi Nahi Karni unse...main aaj mama aur papa ko bhi boldungi...Haa Woh mujhse naraz hojayenge...par main unhe mana loongi... shayad kuch din baat Nahi karenge...sehloongi...Lekin uss KK se shaadi hargiz Nahi karungi...heet said with determination...

 

Pinky - tum rehne do geet...u can't do it...tum mein itni himmat hi nahi hai ki tum mana kar sako...tum MK aur apne parents se kabhi bhi keh Nahi paogi...agar kehna hota toh kab ka keh chuki hoti...abhi kuch Nahi hosakta...

 

Geet gave a determined look to her and went to a sound free zone and called Adi...maan's right hand...

 

Geet - helloo... Adi main geet bol rahi hoon...tumhara Woh boss Mr. KK (khadus Khurana) I mean Mr.  MK kaha hain...

 

Adi - he he he...with his typical laugh ... aur kaha honge geet , maan sir toh office mein hi hain...Woh abhi bhi KAAM karr rahe hain...he said stressing the work Kaam...

 

Geet rolled her eyes thinking why even she called Adi... it was an easy guess... it's obvious that Mr. KK will be in office only...

 

Geet - theek hai Adi...bye...

 

Adi - geet ruko ruko...

 

Geet - Haan bolo Adi...

 

Adi - tum log kaha ho...

 

Geet - Adi aaj Pari ka birthday hain , main aur pinky all night  mein hain...

 

Adi - mere bina enjoy karr rahe ho...

 

Geet - to kisne kaha ki Saturday ko bhi kaam karo...

 

Adi - geet yeh tum bhul rahi ho...main tumhara MAAN ke yaha kaam  karta hoon...

 

Geet - toh jake kaho tumhare maan sir ko...ki geet unse milne aaraha hai...as she got angry on hearing tumhara maan...

 

And she cut the call angrily...she turned around to go inside...and saw pinky standing there...

 

Geet dragged pinky inside and sat at her usual place...and it  slowly dawned to her that she told Adi to inform maan that she is coming to meet Maan ... and she started panicking...

 

Geet - pinky yeh Maine Kya kardiya ... babaji ... mujhe bachao and she started crying...main Kya Karoon...aawww...

 


Pinky who is fed up with geet's ranting about the marriage and her disagreement...and also geet's fear of maan looked at her angrily she got up and went to the counter and ordered a drink...she got the drink...she came to geet and offered the drink ...Geet isse pilo thoda tension kam hojayega...geet who was still cursing herself drank it without questioning ...geet liked it...and wanted another...pinky got her one more...and geet demanded one more...as the drink started to make her fly... pinky yeh kaunsa drink hain...bohut acha hai...mujhe bohut light feel horaha hai...I have a feeling that I am flying...pinky main udd rahi hoon...pinky panicked hearing geet's words...she took the drink forcefully as geet was not giving her glass...and tasted it...



OMG...yeh Maine Kya karr diya...thought pinky...I thought it was a simple drink...but yeh kaha se aagaya...main toh gayi kaam se aaj toh...maan mujhe Nahi chodega...ab main Kya Karoon...she also started panicking...she thought of calling Adi and explain...she pulled geet and went out...she called Adi and told him about geet...after a small discussion...Adi asked pinky to drop geet at office...as he thought maan needs to know geet's opinion about him...and geet will not be able to open her heart in normal condition...

 

Pinky took geet to maan's office...pinky went in and said about geet's condition...she explained him that the drinks got exchanged and now geet is not in her senses...she couldn't control geet alone and feared take her to Handa House in that condition...

 

Maan asked to leave...main dekh lunga geet ko...you go back...he called Adi and asked him to drop pinky...and go home...Adi and pinky went away...

 

Geet sat quietly on the couch as maan told her to sit in the room adjacent to his cabin...it is a seperate room with a single bed and a couch...Maan uses it when he spends night in office...Geet sat quietly...MSK effect...maan sat there started to complete his work...

 

But her drink over took her senses and she forgot every thing...she started humming ...and then started singing loudly in a besura voice disturbing maan...maan was shocked to see geet like that...he always saw her in a timid manner...he had never seen her talking loudly...but now she is singing...( maan babu ab tak tumne geet ko dekha hi kaha hai)...

 

She slowly called him...maan...maan looked at her then turned to his work and said... ...bolo geet...

 

Mujhe aapse kuch kehna hain...geet said in a murmur...Kya kehna hain geet ...Jaldi bolo mujhe kaam hain...that's it...geet was irritated now...she looked up and complained...babaji...har waqt kaam kaam aur kaam...maan looked at her...she is looking upwards and talking something to her self...he found it annoying...and called... .geet...

 

She looked at him annoyed...Kya hai...she asked...

 

Maan was irritated...he has to complete the file today itself...or else he will have to go to the meeting without the file...and it is not at all acceptable to him...it was because of his lazy staff he has to do the work this late...the file which has to be on his table a couple of days earlier...it came to him today and he cannot do much as the girl who had to do the file met with an accident and he had to face the consequences...he turned to geet and said...tumne hi kaha na ki kuch kehna hain mujhse...




Geet giggled and slapped her forehead and said...main bhi na maan...  Bhool gayi ...aap ko dekh karr sab bhul jaanti hoon...and she again laughed...at her silly joke...



Maan was looking at her...he could see admiration in her eyes...he knew he did a right thing by choosing geet as his life partner...though his mother was disappointed as maan chose geet over his mothers choice... meera...but geet is his dadi and dad's choice...his mother has selected a meera shergill her friends daughter...she was from a well to do family...well educated and a doctor by profession but somehow he couldn't connect with her  when he met her on his mothers insistence ...and then he met geet... geet is his dad's friend Mr. Inder Handa's daughter...Rajeev and Inder are friends from collage...when geet was born Rajeev fell in love with the innocent angel and announced that this new born girl would be his bahu ... though till few months back maan and geet were unaware of the decision by Rajeev... Inder and Rajeev told maan and geet about it and but didn't push them...they left the decision on maan and geet only...maan agreed  to meet her...and when he met her he understood why his father loved her so much...she is not only beautiful she loving and caring and has every quality he wanted in his wife ...and most important thing is he felt an unknown bond with her...he felt she will stand by him in every phase of life...and maan said yes after first meeting itself...rajeev's happiness knew no bounds and geet's father was elated...and for keeping that happiness on his fathers face geet agreed as should count not find any fault in maan...he is well educated , well settled and he has everything a girl dream off and upon all these he is her father's choice...so geet without any other thoughts agreed...

 

 He came out of his thoughts and asked with a soft voice...bolo geet...Kya baat hai...

 

Geet - Nahi chodo...aap gussa hojaoge...aur mama papa bhi...she said sadly...

 

Maan was confused with geet's reply and said main gussa Nahi karunga...ab bolo...

 

Geet - Sach mein gussa Nahi karoge...geet asked unsure even in that state of mind...

 

Maan was running out of time and turning to his work again said  geet ab bolo...mere paas zyaada time Nahi hai...mujhe yeh presentation check karna hai aur Naye project ki blue prints bhi...aur ghar bhi Jana hai...Kal subah site ke liye nikal na hain...tum Jaldi bologi toh acha hoga...maan said his busy schedule...



That's it...geet got into her sherni mode..she climbed onto the couch andsaid in a tipsy voice...yehi hain meri problem Mr. Khurana...aur mujhe aapse shaadi Nahi Karni...suna aapne ...I don't want to marry you...Maine tab papa ke liye Haa boldly a...par ab mujhse Nahi hoga...


 


Maan looked at her bewildered...is she mad...she is refusing to marry me...The MSK...who is the uncrowned king of the construction world...nobody dare to say anything in front of him and how many proposals he'd had rejected before geet until dadi and dad's came with geet's proposal...here she is refusing to marry him...

 

Maan made her stood up harshly and said - what!...are you out of ur mind ...do you know what are u saying...marriage is just a few days away and u are saying this now...I am not going to let u do anything geet...that will effect the image of khuranas and handas...

 

The drink she had had effected completely...she is not in her senses...

 

Geet - aap samjhte kyun Nahi hain...mujhe phir se school mein Nahi jaana...

 

Now maan confirmed that geet has gone mad...and the drink whatever she had has shown its effect fully...geet tumhe school mein kaun bhej raha hai...tum shaadi ki baat karr rahi thi na toh school ki baat kaha se aagayi...



Geet looked into his eyes and said ...mujhe Sach mein school Nahi jaana...

 

Maan was irritated now ...geet theek se bolo...Kya school...kaunsa school...mujhe irritate mat karo...

 

Geet said...mujhe MSK ke school mein Nahi jaana samjhte aap she said showing her big eyes to him...maan was lost in those hazels for a second but came back after hearing MSK school...

 

Maan - main koi school Nahi chalta hoon geet...toh tum school mein kyun jaaoogi...

 

Geet - Nahi aap school chalale hain...main jaanti hoon...papa ne mujhse kaha hai...

 

Maan thought... now what did dad tell to her...

 

Geet - mujhe maloom hain ...aap MSK school ke one man army hain...aap hi principal ho...aap hi teacher ho...sab kuch aap hi ho uss school ke...Jo har kaam time pe karte hain...aur doosre logonse karate bhi hain...pehle jaagna... By 5.30...phir Jim at 6... phir family tea at 7... .phir breakfast...at 8.30...phir office. At 9...phir lunch...phir high tea...then dinner and then sleep...sab time pe karna padta hain...yeh school Nahi toh Kya hai...school mein bhi toh sab time pe hota haina...issiliye mujhe school Nahi jaana...said geet and sat on the couch with her legs crossed...

 

Maan was seeing her like an alien...he thought...yeh geet Sach mein pagal hogayi hai...yeh bhi koi wajah hai shaadi mana Karne ke liye...yeh sab uss drink ka asar hain...uss pinky ko main chodunga nahi...pata Nahi Kya pila diya hai meri bholi bhali geet ko...

 

Main aapse shaadi Nahi karungi...Nahi karungi...Nahi karungi...geet again said...



 

Maan came out of his thoughts and said...aisa kuch Nahi hain geet...main bas time ka pakka hoon...mujhe aise hi Pasand hain ...main bas punctual hoon...maan said...

 

Aur Jo main Nahi hoon...said geet...toh hum kaise shaadi karsakte hain maan...hum to do opposite ends hai...she stretched her hands in two directions..and said like this...toh boliye...hum kaise shaadi karsakte hain...aap bhi mana kardo...Haa ...yehi theek rahega...agar main manadap mein 2 minute late aayi uss din ki tarah toh aap waha se bhi chale jaaoge...isse toh aur badnami hogi na maan...isse acha yehi hain...aap bhi mana kardo...she said ...

 

Maan sat beside her with one leg folded turning towards her he asked...kis din ki baat karr rahi ho geet...main samjha Nahi...

 

Geet pouted...dekha aapko yaad bhi Nahi hain...maan wanted to pull her checks,...she looked so adorable with the baby pout...uss din jab hum apni engagement ring khareedne Gaye the...aur main 10 min late aayi aur aap waha se chalegaye...Maine hi ring select kiya hum dono ke liye tab...main traffic mein phas gayi aur 10 min late aayi...aur aake dekha toh aap Nahi the waha...sirf mamma aur mom the...aise bhi koi karta hain Kya...main kitni sochi thi thi ki hum dono milke select kare hamari  engagement ring...joki hamari rishte ki shuruwaat thi...aur pehle kadam mein hi mere Saath Nahi the...Maine socha tha ki main aapki Pasand ki ring pehungi aur aap meri...Lekin aapne Woh bhi Nahi hone diya...a tear escaped from her eye remembering  the day...

 

Maan looked at her...seeing her one tear he felt bad very bad...he never knew that his absence would make this impact on her...he went away that day as he has to attend a very important meeting which was preponed suddenly as the client was going abroad and the client wanted to meet him before going...so when his secretary informed him...he immediately left for the meeting...he never knew ki ek chotisi ring selection geet ke liye itni khas hogi...indeed she was right...Woh unke rishte ki shuruwaat thi aur  pehla kadam geet ne akeli hi liya hai...he felt bad now...he wished he could turn the clock back and be there for geet on that time...

 


Maan said...Aisa Nahi hain geet...main har kadam pe tumhara Saath hoon...

 

Geet again said...nahi hai...bhul Gaye engagement wale din Kya hua...she again reminded him...she said...main kitni excited thi...mujhe aapse baat Karne ka mauka milega...main apni baatein aapse share karoongi...lekin aisa kuch bhi Nahi hua...aapne toh mujhse theek se baat bhi Nahi ki...Maine kitna try kiya par aap toh apne phone mein busy the ...aur uss din bhi aap Kisi client se baat karr rahe the...Arre hamari engagement hui aur aap kahi aur busy the...mujhe toh theek se dekha bhi Nahi...Maine kitni mehnat ki tayyar hone mein...sirf aapke liye hi saji Mai aur aapne dekha bhi Nahi...apne aise dekha jaise roz dekhte hain...ek chotisi compliment bhi Nahi diya...she pouted and showed a little with her fingers and said itni bhi Nahi...and turned her head...maan held his head...main Kya Karoon geet sab important meetings tabhi aagaye...aur main unhe past pone Nahi kar saka aur site par bhi labourers ki kuch problem aagayi...aur jo engagement mein aaye unhe bhi toh milna haina...he explained her...sab problems tabhi Aate hai jab main aapke Saath hoti hoon...haina ...geet asked...

 


Nahi aisa Nahi hai geet maan tried to justify...aap na rehne do maan...main samajh gayi aapne  papa ka mann rakh ne ke liye Haa kaha...aap ko mujh mein koi interest hi Nahi hain...she said crying ...

 

Maan held his head ab main isse kaise samjhaoon...Maine shaadi ke liye Haa is liye kaha kyun ki tum mujhe Pasand ho geet...tumhe dekhne ke baad mujhe koi aur ladki mein interest hi Nahi raha...isse toh yehi prove hua na ki tum mujhe bohut Pasand ho...

 

Sach mein...aapko main Pasand hoon...she asked ...then continued ...toh phir aaj tak aapne mujhe ek chotisi kiss bhi Nahi diya ya liya...she asked innocently...maan was shocked beyond words...he never thought geet would ask such a thing this directly...but geet was in her own world...she continued...pata hain mere friends ne kaha ki boys ko toh Bahana chahiye ladki ke paas aane ki...par aapne toh mujhe theek se dekha bhi Nahi...

 

Maan - geet tum yeh Kya baat karr rahi ho...aur tum un sab se door raho Jo tumhe yeh bakwas sunate hain ...samjhi...

 

Geet - geet started to wail...dekha ...school mein abhi aayi bhi Nahi abhi se punishment shuru...is liye mujhe school Nahi jaana...MSK school...and she turned to other side...

 

Maan held his head...ab kaise samjhaoon geet ko...he thought for a while and said...dekho geet ...jaisi tum soch rahi how aisa kuch bhi Nahi hain...rahi engagement ring ki baat...I am truly sorry... Us din client ne meeting pro-pone kiya...main kuch Nahi kar saka...aur engagement ke din...Maine bohut try kiya tumse akeli mein baat Karne ki...Lekin koi mujhe time hi Nahi diya...papa ne aur dad ne apne saare clients aur friends ko bulaya hai...aur sab mujhse milna chahte the...main papa aur dad ko kaise mana karsakta hoon...



Geet -  Haa papa aur dad ko kaise mana karsakte hain...phir bhi aapne mujhe ignore kiya...she said and turned her face...

 

Maan was losing his patience...he was unable to convince geet...if it was somebody else he would have not even listened to the person...but with geet he could not take the risk..and it suddenly occurred to him that geet's mom and dad might be worried for her...so he thought I will call home and tell them that geet is with him...

 

He went a little far and called Inder and told him about geet being with him...and he promised to take care of her and drop her safely...

 

He turned to see geet standing on the couch with her hands on her waist...kisse baat karr rahe the aap...mujhse chup chup ke...

 

Maan - tumhare papa se hi baat ki Maine aur unse kaha ki tum mere Saath ho...

 

Geet panicked and sat down with a thud...papa...I didn't tell him that I am going to meet him...sab aapki galati hai...and she started her bak bak again...

 

Maan was going mad...how could she blame him when he doesn't know about her landing here in drunken state...the left over patience went away and he pulled geet up and said...geet meri baat suno...jaisi tum soch rahi ho waise kuch bhi Nahi hain...main tumse hi shaadi karna Chahta hoon...I really like you...jab tumhe pehli baar dekha tabhi mujhe laga ki tum meri ho...to yeh baat samajh lo main tumse hi shaadi karoonga...aur waqt bhi doongi tumhe chahte kuch bhi hojaaye...

 

Geet ...theek hain phir Woh school...

 

Maan - geet school ki baat Nahi hain...bas dad apni dawayiyan Nahi lete aur excercise bhi  nahi karte...issiliye Maine yeh sab kiya...shaadi ke baad tum Jo Chalo Woh karsakti ho...jaise chahe rehsakti ho...ab chup chap baitho...

 

Maan made geet sit down and went to his desk and started winding up his work, he thought of doing it at home...now as he have to drop geet home...

 

Geet sat there watching him...something in came to her and called him...maan ...

 

Maan preferred to keep silent...but geet was geet...she called him again...maaannn...

 

Maan had no choice so he replied...bolo geet...

 

Geet - main aapse shaadi karoongi...abhi aapne kaha na ki main aapko Pasand hoon...is liye she said grinning...

 


Maan - how thoughtful geet...thank you...and again he turned...

 

Geet again called...maan ...

 

Maan - ab Kya hai. Geet...

 

Geet - Woh school...

 

Maan was irritated with her school jap...so she said in an irritated tone...Geeettt...

 

Geet. - plz bas ek sawal poochungi...plz

 

Maan - poocho...he was dreading what she might ask...and his thought came true with geet's next question...

 

Geet - Woh...Woh...Kya aap shaadi ke baad mujhe pyaar bhi timetable follow karke hi  karenge...

 

 

 



Rest is upto ur imagination guys...Maan ka kya reaction hoga...aur reaction ka action kya hoga...




Plz ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes...Over to u guys...Plz leave ur opinion...Embarrassed



Thank you valli30 and rashmivaish for the picsEmbarrassed...love you girls...Hug


Will update Humsaaya in a day or two...Big smile



 

Edited by -indu- - 2014-06-10T04:47:32Z
Posted: 2014-06-06T03:32:06Z

Wah tom ji Timetable loveWink

poor maan talli geet ko samhalne ki kosish kar raha haiTongue
MSK school mai nahi janaLOL
But mujhe pasand hai MSK schoolEmbarrassed
pyar bhi time table se karengeROFL
maan ka tho hosh ud gaya Shocked
 loved it
Edited by valli30 - 2014-06-10T04:30:09Z
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Posted: 2014-06-06T03:41:15Z
50 % achcha hai
baki ka 50% complete hone ke baad achchha lagega
matlab best ho jaayega 

kab de rahi ho last part
Oye
hum yahaan imagin karne ke liye nahin  padhne ke liye baithe hain
aur utna hi padha jitna tumne likha 
ab ye bataao ki Maan ne kaise react kiya
agar hum hi imagin akrenge to tumhara OS likhne ka kya fayda?
to ye wala comment sirg complainnt karne ke liye hai 
OSke baare me comment tab milega jab tum isko complete karogiTongueTongue
Edited by rashmivaish - 2014-06-08T04:06:09Z
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Posted: 2014-06-06T03:56:03Z
awesome!!! a different flavor of love.I would love to read more if you write. It's really good!!
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Posted: 2014-06-06T04:13:18Z
congrats dear...
dear post the link when u update in this thread plz...
FF Daily Updates 11
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Posted: 2014-06-06T04:21:05Z
lovely..

Awsum Maneet.
n ur awsum work Heart

keep working on them.. Embarrassed

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Posted: 2014-06-06T04:40:51Z
awsom os loved it
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Posted: 2014-06-06T04:48:11Z
timetable for pyaar
really maan i dont blame her for thinking what she is
so funny that was
poor maan
stuck with drunk geet
phew that was something right maan
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